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He tells me he loves me I’m his fantasy woman, the girl of his dreams Now I’m so huge I can no longer function normally Oh my man is so so wonderful, cares for me 24/7 Chocolate, cakes, candy always at hand Meals so huge they would feed a family for a week Says he adores the way I look … just a few more pounds The bigger I get the more desirable he finds me Tells me I’m so sexy – no one ever said that to me before I know my health is at risk Doctors tell me if I gain any more weight I could die But he says he loves me … Food Can't Live with it can't live without it Contest – Sponsor Debbie Guzzi 07~17~15 Poem based on a documentary called ‘Fat Girls and Feeders’

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Debbie Guzzi

Date: 7/24/2015 9:35:00 PM

So much is attached to food! Thanks for making all aware of this! Congrad's Light & Love

Jan Allison
Date: 7/24/2015 9:43:00 PM

I was delighted to place in your contest Debbie - thanks for the inspirational contest theme:-) hugs Jan xx

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 7/24/2015 11:30:00 AM

this is another interesting take on the theme, based on something real, which is always good - congrats on your win, my friend :)

Jan Allison
Date: 7/24/2015 12:56:00 PM

Oh Charlotte it is so lovely to see you back:-) yes it is a very a very sad scenario - I think the title sums it up perfectly:-( Hugs jan xx

Eve Roper

Date: 7/23/2015 5:15:00 PM

Sad poem, Jan, but some men do like their women that way. Congratulations on your win Hugs Eve

Jan Allison
Date: 7/23/2015 5:18:00 PM

I agree Eve sadly the poor vulnerable women feed the men's desires and risk their own health in the process:-( hugs Jan xx

John Lawless

Date: 7/23/2015 11:07:00 AM

...trying to become what love demands. Very ingenious write and a unique take on the contest theme.

Jan Allison
Date: 7/23/2015 11:10:00 AM

Thanks John I was delighted to place in the contest - I watched the documentary some years ago ...it is a very sad situation:-( hugs jan xx

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 7/23/2015 4:28:00 AM

Jan, I love this poems in three reasons: 1) in it's some intriguing way you present: a love??? portrayed by a man; 2) a woman who seems to be blind because of love but gaining starting to realize that she is at risk.. open-ended: good way to end :D; 3) the imagery that somehow it excite me to go on further... COngratulations!!! hugs!!! ~Olive ELoisa ..=')

Jan Allison
Date: 7/23/2015 6:26:00 AM

Thanks Olive - I think the title says a lot too - it is such a sad sad situation - it is fuelling his 'desire' to feed her and her need for love which she never had before because of her size but she finally realises his 'love' is putting her life in jeopardy but she simply can't escape:-( hugs Jan xx

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 7/23/2015 1:14:00 AM

Love ur different take n writing style Jan! Congrats on big win!

Jan Allison
Date: 7/23/2015 2:05:00 AM

Thanks so much Dr Sharma:-) hugs Jan xx

Skat A

Date: 7/23/2015 12:23:00 AM

Jan, Congratulations on your win, I was amazed by all poem. Forever **SKAT**

Jan Allison
Date: 7/23/2015 2:04:00 AM

Thanks Skat:-) hugs Jan xx

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 7/19/2015 9:01:00 AM

superb humour Jan I love it gl in contest hugs 7

Jan Allison
Date: 7/19/2015 9:05:00 AM

Thanks for dropping by Shadow:-) hugs Jan xx

James Fraser

Date: 7/18/2015 3:41:00 PM

The sad thing is, such is in society, quite incredible to be honest. Good luck in Debbie's contest, hugs//James xx

Jan Allison
Date: 7/18/2015 3:53:00 PM

I remember watching the documentary some years ago James and it has stuck in my mind - guess my take on the theme is a little out of the box - I'm not sure what Debbie will make of it but I have to go with the flow of my pen:-) hugs Jan xx

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 7/18/2015 8:10:00 AM

How did the women feel in this situation? Human behaviour is endlessly fascinating. This is a sad commentary on how people manipulate others. Well written Jan.

Jan Allison
Date: 7/18/2015 8:12:00 AM

I can't begin to imagine how they feel Richard - as you say fascinating but oh so sad:-(Hugs jan xx

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 7/18/2015 5:55:00 AM

" Nothing in Excess" was Apollo's second maxim. Each one should not surpass the limits their organism set and if someone loves us truly then for us s/he will think first. You have presented it very vividly and convincing, dear Jan, a seven is due. Good luck!

Jan Allison
Date: 7/18/2015 6:50:00 AM

Very wise words Demetrios - my mum says 'everything in moderation'. this 'feeding with love' is such a sad scenario and it is sadly true:-( hugs jan xx

Afolabi Muideen

Date: 7/18/2015 5:15:00 AM

A powerful well constructed piece, this is extremely an intrigue write. A leeson for those who embraced eating a lot, one must not kill oneself in guise of love, lol excellent write JAN.........A.M.

Jan Allison
Date: 7/18/2015 5:22:00 AM

I think these poor vulnerable women are totally helpless Afolabi - it is a sad sad scenario and unfortunately it is true:-( Hugs Jan xx

Nandita Das

Date: 7/18/2015 12:36:00 AM

Loved reading this very well written poem...7. This is so common over here, only the roles are reversed. (I have heard the saying that the way to a man's heart is through his stomach.)

Jan Allison
Date: 7/18/2015 4:33:00 AM

I've heard the saying too Nandita -but I think scenario goes deeper than that it is a fetish with these men - I find it so so sad:-( hugs jan xx

John Hardison

Date: 7/18/2015 12:08:00 AM

I hear tell it's not how big and round but how Love goes around live or die. Such a contest life. A big 7 for a well put plight. A 'true' heavy weight in it? Lots of luck in the contest.

Jan Allison
Date: 7/18/2015 4:30:00 AM

Thanks John it is actually such a sad poem - I'm not sure what Debbie will make of my take on the theme but I have to go with the flow of my pen:-) Hugs jan xx

Arthur Vaso

Date: 7/17/2015 11:31:00 PM

I am looking for a women who wants to feed me like that!!!!! :) hugs

Jan Allison
Date: 7/18/2015 4:24:00 AM

LOL:-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/17/2015 9:52:00 PM

Jan, I know someone like this (the male part). I guess it is just how they think. They find the woman so attractive this way. I don't get it, but wow, you sure wrote very well about it. I enjoyed this one and the picture you put with it.

Jan Allison
Date: 7/18/2015 4:22:00 AM

Thanks Andrea - I find it quite sick and sad that someone can do this for their own gratification - not sure what Debbie will think of my take on the food theme - but it is acutally about the fear of the food and the fact it could kill but being so controlled by this man and his 'love' the cycle goes on. :-) Hugs jan xx

Joseph May

Date: 7/17/2015 8:45:00 PM

A deadly kind of love...Powerful write Jan...best wishes...hugs

Jan Allison
Date: 7/18/2015 4:16:00 AM

Thanks Joseph - not sure what Debbie will make of my take on the theme but I have to go with the flow of my pen:-) Hugs jan xx