Fading

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Written on September 21, 2023

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Shadows fading into the light, breaking away from the darkness like joy, never pausing for the music who is the Son ~ quote by poet Shadows reach beneath the moments, quiet Silencing the breathe with a sense of light Falling soft, tender peace who’ll supply it Rustling melodies, rich hues of insight Silencing the breathe with a sense of light Soft glow of joy, inspired by the moon’s smile Rustling melodies, rich hues of insight Wonderful blessings make it all worthwhile Soft glow of joy, inspired by the moon’s smile Starry eyed lovers meet beyond night’s fears Wonderful blessings make it all worthwhile Despite moments when hearts are full of tears Starry eyed lovers meet beyond night’s fears Erasing doubts, assuring songs of grace Despite moments when hearts are full of tears Light is sure to shine when you’re face to face Erasing doubts, assuring songs of grace Life colors heart and soul in soft yearning Light is sure to shine when you’re face to face Silhouettes, music’s peace is discerning Life colors heart and soul in soft yearning In spite of doubts, kind spirits are restored Silhouettes, music’s peace is discerning Remember the feelings so much adored In spite of doubts, kind spirits are restored Falling soft, tender peace who’ll supply it Remember the feelings so much adored Shadows reach beneath the moments, quiet

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Constance La France

Date: 10/9/2023 2:30:00 PM

Gina, excellent writing and congratulations on your win in my contest, I love your image and quote, Constance

Silent One

Date: 9/22/2023 4:34:00 AM

You know I love a good pantoum and you are so good at these... It rhymes and flows really well and great message that is uplifting.. Loved this one..

James Marshall Goff

Date: 9/22/2023 4:24:00 AM

Hi Regina, my innocent youth drifts with your peaceful words, inspiring my focus

Christina Bowring

Date: 9/21/2023 11:43:00 PM

Gosh this is such a beautifully written poem dear Gina full of poetic mastery. Flows so incredibly well with perfect ending rhymes. Line after line of exquisite expression,’ Silencing the breathe with a sense of light’ , ‘Starry eyed lovers meet beyond night’s fears’’life colours heart and soul in soft yearning’.Glorious! Beautiful imagery. Loved it! Thank you for sharing.Hugs and smiles for a blessed day xx :)