Drop of Destiny

A thousand drops approach the fold.
Their mission, moisten, grains all whole.
To be lost when kneaded, tossed, or rolled.
Or mixed within the mixing bowl

For a lonesome drop, all hope depletes.
For surely will never be found.
This drop that missed its mark complete,
and splashed upon the ground.

To evaporate by afternoon
For the summer's call is warm
Sent drifting toward a midday moon
Soon to be one with the storm

It sees no point in constant whining 
over what may lie below
For in clouds it's found a silver lining
and is proud to be H2O

On a journey of falling, then drifting away
Spanning the world entire
A distant thought, that fateful day 
When measured and destined for fire

As summer rain, or autumn sleet
A drift of arctic snow
The ups and the downs do tend to repeat
But It's better than being the dough!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2005

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Mannan Avatar
February 28, 2011 at 9:19 PM
I agree it is better than being a dough. Many congrats Joe.
Guzzi Avatar
February 28, 2011 at 6:00 PM
Congrad's on your win ! Light & Love
Johnson Avatar
February 28, 2011 at 12:01 PM
This appealed to me very much. I've thought the same way sometimes. That poor little last drop or grain or berry that was wasted after all of its efforts to be needed. Fun contest. Congratulations. I enjoyed judging. Love, Joyce
Taylor Avatar
February 28, 2011 at 11:01 AM
Congrats on a well deserved win, Joe. Nice going. Ralph
Brown Avatar
February 28, 2011 at 10:32 AM
A big congratulations on your win Joe. I also believe it is one of your best poems. Love, Carol
K. Avatar
February 28, 2011 at 9:26 AM
I really enjoyed where you took this "drop", Joe-- super congrats on your very unique entry :) Way to go on your wonderful win :)
Sweetheart Avatar
February 28, 2011 at 6:34 AM
Congrats Joe on your awesome win in Joyce's contest with this unique write my friend.. enjoy with luv.. luv sharing the winners podium with one of the best ...
Onclaud Avatar
February 28, 2011 at 5:00 AM
delighted to see you in the winners' list, joe.. CHEERS :) hugggs..
Dietrich Avatar
February 27, 2011 at 11:23 PM
what a cool last sentence, it's better than being the dough! Just be oneself, a little drop of H2O, how unique this is. GREAT job, great win!
Brown Avatar
December 22, 2009 at 3:20 PM
Congratulations on being a first round survivor and the best to you in the finals Joe. I wish you the best in your writing endeavors in 2010 whatever they may be. Love, Carol
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December 21, 2009 at 10:54 PM
Dear Joe, Congratulations on making it through the first round and best wishes on advancing to the finals. Lainie
Sheart Avatar
December 21, 2009 at 9:12 AM
Congrats on your poem winning the first round of PS contest!! Very well deserved, enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry. Here’s wishing you a very Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year!! May 2010 be your best year ever! Love Light Patty
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December 20, 2009 at 1:22 PM
Congratulations on moving to the next round with this great poem, Joe! Wishing you joy and happiness in the New Year, love, Carolyn
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December 20, 2009 at 10:48 AM
Many congratulations on reaching the second round with your fine poem >> James
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December 19, 2009 at 12:57 PM
Congrats on your feature write this week Joe!! Love light Patty
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December 19, 2009 at 11:10 AM
Congratulations on your featured poem! Laura :)
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December 15, 2009 at 12:40 PM
Many congratulations on your poetry being featured on the Soup this week >> James
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December 15, 2009 at 2:21 AM
Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. A well deserving honor. A. W. Nutter www.freewebs.com/abcedit
Brown Avatar
December 14, 2009 at 3:38 PM
congrats on being featured this week
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December 14, 2009 at 11:32 AM
Joe many congrats on being featured this week. Rgds Janette
Brown Avatar
December 14, 2009 at 8:37 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured at PoetrySoup this week Joe. May you have many more features. Love,Carol
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