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Even Angels Weep

Even angels weep, I'm on the brink of a torn raft holding lifelong gifts to sail, sail on with every heave… as the presence of light enfolds. Until the shoreline takes me home for as I rest , new morns will speak of journeys wild and gentle dreams… when all but pencils lie awake. Even The Angels Wept Contest Sponsor: John Lawless 5/5/2016

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Date: 5/8/2016 2:10:00 AM
congrats on your win in the contest with this beautiful and skillful written poem, I love it, well done
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Date: 5/7/2016 7:21:00 PM
Well done on Angel weeping congratulations on your win!
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Date: 5/7/2016 7:07:00 PM
this is beautiful, Nette. I can see how it won! Congrats to you.
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Date: 5/7/2016 7:07:00 PM
soupmail.
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Date: 5/7/2016 6:43:00 PM
Brilliant expression and tone of emotions!! Congrats Nette, for your placement in the contest!! ;-)
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Date: 5/7/2016 10:00:00 AM
Hi Nette, Congratulations on your win in the contest. As always there is beauty in what you write. There is always a gentle flow of words that sing your vision. As i do read i feel the content and style had to have this on the winners list. Such an excellent work Nette. This is a seven and into my faves. Hugs....Mike. XX
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Date: 5/7/2016 8:00:00 AM
Very well done Nette, congratulations...
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Date: 5/6/2016 10:36:00 PM
Nette, such a beautiful poem..really is...congrats on your placement in the contest :)-luloo
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Date: 5/6/2016 9:51:00 PM
Congrats on your win.... well done!
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Date: 5/6/2016 9:28:00 PM
Nette, great job with the blank verse. This reads with an eloquent smoothness drifting toward the shore. A lovely entry into the contest, thank you.
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Date: 5/6/2016 11:37:00 AM
Wondreful words!Loved it!
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Date: 5/5/2016 4:05:00 PM
A stormy start that ends joyfully. Celestial poem " when all but my quill lies awakes."
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Date: 5/5/2016 8:07:00 AM
- Beautiful ..... nobody knows what tomorrow will bring, Nette - Luck in contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/5/2016 6:20:00 AM
This is sooo touching, my dear. Beautiful. Hugs.
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