Eden

Beautiful and poignant

Well done, Skat. The alliterations were spot on. You have your pen working some special skills on this poem. It was very paradisio. Ty for sharing w/us. Love and peace.

With each read, I discover this poem to be more and more interesting/wonderful (for lack of a better/different word). The line: "I can't recall what was with the warm, sincere smile, and sunrise..." seems so sarcastic in some odd way (which I love). w

Wow.. Nicely inscribed. . Well organized thoughts into a message.. More blessings and success ahead

Hi Skat, an excellent work once more. Eden with a difference, the Skat difference. Eden and dark, you wouldn't quite expect that to be a winning combination at all. Well, i wouldn't have believed it but here is the work before me. You have pulled it off my friend. A seven once more for your flowing words. Your Friend Vladislav.

A dark Eden...and so it was after the Fall. Then every life is both paradoxically Eden in the Spring and Death in the winter. You captured it. Sliced those words up nicely. The alliteration worked here along with all the contrasts, metaphor, and sad ending. Nice one. Decided to be "Snoopy" too. Of course, IT'S IMPOSSIBLE to be snoopy when we are Posting for this VERY THING...to share, be read, work it! Good one here Skat!

An interest use of alliteration as an eulogy, it was wonderfully done!

Never though one can get quyite gothic with a subject like Eden but you pulled it off...lovely write too with such unique alliteration. hugs!

Loved your use of alliteration, Skat....Eden's Ending Eulogy...How special is that? Thanks for being so kind to visit and leave comments on my work. I'm here to check YOU out! :)

Excellent pen Skat!!I truly enjoyed reading this nice piece of yours dear friend.A 7! And thank you so much for visiting my page and all, I truly appreciate it all a lot.I'll be back to read more of your work.Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In his light!God bless you! Hugs!:) D."

thanks for showcasing my Midnight Pearl in another of your old contests, Skat. It is always a nice feeling to see my name on one of those golden oldies contests.

A wonderful reflective and well-alliterated poem. I like it much

Hi Skat, Have been looking over your work, and admire much of it. Love your expression of your feelings and your use words. Especially liked this one!

PS SKAT'S HAPPY VALENTINES BACK AT YOU GIRL, GLAD YOU ENJOYED MY SHORT MESSAGE TO THE SOUP SO MUCH, CHERI

Dear Skat, i love to sleep, for I enter the realm of rem dreaming, and here fantasy's can be lived without any limitations to desire or passion, you can be whom ever you wish, and do what ever strikes your fancy. Here no one can tell you nope, you can't do this or that, and you can travel where ever you wish. Love your work girl keep it up,cheri

The alliterations in this piece are fantastic. Each line rolls effortlessly from the tongue. Beautiful imagery with a sprinkle of darkness.

I love alliterations and this is such a wonderful example of how it should be done! Dark yet beautiful in imagery and flow! Warmest regards. Pandita

quite gothie. good work that flows very well. alliterations are often hard to do as i found out in 1 writing group i attended. :)

Dark and broody Skat....love it

Wow! a very deep thought adorned in this beautiful poem. It's a magic like thought worded with magic ink. Loved always, my lovely friend,bl

I love a good poem that paints a picture that one can experience with mind, body and spirit; well done!

I love this brief write. I love it's transient mood. Good one Skate.

I agree that this write is both powerful and poignant Eden, lovely poetry...Keith.

Beautiful write here, Richard

Powerful, hauntingly dark to ones demise, James :)