Fate

"Fate is something which we never ask for or desire to happen, but which takes place, sometimes by forces outside our control and sometimes through our own actions"
                                                                                 By Poet

Dizzy, we stand at the edge of a precipice,
Looking, in fear on our Earth
Boiling, bubbling, and steaming
With streams of blood flowing

Warplanes blanket the sky.
Volcanic sounds pierce the ear.
Booms of gun shots rent the air
Lightning passes blinding the eye
A sword dangles on a thread
Ready to fall anytime over our heads.
Might dissipates men’s sight

From everywhere rises the bleak cry for help

Can we avert our fate…? 
Alas, it is a fate of our own making!

Friends, toll the bells!
Fall on our knees and pray,
To all Gods we can call.
We are on the brink of an apocalypse.

For the time being, we are on a truce.
But soon the war cry would sound,
And we have to succumb to our dreadful fate.


Feb. 17. 2023

~ Placed Second~

Writing Challenge- F words Poetry Contest
Sponsor- Constance La France

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023



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Date: 2/23/2023 9:25:00 AM
Dear Valsa, I hear your cries; I have cried, also. I don't know what else to do but write...Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 2/22/2023 1:42:00 PM
Congratulations on your poem being on Constance's winners' list. Way to go. Sara
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Date: 2/21/2023 5:27:00 PM
Only one God…still Congratulations! The imagery from the warplanes on… fantastic!
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Date: 2/21/2023 12:23:00 PM
Valsa, indeed what goes around comes around and the chickens always come home to roost. I love the way you pointed out the power of prayer that invites God into all the chaos we have created -God, the great problem solver and healer. Wonderful, as always, with many lines that challenge us to think! Now there's a concept! Congratulations on your stunning write dear friend! Blessings and prayers as we rest beside the weary road!
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Date: 2/21/2023 9:17:00 AM
Valsa, a wonderful poem and congratulations on your win my Writing Challenge - F Words, well done, I like your quote also, blessings, Constance
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Date: 2/21/2023 8:57:00 PM
Thanks a lot dear Constance for organizing the contest and giving us this opportunity ! Glad you liked my poem.
Date: 2/21/2023 4:30:00 AM
Back with big congratulations on a wonderful poem and a great winner achievement, Dear Valsa.
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Date: 2/17/2023 8:28:00 PM
How true, but OMG, I have to say I totally enjoyed yours. Great work, so fantastic!
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Date: 2/17/2023 4:59:00 PM
"Alas, it is a fate of our own making!" Even in the new system, we will be given a chance, but fate has it that man will misbehave once again. An intriguing write, Valsa!
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Date: 2/17/2023 12:31:00 PM
Like you say, we create our own fate. Karma. God does not send bolts of lightning out of the sky to punish or teach us a lesson. Our behavior attracts the polls of Karma. Free Will. It is awesome. And destructive when used wrongly. God has tears in His Eyes. I think. But what do I know? Only sense in my soul.
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Date: 2/17/2023 6:12:00 AM
Such is life-- a contemplative write, Valsa. Your poem gives shape and meaning to consequences of fate. Best to you.
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Date: 2/17/2023 5:38:00 AM
Valsa, this is just fantastic work that is a delight to read. Your work is made even more beautiful by the wondrous diction and metaphors you employ. Our destiny is in the heavens, and people everywhere must devote their hearts totally back to God. Win Big
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Date: 2/17/2023 1:36:00 AM
- Great written, Valsa ... reach for the sky and find out what fate has in store for you - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs
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Date: 2/17/2023 1:04:00 AM
a fate of our own making: And it all began with Cain and has never stopped. We blame others for our misdeeds. Best for a win.
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Date: 2/17/2023 12:17:00 AM
True to life. Good one Valsa :)
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