Ezhno

(A string of haiku/senryu with triolet at the end)

in the forest’s dusk emerging with the shadows. . . . he who hides from day in the day’s cruel light a proud village massacred. . . one alone remains Ezhno is his name - the name means “solitary”. . . . for the dead he lives summoning spirits - Ezhno pipes a melody. . . . August’s moon-gold sky a round sturgeon moon drops low and big behind the trees. . . . as if to listen The flute’s wistful sound echo of the wind’s soft moan. . . . a blue gloaming He sits upon a mossy stone, a flute pressed to his lips and plays the notes with melancholy tone. He sits upon a mossy stone. No human hears him; he’s alone. No dear one there to meet his gaze, he sits upon a mossy stone, a flute pressed to his lips. . . and plays.
Written by Andrea Dietrich for the Contest "Tell HIS Story" Sponsored by ~Constance La France~A Rambling Poet~
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Horsman Avatar
November 30, 2012 at 9:06 AM
now i do like this wonder, obviously written from a picture, yet without, gives, an insight, lovely....
Horne Avatar
August 16, 2012 at 1:34 PM
I remember this gem - enjoyed reading again, my friend
Foulk Avatar
April 18, 2011 at 2:33 PM
thank you for commenting on window sill.
K. Avatar
March 27, 2011 at 9:15 AM
yay for you for getting a high placement for this one--how cool that you did a string of haiku then ended with a triolet-- very creative I think and that triolet sure made it haunting for me, way to go :) btw I sure missed out on soo much of your writes! hope you don't mind me commenting in installments, sweetie :) will get back on your other poems soon, ok :) hugs to you :)
Mehta Avatar
March 22, 2011 at 1:06 PM
Congratulations on the fourth place win in the contest of Constance, Andrea
Haick Avatar
March 22, 2011 at 12:16 PM
Congratulations on your amazing win in Constance's Contest, Andrea! Annalise
Freeman Avatar
March 22, 2011 at 11:30 AM
Always a pleasure to see you at the top,Andrea. Congratulations on your worthy poem's honored fourth place. Agape, Moses
Brown Avatar
March 22, 2011 at 11:13 AM
Congratulations on your super win Andrea in Constance's contest " Tell His Story". Love, Carol
Devonshire Avatar
March 22, 2011 at 8:57 AM
Andrea, loved this the first time I read it. Congratulations on your big win in the contest! Love, Carolyn
George   Avatar
March 22, 2011 at 8:34 AM
A mastrpiece of poetic forms all in harmony conveying a sensational story. Many congrat's Andrea on your Win. Lainie
Horne Avatar
March 22, 2011 at 8:11 AM
Lovely words - well done on your win : ) Jack
Richards Avatar
March 22, 2011 at 8:02 AM
This is beautiful Andrea...and cleverly uses the different forms of poetry! Well done!
Fillmore Avatar
March 22, 2011 at 7:59 AM
Congrats on your win Andrea for Tell His Story...enjoyed the read and loved the combined format of haiku/senryu and triolet...excellent write, enjoyed the triolet, see this as I read! Carol
Gorelick Avatar
March 22, 2011 at 6:33 AM
Loved it...it made me very sad..i guess that was the point..well done and congrats. BG
Maverick Avatar
March 22, 2011 at 12:02 AM
Great resulting win here Andrea, love the Write to.
Onclaud Avatar
March 21, 2011 at 11:41 PM
i loved this the firat time i read it, andie girl! my happy cheers to you for the special win :) huggs, nette
Mannan Avatar
March 21, 2011 at 8:59 PM
Avery beautiful story Andrea. Heartiest congratulations for this win.
Sweetheart Avatar
March 21, 2011 at 8:17 PM
Congrats Andrea on your wonderful win for this stunning entry in Tell His Story.. amazing story indeed luv.. and a great win to enjoy with luv..my friend..so enjoy..
Johnson Avatar
March 21, 2011 at 8:09 PM
lGreat combination of styles to creat a lovely poem. Congratulations Andrea
Neels Avatar
March 21, 2011 at 8:53 AM
Wow, you breath life into that picture Andrea, a real beauty so much enjoyed your entry.. Good luck for the contest, love Wilma
Babcock Avatar
March 20, 2011 at 1:48 PM
I really enjoyed reading this story. I can visualize him sitting on the moss playing the flute. Good luck in the contest. love phyl
Devonshire Avatar
March 20, 2011 at 11:43 AM
This poem is so beautiful it gave me chills, Andrea. What an imaginative interpretation of the picture. Surely a winner! Love, Carolyn
Knop Avatar
March 20, 2011 at 8:29 AM
Great write, Andrea! Wish you best of luck in Constance's contest!...Gert:)
Dufresne Avatar
March 20, 2011 at 5:34 AM
Masterful, Andrea. Classical. great job of it. Gotta be te wnner. thanks for your comment(not for contest...just writing what comes
Mehta Avatar
March 19, 2011 at 5:01 PM
Amazing flight of imagination on the theme of the picture well read, Andrea
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