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Fall To Pieces

bountiful brown leaves blot the ground with soft wreckage autumn's textured rust Composed January 2022

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Bill Baker

Date: 2/13/2022 9:34:00 PM

Nice Fall Haiku, Brian.

Brian Sambourne
Date: 2/14/2022 6:51:00 AM

My appreciation for your stop by + comment, Bill. Hope that you are well. Cheers Brian

Valsa George

Date: 2/7/2022 10:02:00 PM

Brown leaves..... autumn's rust.... ! Brings in powerful images ! Great Haiku dear friend !

Brian Sambourne
Date: 2/8/2022 5:31:00 AM

Thank you, Valsa, for your support of my Haiku. Best wishes, Brian

Valerie Staton

Date: 2/2/2022 10:28:00 AM

Great imagery!

Brian Sambourne
Date: 2/2/2022 11:10:00 AM

Thank you, Valerie for your affirmative note. Best wishes, Brian

Andrew John

Date: 2/1/2022 1:20:00 AM

I'm fond of haikus (is that the correct plural of the word?), and this is a good one. Love it. I must write some more. I think I have only four or five.

Brian Sambourne
Date: 2/1/2022 6:03:00 AM

Hello Andrew, Thank you for your stop by + positive take on my 3 liner. Definitely, take up your pen + hit the haiku road. Best wishes as you write. Sincerely, Brian

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/30/2022 8:45:00 AM

Good one. I enjoyed reading it today. Sara

Brian Sambourne
Date: 1/30/2022 9:40:00 AM

Thanks very much Sara. Brian gave the piece a second wind after a recent NA elsewhere. Best wishes, Brian

Deb M

Date: 1/29/2022 5:57:00 AM

Beautifully written and said Brian. Debx

Brian Sambourne
Date: 1/29/2022 8:29:00 AM

Greetings Deb, I appreciate your kind remarks + stop by. Hope that you are well. Sincerely, Brian

Christuraj Alex

Date: 1/26/2022 10:05:00 PM

"autumn's textured rust" - Great. Beautiful haiku. Congratulations!

Brian Sambourne
Date: 1/27/2022 6:06:00 AM

Greetings Christuraj, Thank you for giving my haiku the thumbs up. Be well. Sincerest regards, Brian

Paul Callus

Date: 1/21/2022 2:31:00 PM

Both the imagery and sprinkling of alliteration are worthy of note, Brian. ~ Regards // paul

Brian Sambourne
Date: 1/21/2022 2:41:00 PM

Thanks very much, Paul. I appreciate your affirmative note. All the best, Brian

Joe Dimino

Date: 1/20/2022 10:52:00 AM

I also see beauty in transformation, colors changing, morphing into new surprises -- who knows, maybe transforming into something different that is equally or perhaps even more enchanting. I love the patina on copper and brass. Excellent, thought provoking words. Joe.

Brian Sambourne
Date: 1/20/2022 11:12:00 AM

My appreciation for your fine words, Joe. Transformation (as u note) "morphing into new surprises" is a reward of living. Thank you for your insights. Brian

Paulette Calasibetta

Date: 1/19/2022 7:54:00 AM

Stunning Haiku... Good luck in the contest! :) Paulette

Brian Sambourne
Date: 1/19/2022 8:00:00 AM

Most appreciative of your stop by + supportive comment. Hope you are well, Paulette. Best wishes, Brian

Bill Baker

Date: 1/18/2022 4:13:00 PM

I especially like the last line. Excellent finish, Brian. Have a great day! Bill

Brian Sambourne
Date: 1/18/2022 6:19:00 PM

Thanks very much, Bill. I appreciate your positive take on my 3 liner. Be well. Brian