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Fancy a Quickie

His arm snaked round her tiny waist She asked him what is your great haste The glint in his eye Needed no reply Kids are out – there’s no time to waste! 19th February 2015
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015


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Date: 2/28/2015 12:50:00 PM
Love it Jan!.
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Jan Allison
Date: 2/28/2015 1:01:00 PM
LOL and you like the poem too lol:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 2/20/2015 7:27:00 PM
It's as simple as lust itself straight to to point two minds conjoined. Well done and for the record quite enticing -Jerry
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Date: 2/20/2015 7:41:00 PM
LOL Thanks Jerry I do try and write with humour whenever i can:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 2/20/2015 11:28:00 AM
What I like about your poetry Jan is like mine, the variety you offer the reader, now that's talent. Now for that quickie, mmm, better behave, mega hugs 4U, James xxx
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Date: 2/20/2015 11:47:00 AM
Thanks:-) I couldn't write in one style - I like to challenge myself to new forms and subjects the contests give me this opportunity but i also like to write just for fun - I simply have to go with the flow of my pen:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 2/20/2015 12:43:00 AM
Is this where I say YES?
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Jan Allison
Date: 2/20/2015 3:35:00 AM
ha ha ha Arthur - I am surprised it has taken so long to get that comment lol:-) Thanks for making me smile:-) Hugs Jan xxxx
Date: 2/19/2015 6:40:00 PM
YOUr on a roll..watch out.. I think its a minimum day....lol. BG
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Date: 2/19/2015 6:43:00 PM
LOl Barbara:-) I try and write with humour whenever I can - am on a limerick spree at the moment:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 2/19/2015 6:22:00 PM
nicely done, jan! very clever!
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Date: 2/19/2015 6:23:00 PM
Thanks Ilene:-) I'm on a bit of a spree writing limericks at the moment lol:-) there are more to come:-) Hugs Jan xxx
Date: 2/19/2015 4:20:00 PM
I thought you already had another quickie this week! I enjoyed this write....bet she did, too:) hugs // paul
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Date: 2/19/2015 4:25:00 PM
Lol Paul I wrote/part wrote 8 poems in an hour yesterday - 4 limericks still need a final line to be added - you have been warned lol:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 2/19/2015 2:28:00 PM
Hhmmm...Grin...Lol!! :) john.
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Date: 2/19/2015 2:49:00 PM
Thanks John:-) Hugs Jan xxx
Date: 2/19/2015 12:58:00 PM
made me smile... most of us has had an instance such as this... lov n hugs, nad!
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Date: 2/19/2015 1:02:00 PM
Thanks for the lovely comment Nad it made me smile:-) Hugs jan xx
Date: 2/19/2015 11:34:00 AM
ohhh, this is sweetly wicked and fun, jan... righ on track!.. huggs
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Date: 2/19/2015 12:19:00 PM
Thanks for the lovely comment Nette:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 2/19/2015 11:28:00 AM
Been there...heard that...done that! ;) It does have its charm...at times. Lovely write
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Date: 2/19/2015 12:19:00 PM
LOL Eileen you do make me smile:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 2/19/2015 10:24:00 AM
Lately...dear, Jan, you offef us a lot of delicious plates! Delightful writin!
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Date: 2/19/2015 12:19:00 PM
I try to amuse when I write Demetrios and limericks seem to be rolling off my pen at the moment:-) I wrote another 4 yesterday all have one more line to finish - be warned lol:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 2/19/2015 10:22:00 AM
A totally different and interesting approach to your poetic skills, a sassy limerick. I like it! Emile. #7
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Date: 2/19/2015 12:17:00 PM
I love the limerick form Emile - it appeals to my British sense of humour:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 2/19/2015 9:46:00 AM
Lol...make sure you lock the door....hugs Tim
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Date: 2/19/2015 9:47:00 AM
LOL Doesn't apply to me Tim:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 2/19/2015 9:20:00 AM
I do live it, but I meant to say love it.
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Date: 2/19/2015 9:28:00 AM
:-) thanks xx
Date: 2/19/2015 9:18:00 AM
I live it!
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Date: 2/19/2015 9:28:00 AM
lol thanks Gwen:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 2/19/2015 8:42:00 AM
Cute!
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Date: 2/19/2015 9:27:00 AM
Thanks Richard:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 2/19/2015 8:38:00 AM
Allison the alligator......
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Date: 2/19/2015 9:27:00 AM
I cant think of a snappy answer to that one Rajat;-) lol Hugs Jan xx
Date: 2/19/2015 8:26:00 AM
Still the one form I cannot seem to master "the limerick". You how ever are a master. I thought that this was really good, it gave me a smile. Thankyou Jan. love Shane xxx
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Date: 2/19/2015 9:26:00 AM
I wrote/part wrote 8 poems in an hour last night Shane 4 of the other limericks just need the final line adding - you have been warned lol:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 2/19/2015 7:45:00 AM
Oh my, it is sizzling hot! Good luck in contest Jan xx
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Date: 2/19/2015 9:25:00 AM
Its not for a contest just for fun:-)hugs Jan xx
Date: 2/19/2015 7:10:00 AM
Jan, so sweet and cute, love it and best of luck in the contest with this wonderful limerick and thanks for visiting my poem oh the tears and for your kind comment ~~
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Date: 2/19/2015 9:25:00 AM
This is just a fun write Broken Wings - I don't thing there are any limerick contests except the spring one :-) I have 4 more limericks I wrote last night - just need the final line adding - you have been warned lol:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 2/19/2015 6:12:00 AM
Your limerick is really beguiling and certainly has left me smiling we tried it before but on a hard wooden floor much more comfortable for her than tiling x
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Date: 2/19/2015 9:23:00 AM
I hope you post that lol made me giggle Viv:-) Hugs Jan xxx
Date: 2/19/2015 6:02:00 AM
- A sweet one, Jan - Love it !! (7) - I wish you a wonderful day :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/19/2015 9:22:00 AM
Thanks Anne Lise:-) Hugs jan xx
Date: 2/19/2015 5:42:00 AM
Cute and adorable Jan, Love this. *7* Have a great day. Janet
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Date: 2/19/2015 9:22:00 AM
Thanks Janet :-) I wrote/part wrote 8 poems last night in an hour! 4 of the limericks just need the final line adding - you have been warned there is more to come lol:-) Hugs Jan xx
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