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Empty As the Hourglass Shatters

Death has come this year; still it comes, ever creeping. It comes for others in my life and in my family. To one who wielded great control, it came as she lay sleeping. All power gone, she did succumb to that grim reaper’s call. It comes for others now. I know with certainty because more often now I see its shadow on the wall. As we grow old, death’s not a storm, leaving us in tatters. I HEAR it as a hauntingly sad foreboding melody. Played out, it leaves the loved ones empty as the hourglass shatters. We go on. I go on - knowing soon enough it comes for me. June 26, 2018 for Laura Loo's 'Rhyme Time 4- 10 Lines' Poetry Contest Now used for 'Favorite Poem Written In June 2018' Contest of Dear Heart a.k.a. Broken Wings

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Date: 7/27/2018 5:24:00 PM
I remember this one. Back to congratulate you again on your win again. :)
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Date: 7/26/2018 7:14:00 PM
Andrea, congratulations on your win in my contest with this wonderful write, well done !
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Date: 7/26/2018 6:54:00 AM
A haunting melody that plays for all...Congrats on your win Andrea
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Date: 7/25/2018 6:20:00 AM
Coming back to Congratulate you again with this beautiful poem...hugs // Charlie
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Date: 7/24/2018 10:29:00 PM
Very moving and effective, Andrea! CONGRATS! Janice
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Date: 7/24/2018 10:27:00 PM
Congratulations Andrea! Sad truth.
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Date: 7/24/2018 8:19:00 PM
Death, deep and dark, and its acceptance honored so well in your poem, Andrea. You've expressed it so well, and I feel the same. Congratulations on your fine placement in the contest. A Fave for me! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 7/10/2018 2:43:00 PM
Oh my. Andie how dark and gripping. An inevitability of this world.
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Date: 6/30/2018 10:44:00 AM
Back with Great Big Congratulations, on your 1st place win.. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 6/30/2018 4:03:00 AM
Nice win Andrea, congratulations, Mick
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Date: 6/29/2018 9:23:00 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful win, Andrea - blessings and best wishes for continued success! I truly enjoyed this heart-wrenching beauty. Great work, Bud! :-) <3 (Wow - thirty comments - I got eight on mine ... I must have bad internet breath, lol) ;-)
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 6/30/2018 7:59:00 PM
remember the disco song she works hard for a living? Well, I work hard for my comments. hahaha. I just hope most people are actually reading my poems when they come here!!
Date: 6/29/2018 11:41:00 AM
Andrea, Congratulations on your #1 win with this sad but beautiful poem about death. Yes, it will come to us all but you are right. In the end, it is not a storm. Great write!...Charlie
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Date: 6/29/2018 8:55:00 AM
Andrea, congrats on your win my friend. John
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Date: 6/29/2018 8:44:00 AM
Congratulations on your #1 win with this sad but real look at death. Well done! :)
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Date: 6/29/2018 7:38:00 AM
Congratulations on your win! Amazing poem about a sad reality.
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Date: 6/29/2018 7:06:00 AM
great last line sweet lady :) really enjoyed the metaphors...hauntingly sad foreboding melody. great poem from a great lady...thank you for your entry and congratulations on your placement. Be blessed, -luloo :)
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Date: 6/27/2018 3:40:00 PM
Life is often difficult and sometimes death is a welcome visitor, yet so sorrowful for loved ones left behind. A wonderful entry for the contest Andrea. I know you have had to deal with death at an early age and this lovely tribute to loved ones reflects that poignantly. : )
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Date: 6/27/2018 11:53:00 AM
Very descriptive write as the feeling is os true.....good luck in the contest..
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Date: 6/27/2018 10:26:00 AM
Hi Andrea, One the for sure is death is inevitable. You expressed that well in this well written piece. With being said we must live our lives to the fullest in the mean time.I wish you the best of luck in the contest -:-) Alexis
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Date: 6/27/2018 9:22:00 AM
So dark and full of truths. And excellent write Andrea! Best of luck in the contest!! ~Judy
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Date: 6/27/2018 9:13:00 AM
The thing about life is that no one is getting out alive. Well expressed Andrea.
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Date: 6/27/2018 1:25:00 AM
Indeed, Andrea, we treat death like a predator, snatching and taking at will, when it is a mere Coda to the symphony of our lives. As the years go by, it holds less fear. A fine piece, good luck in the contest. Viv x
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Date: 6/27/2018 12:45:00 AM
Very touching and sentiments I myself feel! Hugs
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Date: 6/26/2018 9:13:00 PM
Andrea, an obvious contest winner. You address mortality in a masterful and creative way!
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Date: 6/26/2018 8:54:00 PM
An awesome write on human mortality Andrea; Good luck in the contest!~Che :)
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