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Fancy a Quickie

His arm snaked round her tiny waist
She asked him what is your great haste
The glint in his eye
Needed no reply
Kids are out – there’s no time to waste!

19th February 2015

Copyright © Jan Allison | Year Posted 2015

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February 28, 2015 at 12:50 PM

Love it Jan!.

February 28, 2015 at 1:01 PM

LOL and you like the poem too lol:-) hugs Jan xx

February 20, 2015 at 7:27 PM

It's as simple as lust itself straight to to point two minds conjoined. Well done and for the record quite enticing -Jerry

February 20, 2015 at 7:41 PM

LOL Thanks Jerry I do try and write with humour whenever i can:-) Hugs Jan xx

February 20, 2015 at 11:28 AM

What I like about your poetry Jan is like mine, the variety you offer the reader, now that's talent. Now for that quickie, mmm, better behave, mega hugs 4U, James xxx

February 20, 2015 at 11:47 AM

Thanks:-) I couldn't write in one style - I like to challenge myself to new forms and subjects the contests give me this opportunity but i also like to write just for fun - I simply have to go with the flow of my pen:-) Hugs Jan xx

February 20, 2015 at 12:43 AM

Is this where I say YES?

February 20, 2015 at 3:35 AM

ha ha ha Arthur - I am surprised it has taken so long to get that comment lol:-) Thanks for making me smile:-) Hugs Jan xxxx

Barbara Gorelick

February 19, 2015 at 6:40 PM

YOUr on a roll..watch out.. I think its a minimum day....lol. BG

February 19, 2015 at 6:43 PM

LOl Barbara:-) I try and write with humour whenever I can - am on a limerick spree at the moment:-) Hugs Jan xx

February 19, 2015 at 6:22 PM

nicely done, jan! very clever!

February 19, 2015 at 6:23 PM

Thanks Ilene:-) I'm on a bit of a spree writing limericks at the moment lol:-) there are more to come:-) Hugs Jan xxx

February 19, 2015 at 4:20 PM

I thought you already had another quickie this week! I enjoyed this write....bet she did, too:) hugs // paul

February 19, 2015 at 4:25 PM

Lol Paul I wrote/part wrote 8 poems in an hour yesterday - 4 limericks still need a final line to be added - you have been warned lol:-) Hugs Jan xx

February 19, 2015 at 2:28 PM

Hhmmm...Grin...Lol!! :) john.

February 19, 2015 at 2:49 PM

Thanks John:-) Hugs Jan xxx

February 19, 2015 at 12:58 PM

made me smile... most of us has had an instance such as this... lov n hugs, nad!

February 19, 2015 at 1:02 PM

Thanks for the lovely comment Nad it made me smile:-) Hugs jan xx

February 19, 2015 at 11:34 AM

ohhh, this is sweetly wicked and fun, jan... righ on track!.. huggs

February 19, 2015 at 12:19 PM

Thanks for the lovely comment Nette:-) Hugs Jan xx

Eileen Manassian

February 19, 2015 at 11:28 AM

Been there...heard that...done that! ;) It does have its charm...at times. Lovely write

February 19, 2015 at 12:19 PM

LOL Eileen you do make me smile:-) Hugs Jan xx

Demetrios Trifiatis

February 19, 2015 at 10:24 AM

Lately...dear, Jan, you offef us a lot of delicious plates! Delightful writin!

February 19, 2015 at 12:19 PM

I try to amuse when I write Demetrios and limericks seem to be rolling off my pen at the moment:-) I wrote another 4 yesterday all have one more line to finish - be warned lol:-) Hugs Jan xx

February 19, 2015 at 10:22 AM

A totally different and interesting approach to your poetic skills, a sassy limerick. I like it! Emile. #7

February 19, 2015 at 12:17 PM

I love the limerick form Emile - it appeals to my British sense of humour:-) Hugs Jan xx

February 19, 2015 at 9:46 AM

Lol...make sure you lock the door....hugs Tim

February 19, 2015 at 9:47 AM

LOL Doesn't apply to me Tim:-) Hugs Jan xx

Gwen Benita Mason Gibbs

February 19, 2015 at 9:20 AM

I do live it, but I meant to say love it.

February 19, 2015 at 9:28 AM

:-) thanks xx

Gwen Benita Mason Gibbs

February 19, 2015 at 9:18 AM

I live it!

February 19, 2015 at 9:28 AM

lol thanks Gwen:-) Hugs Jan xx

Richard Lamoureux

February 19, 2015 at 8:42 AM

Cute!

February 19, 2015 at 9:27 AM

Thanks Richard:-) Hugs Jan xx

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

February 19, 2015 at 8:38 AM

Allison the alligator......

February 19, 2015 at 9:27 AM

I cant think of a snappy answer to that one Rajat;-) lol Hugs Jan xx

February 19, 2015 at 8:26 AM

Still the one form I cannot seem to master "the limerick". You how ever are a master. I thought that this was really good, it gave me a smile. Thankyou Jan. love Shane xxx

February 19, 2015 at 9:26 AM

I wrote/part wrote 8 poems in an hour last night Shane 4 of the other limericks just need the final line adding - you have been warned lol:-) Hugs Jan xx

Theresa Stephens

February 19, 2015 at 7:45 AM

Oh my, it is sizzling hot! Good luck in contest Jan xx

February 19, 2015 at 9:25 AM

Its not for a contest just for fun:-)hugs Jan xx

Constance La France

February 19, 2015 at 7:10 AM

Jan, so sweet and cute, love it and best of luck in the contest with this wonderful limerick and thanks for visiting my poem oh the tears and for your kind comment ~~

February 19, 2015 at 9:25 AM

This is just a fun write Broken Wings - I don't thing there are any limerick contests except the spring one :-) I have 4 more limericks I wrote last night - just need the final line adding - you have been warned lol:-) Hugs Jan xx

February 19, 2015 at 6:12 AM

Your limerick is really beguiling and certainly has left me smiling we tried it before but on a hard wooden floor much more comfortable for her than tiling x

February 19, 2015 at 9:23 AM

I hope you post that lol made me giggle Viv:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Anne-Lise Andresen

February 19, 2015 at 6:02 AM

- A sweet one, Jan - Love it !! (7) - I wish you a wonderful day :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

February 19, 2015 at 9:22 AM

Thanks Anne Lise:-) Hugs jan xx

February 19, 2015 at 5:42 AM

Cute and adorable Jan, Love this. *7* Have a great day. Janet

February 19, 2015 at 9:22 AM

Thanks Janet :-) I wrote/part wrote 8 poems last night in an hour! 4 of the limericks just need the final line adding - you have been warned there is more to come lol:-) Hugs Jan xx

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