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Fall To Pieces

bountiful brown leaves
blot the ground with soft wreckage
autumn's textured rust












Composed January 2022

autumnearthnaturehaiku

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Bill Baker

February 13, 2022 at 9:34 PM

Nice Fall Haiku, Brian.

Brian Sambourne

February 14, 2022 at 6:51 AM

My appreciation for your stop by + comment, Bill. Hope that you are well. Cheers Brian

Valsa George

February 7, 2022 at 10:02 PM

Brown leaves..... autumn's rust.... ! Brings in powerful images ! Great Haiku dear friend !

Brian Sambourne

February 8, 2022 at 5:31 AM

Thank you, Valsa, for your support of my Haiku. Best wishes, Brian

Valerie Staton

February 2, 2022 at 10:28 AM

Great imagery!

Brian Sambourne

February 2, 2022 at 11:10 AM

Thank you, Valerie for your affirmative note. Best wishes, Brian

Andrew John

February 1, 2022 at 1:20 AM

I'm fond of haikus (is that the correct plural of the word?), and this is a good one. Love it. I must write some more. I think I have only four or five.

Brian Sambourne

February 1, 2022 at 6:03 AM

Hello Andrew, Thank you for your stop by + positive take on my 3 liner. Definitely, take up your pen + hit the haiku road. Best wishes as you write. Sincerely, Brian

Sara Kendrick

January 30, 2022 at 8:45 AM

Good one. I enjoyed reading it today. Sara

Brian Sambourne

January 30, 2022 at 9:40 AM

Thanks very much Sara. Brian gave the piece a second wind after a recent NA elsewhere. Best wishes, Brian

Deb M

January 29, 2022 at 5:57 AM

Beautifully written and said Brian. Debx

Brian Sambourne

January 29, 2022 at 8:29 AM

Greetings Deb, I appreciate your kind remarks + stop by. Hope that you are well. Sincerely, Brian

Christuraj Alex

January 26, 2022 at 10:05 PM

"autumn's textured rust" - Great. Beautiful haiku. Congratulations!

Brian Sambourne

January 27, 2022 at 6:06 AM

Greetings Christuraj, Thank you for giving my haiku the thumbs up. Be well. Sincerest regards, Brian

Paul Callus

January 21, 2022 at 2:31 PM

Both the imagery and sprinkling of alliteration are worthy of note, Brian. ~ Regards // paul

Brian Sambourne

January 21, 2022 at 2:41 PM

Thanks very much, Paul. I appreciate your affirmative note. All the best, Brian

Joseph P. DiMino

January 20, 2022 at 10:52 AM

I also see beauty in transformation, colors changing, morphing into new surprises -- who knows, maybe transforming into something different that is equally or perhaps even more enchanting. I love the patina on copper and brass. Excellent, thought provoking words. Joe.

Brian Sambourne

January 20, 2022 at 11:12 AM

My appreciation for your fine words, Joe. Transformation (as u note) "morphing into new surprises" is a reward of living. Thank you for your insights. Brian