Fall

the harvest begins rewards of summer labor grand golden colors warm and mellow evenings the time for preparation

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Donna Jones

Date: 6/29/2014 1:14:00 PM

Love this nice beauty Barbara... congratulations on your win...

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 6/29/2014 11:22:00 AM

Hi Barbara, this is such a beautifully descriptive write! Huge congratulations to you on your great win! Warmest regards.

Arlene Smith

Date: 6/29/2014 9:30:00 AM

congrats on a great win, Barbara.. Hugs.. Arlene

Elaine George

Date: 6/29/2014 6:19:00 AM

Wonderful tanka, Barbara. Many congrats on your win. Elaine

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 6/29/2014 3:50:00 AM

An excellent tanka Barbara! These look easy, but they are a challenge to write I think. Congratulations on your wonderful win!

Barbara Gorelick
Date: 6/29/2014 9:40:00 AM

Thank you Connie, good to see you stopping by.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/28/2014 11:00:00 PM

This was a sweet and simple one for the fall. I loved the warm and mellow evenings line! Congrats in my contest.

Barbara Gorelick
Date: 6/29/2014 9:41:00 AM

thanks my dear. I love that you comment on all your placements.

Leon Enriquez

Date: 6/16/2014 9:18:00 PM

Dear Barbara: Lovely and profound. Leon

Barbara Gorelick
Date: 6/16/2014 9:35:00 PM

Thank you Leon, Glad you stopped by. BG

Arlene Smith

Date: 6/16/2014 8:21:00 PM

I love the thought of harvest for fall, Barbara!.. Another "wish I had thought of that" moment!.. Hugs and good luck in the contest.. Arlene..