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Dream Voyage

Dream Voyage This day now finds its weary end as darkness does prevail The Southern Cross is in our sights, your vessel waits to sail Floating o’er the slumbered seas while you do take your rest Bringing to you wondrous scenes this evening’s starlit quest Afloat on calming waters still, silent and so deep I’ll be the captain of this ship as on this night you sleep The breeze will take us where we go afloat of bright moon beams So close your eyes its time to take this voyage filled with dreams Good night Soupers

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Heidi Sands

Date: 12/29/2018 7:50:00 PM

Oh I love this one Chris. . Perfect before bedtime. I like finding your poems I missed before. :)

Chris Green
Date: 12/31/2018 3:17:00 PM

Thank you Heidi. I appreciate you looking through the old poems of mine. I am happy you liked this one

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 5/5/2017 5:28:00 AM

I am a voyager...and love to journey the blue seas.Set your sails captain to wherever the wind may blow. Beautiful poem...quite inviting to an adventurous journey : ).

Chris Green
Date: 5/5/2017 8:48:00 AM

Come aboard my sweet friend, I have been waiting for you. Thank you Charmaine, you beautiful comments are always a dream voyage for me.

Anne-Marie Coreggia

Date: 5/2/2017 8:00:00 PM

Chris, I liked your poem so much I printed it and I'm gonna read it to my kids before 'bedtime'. One is never too old for a 'Dream Voyage':) Amitiés

Chris Green
Date: 5/3/2017 8:35:00 AM

Wow, thank you Anne Marie, that really makes me smile. I hope they like it.

Elizabeth Kinch

Date: 5/2/2017 4:18:00 PM

I can't add anymore to all the lovely comments about your dreamy poem Chris. #7

Chris Green
Date: 5/2/2017 4:21:00 PM

Thank you Elizabeth. You are always so kind to me. I always look forward to your visits.

Trisha Romano

Date: 5/2/2017 8:46:00 AM

Beautiful. Love the images of the dream voyage. Favorite line: "The breeze will take us where we go, afloat of bright moon beams"

Chris Green
Date: 5/2/2017 9:41:00 AM

Thank you again Trisha for your wonderful and encouraging comments about my poetry. I appreciate you stopping by to read.

Darren White

Date: 5/2/2017 7:25:00 AM

Take me with you on a moon beam voyage, I can use such a wonderful journey.

Chris Green
Date: 5/2/2017 9:41:00 AM

Come on my friend, I saved you a seat. Thank you Darren.

Lisa Ricci

Date: 5/2/2017 5:19:00 AM

Good Morning Chris. I have only one comment for this exquisite and stunning poetic entry. So let it be said So let it be written So let it be done. Gorgeous in every way entirely. Have a wonderful morning and day.

Chris Green
Date: 5/2/2017 9:40:00 AM

Thank you Lisa for that beautiful, encouraging and wonderful one comment. :) I appreciate you my friend and all of the nice words you eave for me to find. Your comments are always so dream-like.

Sheila Sacks

Date: 5/2/2017 4:11:00 AM

Floating o'er the slumbered seas....Afloat on calming waters still....I love your dreamboat, Chris! A beautiful soul soothing write!

Chris Green
Date: 5/2/2017 9:39:00 AM

Did you just call me a dreamboat? :) Just kidding, thanks so very much Sheila for your kind words. I am happy you enjoyed this poem.

Vera Duggan

Date: 5/1/2017 11:35:00 PM

Nice poem Chris, Goodnight to you, hope you are well, take care........Vera

Chris Green
Date: 5/2/2017 9:38:00 AM

Thank you so very much. I am thrilled you liked this one Vera.

Frederic Parker

Date: 5/1/2017 10:16:00 PM

I like this enough to read it to my grand-daughter when she sleeps over if you don't mind

Chris Green
Date: 5/2/2017 9:37:00 AM

I don't mind at all Frederic. I would love if you did. Thanks so much my friend.

Jo Ann Starker

Date: 5/1/2017 9:00:00 PM

Lovely.

Chris Green
Date: 5/2/2017 9:36:00 AM

Thank you Jo Ann.

John Hamilton

Date: 5/1/2017 7:56:00 PM

Sooo smooth, great flow and rhymes, loved the sea metaphor, don't know if you've seen my sea of love, kind of similar vibe.

Chris Green
Date: 5/2/2017 9:36:00 AM

I will definitely check it out my friend. Thanks so much, I am glad you liked this one.

Lewis Raynes

Date: 5/1/2017 7:51:00 PM

Hi Chris, a group of 12/13 year olds have just studied your poem and discussed it. "It's relaxing" , "it's different", some liked the sea analogy, some felt uncomfortable. Thanks.

Lewis Raynes
Date: 5/2/2017 10:24:00 PM

i think they were just non comfortable imagining being on the water while asleep.... not sure

Chris Green
Date: 5/2/2017 9:35:00 AM

Thanks so much Lewis, I am curious what they would feel uncomfortable about? But that is so cool, thanks for sharing that with me.

Ilene Bauer

Date: 5/1/2017 7:24:00 PM

this poem is a lullaby in verse - soothing, relaxing and beautifully written. it makes me feel like joining this voyage, chris...

Chris Green
Date: 5/2/2017 9:34:00 AM

Come aboard Ilene, there is plenty of room. :) Thank you so very much for your nice comments, I appreciate your visit my friend.

Lenna Walker

Date: 5/1/2017 7:15:00 PM

"Bringing to you wondrous scenes this evening’s starlit quest" A dream in a nutshell. I love the whole thing. Sweet dreams Chris ! ( and Thank You for the message )

Chris Green
Date: 5/2/2017 9:33:00 AM

Thank you Lenna. I am thrilled you enjoyed this one. Your kindness is always a dream come true for me.

Sunlite Wanter

Date: 5/1/2017 6:40:00 PM

This would be nice to commit to memory as a "drift to sleep" poem for anyone. I wish my memory wasn't broke. Sweet dreams, Chris.

Chris Green
Date: 5/2/2017 9:32:00 AM

That makes two of us Sunlite, my memory is not what it used...wait, what were we talking about? :) Just kidding, thanks my friend for always being so nice to me

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 5/1/2017 6:21:00 PM

A lovely voyage into dreamland Chris. I hope you had a beautiful May Day! Aloha, Connie : ) 7

Chris Green
Date: 5/2/2017 9:30:00 AM

Thank you so very much Connie. I had a wonderful day and your comments have now made it much nicer. I appreciate your kind thoughts for me.