Vijay Pandit Poet Quatern

Enticing Sweet Dreams You Tiptoe

Enticing sweet dreams you tiptoe
Charming passions memories spun
From days of our youth long ago
When quest of love had just begun

When in your heart I'm all alone
Enticing sweet dreams you tiptoe
Blazing desires we've felt and known
Kindled embers of romance glow

Musings endearing you well know
When our engaging souls impart
Enticing sweet dreams you tiptoe
Holding me captive of your heart
	
Oh! how our indulgent hearts woo
Flame of ardent past still aglow
Courting love beholden and true
Enticing sweet dreams you tiptoe

November 1, 2021
Quatern (eight syllables per line)
Placed 3rd: “S” Contest, New Poems Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Constance La France
Theme: Sweet

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Evelyn Judy Buehler June 15, 2023 at 10:58 AM An elegant and delightfully romantic poem. Wonderful writing.

Bill Baker March 26, 2022 at 4:40 PM A sweet endearing love poem. I enjoyed this fine example of Quatern poetry, Vijay. Congrats on the high finish in the contest, Bill

Valsa George November 15, 2021 at 7:54 AM You walk back to the zone of youthful romance, presenting memoriies in such passionate warmth. Within the metric constraint, composing such a sweet poem is not an easy task. But everything is safe in your masterly hold ! Vijay Pandit November 15, 2021 at 7:59 AM So very kind of you my friend. Your comments too are eloquent like your poems. Much appreciate, Valsa. Many thanks.

Sotto Poet November 14, 2021 at 8:03 PM This is a lovely, sweet poem about love and romance. Since I was absent for a time, I'm sorry if I missed any of your poems. Vijay, you've written a fantastic poem, one that's chock-full of beautiful metaphors and rhyme. Vijay Pandit November 15, 2021 at 7:58 AM Glad to see you back Lasaad. Always a joy to read your kind remarks. Many thanks.

Deb M November 13, 2021 at 6:46 AM Hi Vijay……what a lovely sweet romantic poem….beautiful! Debx Vijay Pandit November 15, 2021 at 7:57 AM Thank you Deb.

Kim Rodrigues November 9, 2021 at 2:47 PM Lovely refrain! Vijay Pandit November 15, 2021 at 7:57 AM Thank you Kim.

Jennifer Proxenos November 9, 2021 at 10:45 AM Hi Vijay, Another WOW of a poem, another well crafted magic write - you are a true romantic, Congratulations on your very deserved win. Blessings and hugs Jennifer. Vijay Pandit November 9, 2021 at 1:19 PM Thank you Jennifer. Much appreciate.

Andrea Dietrich November 7, 2021 at 9:28 AM i love quaterns. Great repeating line, my friend. I wonder if Constance redid her rules , for I do not recall anything other than haiku or senry was asked for. Maybe I got things backwards!! Glad I saw this! Vijay Pandit November 9, 2021 at 1:19 PM Much appreciate Andrea. Many thanks.

Gordon Mcconnell November 7, 2021 at 7:54 AM Such a lovely piece Vijay, full of nice rhyme, flow, and lovely imagery. Have a blessed day, Gordon Vijay Pandit November 9, 2021 at 1:19 PM Thank you Gordon.

Karen Jones November 7, 2021 at 7:07 AM What a romantic write and a winner! Congrats! Vijay Pandit November 9, 2021 at 1:18 PM Thank you Karen.

Supraja Kannan November 7, 2021 at 1:23 AM How sweet!!! This is really a tough form but you nailed it... Lovely imagery and great flow throughout... Enjoyed reading this... Vijay Pandit November 9, 2021 at 1:18 PM Thank you Supraja.

Constance La France November 6, 2021 at 6:18 AM Vijay, wonderful writing and congratulations on your Third Place win in my "S" Contest ~ peace and tranquility _ Constance Vijay Pandit November 9, 2021 at 1:18 PM Much appreciate Constance. Many thanks for hosting contests.

Christuraj Alex November 6, 2021 at 1:16 AM Beautiful Quatern. The whole poem is very fluent and full of feelings. Congratulations! Vijay Pandit November 9, 2021 at 1:17 PM Thank you Christuraj.

Susan Lawrence November 4, 2021 at 12:03 PM Vijay Beautiful journey into your heart . I love it . You are a special poet and soul. You are sensitive to the nuances of space and time … present and past . Good luck in the contest . Blessings, Susan :) Vijay Pandit November 9, 2021 at 1:17 PM Thank you Susan.

Joanna Daniel November 4, 2021 at 12:12 AM I love this one, Vijay, you rarely do rhyming poems, but when you do, they take away my breath, simply astounding:) Vijay Pandit November 4, 2021 at 6:43 AM That is so nice to hear and so very kind of you, Jo. Glad to start my day with your complimentary remarks. Much appreciate. Many thanks.

P.S. Awtry November 3, 2021 at 8:03 PM I especially like the way you weaved the repeating line through the poem. Well done. :) Vijay Pandit November 4, 2021 at 6:41 AM Thank you, P.S. Always an honor when you visit. Much appreciate.

Heidi Sands November 3, 2021 at 7:38 PM I love the title and the poem. So sweet, Vijay. I enjoyed :) Vijay Pandit November 4, 2021 at 6:41 AM Glad you like the poem, Heidi. Appreciate your support as, always. Many thanks.

Mystic Rose Rose November 3, 2021 at 6:28 PM sweet and gentle ever so close, nicely written dear poet. Vijay Pandit November 4, 2021 at 6:40 AM Thank you, Vienna. Much appreciate your kind feedback, as always.

Connie Marcum Wong November 3, 2021 at 11:40 AM Our memories are one of our most precious gifts in life. Beautiful and romantic Vijay! Blessings xxoo Vijay Pandit November 3, 2021 at 3:29 PM Glad you stopped by Connie. Much appreciate--many thanks. Hope you are coping well my friend.

Joseph May November 3, 2021 at 10:24 AM Wonderful write Vijay, GL in the contest Vijay Pandit November 3, 2021 at 3:28 PM Thank you Joseph--much appreciate.

Eve Roper November 3, 2021 at 7:54 AM Your writes are amazing full of life and love. This one so pleasing of thought a tiptoe through dreams. Enjoyed reading my friend... A first place winner for sure. Hugs Eve Vijay Pandit November 3, 2021 at 7:56 AM Such an honor my friend to receive your vote of confidence. Many thanks for stopping by with your kind remarks, Eve. Much appreciate.

Besma Riabi Dziri November 3, 2021 at 12:47 AM You just captivate your reader's soul with a so sweet poetry! You allow a so wonderful day dreaming of heart enlivening moments in time! You take the self to Life zones of youth of heart and mind! Shall a reader ask for more of a Beauty! I salute your poetic flair and sensitivity, dear Vijay! So much pleased to read a fave gem deserving the honour of outshining placement ! My deepest regards and blessings. Vijay Pandit November 3, 2021 at 7:54 AM You spread so much joy on Poetry Soup, Besma, with your heartfelt feedback. Always a delight when you visit and a special treat to read your kind remarks. Many thanks for taking the time to write detailed remarks. And a very special thanks you for the FAVE.

Linda Alice Fowler November 2, 2021 at 11:40 AM Very sweet indeed Vijay. Romantic thoughts well-expressed. Linda Vijay Pandit November 2, 2021 at 12:53 PM Glad you visited Linda. Much appreciate your thoughtful feedback. Many thanks.

Anitha Jayasankar November 2, 2021 at 9:02 AM A lovely romantic write in Quatern with excellent rhymes that you wrote with ease Vijayji...Best wishes in the contest...God bless..~ Ani Vijay Pandit November 2, 2021 at 12:52 PM Thank you Ani for stopping by with your kind feedback. Much appreciate. Many thanks.

Janice Canerdy November 2, 2021 at 5:34 AM I love the quatern. Yours is excellent, Vijay, so descriptive of romance. Janice Vijay Pandit November 2, 2021 at 7:03 AM Glad you stopped by Janice with your wonderful feedback. Much appreciate your kind remarks. Many thanks.

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