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Ember

Oh, my Inglenook my Inglenook a whole life time spent within thee, my name is Ember I create patterns of dancing shadows a need to be stoked constantly. I can be an inhospitable harrowing flame for those that dare to glare and too hot to the touch, phantom notions I can conceive when low and in a mood and the chill becomes apparent I die. It is so cold out there beyond the glowing rays of flickering abate, a need of more fuel to score or the silence continues till flame again breaks through by the fire just renewed. But one day an empty fireplace where life once reigned supreme, someone to rake through the spent ashes to return to where one cometh from so, the clergy tells everyone. To the wind one is scattered no void intended; one’s death a space for the new born a tiny Ember renewed to inherent this inglenook, the process to start all over again from spring’s kindling To winter’s deadwood.
© Harry J Horsman 2022

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Date: 10/20/2022 12:58:00 PM
Embers used for metaphors in life. Wonderful writing, my friend. This is a poem I somehow let get past me.
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Date: 9/19/2022 6:48:00 AM
I adore the metaphor of life's fires, like a falcon emerging from the embers. Harry, you did an excellent job.
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Date: 9/17/2022 10:46:00 AM
A wonderful analogous write Harry. Your fine pen strikes a flame. Linda Alice
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Date: 9/11/2022 10:41:00 AM
I like the analogy of the flames of life, like a phoenix always rising from the ashes, Very nicely done Harry
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Date: 9/8/2022 3:26:00 PM
Wonderful imagery! I love watching flames flicker in a fireplace. Its so relaxing. I enjoyed reading this Harry. Cheers my friend :-)
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Date: 9/8/2022 2:34:00 AM
Harry this is a truly unique write, you are the ember rekindled every night, you glow so bright with heat and light with flames that mesmerize all in the room, to their very core and soul. But like all things in life the ember will become ash and flys away, and with the cold you the ember wll die die. Eventually another will be lit - one death brings about rebirth, and it is re-kindled giving heat to the cycle of life. Wow Harry, amazing my friend. Hugs and blessings. Jennifer.dear friend.
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Date: 9/8/2022 2:01:00 AM
A highly metaphoric poem . Ember of life when dies out, new embers take its place and the cycle continues ! Only a poet of great capabalities can write such a profound poem on life.
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Date: 9/6/2022 9:09:00 PM
Embers, the sparks of life. A wonderfully reflective write, Harry. Thank you, Gershon
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Date: 9/6/2022 12:02:00 PM
A stirring poem, so brilliantly written. I love the first two lines. Such imagery! :)
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Date: 9/6/2022 11:05:00 AM
Winter's deadwood can still be a burning fire like where there is snow on the mountain there is still a fire in the hearth. I enjoyed reading your work. Thanks for sharing and for stopping by my page. Sara
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Date: 9/6/2022 4:57:00 AM
A perfect metaphor for life as we know it Harry! Your imagery and phrasing are so beautiful! I really enjoyed reading it this morning!!! Happy Tuesday!
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Date: 9/5/2022 6:40:00 PM
Whoa, this is a great if ever I saw one, simply incredible. This is another favorite, it is so great.
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Date: 9/5/2022 3:06:00 AM
Wow and Wow again Good Morning hh. I will not touch or comment on your entry. There is nothing I could add. Allow me to let it speak. This one entry alone is poetry with all poetic elements and expressions. And yes, it is one that must be read out loud with expression and emphasis. For those who do not or can not read what a sad and dark world they must be living in. It was an honor turning to your page this morning. Be very proud of your work. Truly. Blessings always... (smile)
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Date: 9/4/2022 4:37:00 PM
Nice metaphor for this excellent poem, Harry. The last line was perfect. Thanks for sharing my friend. Bill
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Date: 9/4/2022 7:31:00 AM
Your poetry is of the excellent form. Always a joy to read.
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Date: 9/4/2022 6:50:00 AM
Awesome, metaphoric write, Harry. Your ending lines spell the essence: from spring’s kindling To winter’s deadwood.
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Date: 9/4/2022 2:45:00 AM
You have taken to the possible results of ember in its burning ignited form. Excellent Harry great theme my friend...
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Date: 9/4/2022 12:33:00 AM
Love this, harry. xx
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