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Dying For Dinner crying spying eyeing frying At my feet, cat crying, spying dish... then standing tall eyeing frying fish. January 19, 2019 Contest: Your Turn For A Tyburn Sponsor: Charles Messina

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Date: 8/31/2019 5:14:00 AM
I lust love this Sandra. So well done as usual. Congratulations on your win in my contest. Poetry hugs.. Charlie :)
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Date: 8/30/2019 7:44:00 AM
- Congratulations, Sandra :) - hugs and happy weekend // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/15/2018 8:55:00 PM
Wonderful write, and superb Tyburn, Sandra ... I'll bring the wine! ;-) Congrats on your win, My Friend! :-) <3
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Date: 2/3/2018 12:41:00 PM
Great Tyburn Sandra! I can see it! Congratulations on your win :) xomo
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Sandra Haight
Date: 2/4/2018 4:45:00 PM
Thanks, Maureen, for your kind comment and congratulations! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 2/2/2018 1:03:00 PM
This is lovely. Well done Sandra.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 2/4/2018 4:44:00 PM
Thank you so much, Jean! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 2/1/2018 8:36:00 PM
Sandra, back with a big congratulations on this great piece :)
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Sandra Haight
Date: 2/4/2018 4:44:00 PM
Thank you very much, Eve! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 2/1/2018 8:01:00 PM
Smells deliciously fishy. Congrats on your win, Sandra.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 2/4/2018 4:44:00 PM
Thank you, Line! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 2/1/2018 7:50:00 PM
Absolutely one of the best on the list.Congrats on your well deserved win.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 2/1/2018 7:55:00 PM
Thank you very much, Andrea! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 2/1/2018 5:43:00 PM
Such a pitiful meow they can deliver those fish-lovers. Great picture of the cat climbing your leg...congratulations on a fine piece.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 2/1/2018 6:25:00 PM
Hi, Reason! Glad to see you back! Thank you very much for your nice comment and congrats! Much appreciated. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 2/1/2018 5:42:00 PM
Congrats, Sandra, on a great tyburn.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 2/1/2018 6:26:00 PM
Thank you so much, Curtis, for your visit and supportive comments. Sandra
Date: 2/1/2018 4:32:00 PM
Yaaay, a Tyburn with a cat! Love it. Congrats on your first place, Sandra. Viv x
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Sandra Haight
Date: 2/1/2018 6:27:00 PM
Yes, I love cats! Thank you so much, Viv, for your positive comment and congrats! Sandra :)
Date: 2/1/2018 3:42:00 PM
An excellent rendition of this tricky form, Sandra! Congratulations on placing first! Regards // paul
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Sandra Haight
Date: 2/1/2018 6:28:00 PM
Hi, Paul, that you for your visit and supportive comment and congratulations! Yes, a tricky form for sure! Sandra :)
Date: 2/1/2018 2:29:00 PM
Very cute, Sandra! Congrats on 1st place!
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Date: 1/25/2018 9:26:00 PM
This is a wonderful Tyburn, Sandra.. Good luck in the contest :)
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Sandra Haight
Date: 2/1/2018 6:29:00 PM
Nice contest, Kim. I was fun working with a new form. Thank you so much for my nice placement. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 1/23/2018 3:48:00 PM
Coming back to see yours again. I wish I could have gotten mine this good.
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Date: 1/20/2018 8:15:00 PM
VERY well done. The best, Sandra. I know how difficult it is to put this together. I only have one to my name and now I need to attempt another . OH MY. (love your picture too So precious)
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Sandra Haight
Date: 1/21/2018 10:19:00 AM
Thank you so much, Andrea. I appreciate your positive comment! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 1/20/2018 4:59:00 PM
Ahh!! The cat loves you or your food. Which is it? Enjoyed reading your work. Reads like a good contender for the contest..Sara
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Sandra Haight
Date: 1/21/2018 10:18:00 AM
Hi Sara, thank you for visiting my poem. Yes...it is always the food for sure! I appreciate your supportive comment. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 1/20/2018 8:35:00 AM
How cute!! All the best in the contest dear Sandra :) (Just noticed - in the two last line, aren't the repeated words supposed to make up the 5th to 8th syllables? I think that means one more syllable between 'feet' and 'cat' and a shift in words the next line) :))
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Sandra Haight
Date: 1/20/2018 10:37:00 AM
Oh dear Sneha, thank you for visiting my poem and for spotting my error! Bless you! I think I have adjusted the wording according to the rules. Thanks again, Hugs, Sandra
Date: 1/19/2018 1:05:00 PM
- Sounds like a nice moment with the cat - A sweet poem, Sandra :) - Luck in the contest :) - Lovely weekend - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Sandra Haight
Date: 1/20/2018 8:27:00 AM
Hi, Anne-Lise. Thank you for your visit and lovely comment. I love cats, so this was fun to work out with this new form. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 1/19/2018 12:04:00 PM
what a lovely form and such a cute poem. it almost has a footle style with the rhyme. good luck with the contest:-) hugs jan xx
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Sandra Haight
Date: 1/20/2018 8:26:00 AM
Thank you, Jan. Yes, nice to learn a new form, and this was a fun write. Thanks for your visit and supportive comments. Hugs, Sandra

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