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Ethereal Lanterns

Gaze from my balcony I stand in serene reverie. A visualisation of reflective streams, a teardrop to stir bubbles in circles. A panoramic view of my neighbourhood, faint laughter, children arguing, streets bustling with cars. A wave of the stars poking through the dark clouds, a chant of meditation with visions crystal clear. Thoughts of distance soared. Life, health, strength. A peck from the sun to my cheeks, bolted with heat, an exhaustion like a burn to my being. Entrance of spring chills makes me grin. Amidst the chaos, battles, needs, losses and failures, a sacred feeling emanates where my heart beats in twos. A divine blend of graces at dusk, I align with my soul's course. Ruttle of leaves on withered trees, a flash of birds flip up the sky, a time of families, fellowship and ceremonies. Individuality and candle lights. Affirmations of protection and empowerment, a ritual in astral planes, I cheer with guardian angels and wisdom keepers. Not in perfection yet, the difference, mops in love, kindness, and hope. Situated next to the moon with her legs crossed above, aiming on-site to shoot. Every day a new yellow pad with pages of peace and silent glory where my spirit drives on Wheeless journeys. Where floating lamps of promises birthed healing. A stir to my faith, my fate leans conscious. Rain showers twice in 3 months, scarce like truths, the heat steams, a drops from within. Procrastination of projects stare all day as my frames do but I lay in a gentle embrace, I find solace. The choreography of flowers in tunes on a stage so pure, they bloom. A glow so green, it nurtures, hovers through the orange sunset, so helpless it breeds magic. I listen to the drums of dreams and inner lights, a scent in synchronization, it heals in significance, an awakening of gifted plants and herbs. A time I share in delight of my loved ones. To strangers, I lend a hand, a bite or two. To my enemies, an endless cheer to keep them closer. Staggered by fierce breeze driving through my skin, I watch the setting of cosmos and rainbow bridges, flowing in frequencies above. A shake of aurora borealis and australis in yantras of discovery and gratitude, I perch In peace as the world shivers in cease. Eyes shut but fragments of vast universal energy I see. A moment transcendent, so subtle, I linger free from every bite.

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Date: 4/9/2024 1:56:00 AM
This is so beautifully written. I love everything about this wonderful poem. Keep up the great work, Tonye. A pleasure to read. Congratulations on your winning placement! Thanks also for stopping by with Congrats :) Charlie
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Tonye George
Date: 4/9/2024 2:27:00 PM
Thank you Charles. I appreciate.
Date: 4/8/2024 6:49:00 PM
A moment transcendent, so subtle, I linger free from every bite. I truly believe you have reached the pyre of spirituality dearest poet, every word is bedecked and bejeweled, a masterpiece, written with God's approval I'm sure, loved it, a fav
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Tonye George
Date: 4/8/2024 7:50:00 PM
Thank you, Rose.
Date: 4/8/2024 6:09:00 AM
Splendid write, adorned with emotions. BIG congrats on your win, Tonye.
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Tonye George
Date: 4/8/2024 8:32:00 PM
Thank you Vijay.
Date: 4/8/2024 4:24:00 AM
Dear tonye, you really have a very individual and unique voice that stands out for me from the rest, i especially llve the way you’ve painted imagery and the flow of your lines truly stand out for me. I especially loved “Affirmations of protection and empowerment, a ritual in astral planes, I cheer with guardian angels and wisdom keepers. Not in perfection yet, the difference, mops in love, kindness, and hope. “ so ethereal, and soulfully divine. I just wish you would arrange lines when posting, when i first got on soup i had difficulty arranging ljnes too properly, otherwise this is poetic perfection! I love it! And you are special! Thank you for supporting me! Congratulations on your win
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Tonye George
Date: 4/8/2024 5:32:00 AM
Thank you so much Ink. I really do appreciate.
Date: 3/25/2024 8:44:00 AM
Tonye, this is an excellent elucidation of the topic, and you have handled the theme in your unique way. This poem stands out in beauty and unbroken flow, which give you a transcendental experience. Life with its beauty and mystery is worth exploring. "Every day a new yellow pad with pages of peace and silent glory where my spirit drives on Wheeless journeys. " You are a keen observer, watching the sunset and the neighborhood and the busy activities of life....! Lovely poem dear Tonye
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Tonye George
Date: 3/25/2024 10:23:00 AM
Yes, dear Valsa. Watching them makes me reflect on how far I've come and how grateful I am. Thank you dear.
Date: 3/25/2024 7:43:00 AM
Excellent take on the contest, I like how your poem invites the reader to pause and reflect on the beauty and complexity of life, finding solace and meaning in the interconnectedness of all things. It celebrates the power of observation, gratitude, and compassion to bring peace and healing to the soul.
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Tonye George
Date: 3/25/2024 10:21:00 AM
True Silent One. Thank you for your wonderful insight. Always appreciated.
Date: 3/24/2024 7:50:00 PM
“a flash of birds flip up the sky,” What a wonderful way you have with words! I love also “Situated next to the moon with her legs crossed above, aiming on-site to shoot. Every day a new yellow pad with pages of peace and silent glory where my spirit drives on Wheeless journeys.” Fun phrases filled with imagery and personification! Great job!
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Tonye George
Date: 3/24/2024 8:47:00 PM
Thank you, Karen. Cheers to a new week.
Date: 3/24/2024 7:41:00 PM
Can I borrow your brilliant brain for a while?. I don't think there is a better poem ever written. You're on a different planet from the rest of us. I really think your poetry are future classics. Love the language and the use of words. You have a new fan. Don't forget me when you make it big, I'm stunned by this one. You have a great unique style. The world needs you. Thank you for such a beautiful write, I think I'll take up knitting from now on. Did I mention, I loved it. Pete.
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Tonye George
Date: 3/24/2024 8:47:00 PM
Thank you, Pete. I appreciate.

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