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Enticing Sweet Dreams You Tiptoe

Enticing sweet dreams you tiptoe
Charming passions memories spun
From days of our youth long ago
When quest of love had just begun

When in your heart I'm all alone
Enticing sweet dreams you tiptoe
Blazing desires we've felt and known
Kindled embers of romance glow

Musings endearing you well know
When our engaging souls impart
Enticing sweet dreams you tiptoe
Holding me captive of your heart
	
Oh! how our indulgent hearts woo
Flame of ardent past still aglow
Courting love beholden and true
Enticing sweet dreams you tiptoe

November 1, 2021
Quatern (eight syllables per line)
Placed 3rd: “S” Contest, New Poems Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Constance La France
Theme: Sweet

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Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 6/15/2023 10:58:00 AM

An elegant and delightfully romantic poem. Wonderful writing.

Bill Baker

Date: 3/26/2022 4:40:00 PM

A sweet endearing love poem. I enjoyed this fine example of Quatern poetry, Vijay. Congrats on the high finish in the contest, Bill

Valsa George

Date: 11/15/2021 7:54:00 AM

You walk back to the zone of youthful romance, presenting memoriies in such passionate warmth. Within the metric constraint, composing such a sweet poem is not an easy task. But everything is safe in your masterly hold !

Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/15/2021 7:59:00 AM

So very kind of you my friend. Your comments too are eloquent like your poems. Much appreciate, Valsa. Many thanks.

Sotto Poet

Date: 11/14/2021 8:03:00 PM

This is a lovely, sweet poem about love and romance. Since I was absent for a time, I'm sorry if I missed any of your poems. Vijay, you've written a fantastic poem, one that's chock-full of beautiful metaphors and rhyme.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/15/2021 7:58:00 AM

Glad to see you back Lasaad. Always a joy to read your kind remarks. Many thanks.

Deb M

Date: 11/13/2021 6:46:00 AM

Hi Vijay……what a lovely sweet romantic poem….beautiful! Debx

Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/15/2021 7:57:00 AM

Thank you Deb.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 11/9/2021 2:47:00 PM

Lovely refrain!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/15/2021 7:57:00 AM

Thank you Kim.

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 11/9/2021 10:45:00 AM

Hi Vijay, Another WOW of a poem, another well crafted magic write - you are a true romantic, Congratulations on your very deserved win. Blessings and hugs Jennifer.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/9/2021 1:19:00 PM

Thank you Jennifer. Much appreciate.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/7/2021 9:28:00 AM

i love quaterns. Great repeating line, my friend. I wonder if Constance redid her rules , for I do not recall anything other than haiku or senry was asked for. Maybe I got things backwards!! Glad I saw this!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/9/2021 1:19:00 PM

Much appreciate Andrea. Many thanks.

Gordon Mcconnell

Date: 11/7/2021 7:54:00 AM

Such a lovely piece Vijay, full of nice rhyme, flow, and lovely imagery. Have a blessed day, Gordon

Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/9/2021 1:19:00 PM

Thank you Gordon.

Karen Jones

Date: 11/7/2021 7:07:00 AM

What a romantic write and a winner! Congrats!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/9/2021 1:18:00 PM

Thank you Karen.

Supraja Kannan

Date: 11/7/2021 1:23:00 AM

How sweet!!! This is really a tough form but you nailed it... Lovely imagery and great flow throughout... Enjoyed reading this...

Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/9/2021 1:18:00 PM

Thank you Supraja.

Constance La France

Date: 11/6/2021 6:18:00 AM

Vijay, wonderful writing and congratulations on your Third Place win in my "S" Contest ~ peace and tranquility _ Constance

Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/9/2021 1:18:00 PM

Much appreciate Constance. Many thanks for hosting contests.

Christuraj Alex

Date: 11/6/2021 1:16:00 AM

Beautiful Quatern. The whole poem is very fluent and full of feelings. Congratulations!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/9/2021 1:17:00 PM

Thank you Christuraj.

Susan Lawrence

Date: 11/4/2021 12:03:00 PM

Vijay Beautiful journey into your heart . I love it . You are a special poet and soul. You are sensitive to the nuances of space and time … present and past . Good luck in the contest . Blessings, Susan :)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/9/2021 1:17:00 PM

Thank you Susan.

Joanna Daniel

Date: 11/4/2021 12:12:00 AM

I love this one, Vijay, you rarely do rhyming poems, but when you do, they take away my breath, simply astounding:)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/4/2021 6:43:00 AM

That is so nice to hear and so very kind of you, Jo. Glad to start my day with your complimentary remarks. Much appreciate. Many thanks.

P.S. Awtry

Date: 11/3/2021 8:03:00 PM

I especially like the way you weaved the repeating line through the poem. Well done. :)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/4/2021 6:41:00 AM

Thank you, P.S. Always an honor when you visit. Much appreciate.

Heidi Sands

Date: 11/3/2021 7:38:00 PM

I love the title and the poem. So sweet, Vijay. I enjoyed :)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/4/2021 6:41:00 AM

Glad you like the poem, Heidi. Appreciate your support as, always. Many thanks.

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 11/3/2021 6:28:00 PM

sweet and gentle ever so close, nicely written dear poet.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/4/2021 6:40:00 AM

Thank you, Vienna. Much appreciate your kind feedback, as always.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 11/3/2021 11:40:00 AM

Our memories are one of our most precious gifts in life. Beautiful and romantic Vijay! Blessings xxoo

Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/3/2021 3:29:00 PM

Glad you stopped by Connie. Much appreciate--many thanks. Hope you are coping well my friend.

Joseph May

Date: 11/3/2021 10:24:00 AM

Wonderful write Vijay, GL in the contest

Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/3/2021 3:28:00 PM

Thank you Joseph--much appreciate.

Eve Roper

Date: 11/3/2021 7:54:00 AM

Your writes are amazing full of life and love. This one so pleasing of thought a tiptoe through dreams. Enjoyed reading my friend... A first place winner for sure. Hugs Eve

Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/3/2021 7:56:00 AM

Such an honor my friend to receive your vote of confidence. Many thanks for stopping by with your kind remarks, Eve. Much appreciate.

Besma Riabi Dziri

Date: 11/3/2021 12:47:00 AM

You just captivate your reader's soul with a so sweet poetry! You allow a so wonderful day dreaming of heart enlivening moments in time! You take the self to Life zones of youth of heart and mind! Shall a reader ask for more of a Beauty! I salute your poetic flair and sensitivity, dear Vijay! So much pleased to read a fave gem deserving the honour of outshining placement ! My deepest regards and blessings.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/3/2021 7:54:00 AM

You spread so much joy on Poetry Soup, Besma, with your heartfelt feedback. Always a delight when you visit and a special treat to read your kind remarks. Many thanks for taking the time to write detailed remarks. And a very special thanks you for the FAVE.