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Fall Tango

Autumn’s foliage Dancing briskly to the earth – Rainbow adorns paths * For Rick's Contest

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Kash Poet

Date: 5/31/2011 12:19:00 PM

Excellent Haiku with nice imagery...enjoyed.

John Freeman

Date: 9/12/2010 2:07:00 PM

I Like it! Smile! Agape, Moses

Andrew Crisci

Date: 9/7/2010 9:06:00 PM

Big congratulations on your winning entry, Carolyn! It is very realistic and lovely. May you have many more in the near future. With great admiration and love, Andrew.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/7/2010 4:04:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Carolyn in Rick Parise's contest "A Leaf In The Wind (Autumn)". Love, Carol

Francine Roberts

Date: 9/6/2010 4:45:00 PM

beautiful image, congrats on your HM in the contest

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 9/6/2010 2:29:00 PM

very nice touch of the rainbow, Carolyn! congrats to you

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/6/2010 11:21:00 AM

Congratulations to my fellow HM poet here. The rainbow path is a lovely image. LUv, Andrea

Wilma Neels

Date: 9/6/2010 4:45:00 AM

Carolyn, congratulations on your HM in Rick's contest, my friend.. Hope you are having a fantastic time away,, love Wilma

Tahera Mannan

Date: 9/5/2010 9:04:00 PM

Many congratulations for HM on this lovely work.

Audrey Haick

Date: 9/5/2010 8:02:00 PM

My congratulations on the HM in Rick's "A Leaf In the Wind" Contest, dear Carolyn. Hope you're having a great time. Love, Audrey

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/5/2010 7:09:00 PM

Congratulations on the HM win in the contest, Carolyn

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 9/5/2010 5:05:00 PM

I need a rainbow right about now! congrats on your lovely poem..Love..BG

Joyce Johnson

Date: 9/5/2010 4:52:00 PM

I like this one a lot. I did it again, I wrote one but never got it entered. Oh well it probably wouldn't have won any way. I had my eye appointment this week and my eye showed improvement so they jut told me to keep on with the drops and they will see in three weeks i I have to have any procedures. Goody. Hope all is going well with you. Did they remove your cancer? Love, joyce

James Fraser

Date: 9/5/2010 6:35:00 AM

I can see a collage of ochres, yellows reds and browns adorning the paths. Gorgeous Haiku Carolyn and good luck in Rick's contest >> James

Marvin Anderson

Date: 9/3/2010 6:39:00 AM

Very nice.

Gerard Keogh Jr.

Date: 9/2/2010 5:30:00 PM

Good luck, my dear. And you are very wholesome and pretty> And talented, too. ow I sound like an old Cary Grant farce. Regards, Gerard.

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 9/1/2010 4:57:00 PM

I love this one, Carolyn. So few words and such a beautiful image comes to mind. Good luck in the contest. Love, Dane

T.A. Skyles-Theoklapoet

Date: 9/1/2010 2:16:00 PM

Love this fall is a beautiful time of year.Thanks Carolyn for the sweet,kind comment and my prayers will always be with you.Teresa

Liz Walsh

Date: 9/1/2010 8:34:00 AM

You have a real 'handle' on the Haiku, Carolyn - they are a wonderful form of expression! Liz

Sarah Hales

Date: 9/1/2010 7:27:00 AM

RAINBOW .....OOPS XX

Sarah Hales

Date: 9/1/2010 7:26:00 AM

beautiful love those words rinbow adorns paths ... sarah x

Sarah Hales

Date: 9/1/2010 12:16:00 AM

This is great xxx Thank you for your kind remarks on my win ...i was so smiling as have nt won before ha ha ha sweet comments you made xx sarah x

Ralph Taylor

Date: 8/31/2010 6:45:00 PM

Outstanding entry, Carolyn. Excellent haiku. Enjoyed. Good luck. Thanks for your kind words. We our going on our 9th Cruise on Nov 27th on the Oasis (worlds largest cruise ship)We go every year for the last 9 years around the same time each year. I'm getting so excited as its my very favorite thing to do. Makes my heart sing! luv Ralph

Harry Horsman

Date: 8/31/2010 5:19:00 PM

beautifull haiku, Carolyn, good luck in contest. Harry

John Loving Iii

Date: 8/31/2010 2:54:00 PM

almost feel it comming. john