Don'T Fight It - Write It

If only I had the will to fight it
    a sword to smite it
      an injustice to right it
        a famous quote to cite it...  

  But of late I teeter and totter
    bumble and stumble
      creak, 'cos I'm weak
        drop the ball or fumble... 

  If only I could take a pill
    to restore my iron will
      to bring back the thrill
        to leap for joy with verve and skill... 

  But we both know there's no such pill
    not in valley low or high on hill 
      So what to do? I guess I will
        capture lost glory with a quill
           No more to fight it!! ~ Just to write it!


               June 13, 2023
           Entry in John Lawless'
        DON'T FIGHT IT - WRITE IT
               Poetry Contest
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Goldsmith Avatar
June 26, 2023 at 10:21 AM
Congratulations on your win. A creative write. You need to do what you do best. Just write about it... Have a blessed day writing away.....................
Agustin Avatar
June 25, 2023 at 10:20 PM
Congratulations. Thanks for sharing your wit, wisdom, and winning words through your excellent poetic style. God bless you.
M  Avatar
June 16, 2023 at 8:42 AM
Excellent poem B.B….so well written….flows beautifully! Debx
Kingston Avatar
June 15, 2023 at 4:52 PM
I need that quill sometimes Gershon, is it magic? That wretched tabula rasa, my blank slate. I need to read more of your poems to fill my own slate creatively.
Wolf Avatar
June 15, 2023 at 7:31 PM
Read all 6,000 of them, Marikate. You may get 1.346 - 2.7341 or so random ideas out of them. lol. Keep smiling. ~ Kayree Tivitee
Tor Avatar
June 14, 2023 at 11:17 PM
Gershon at least you can pretend when you write, lol. So writing about these emotions they are relived inside, so my guess is you still got it upstairs in the brain, now if it can work its way down. lol
Wolf Avatar
June 15, 2023 at 7:34 PM
What I retain 'upstairs' ain't nothing compared to all the junk I got in the cellar! lol. Thanks, Michael
Fisher Avatar
June 14, 2023 at 5:56 PM
This is 'Write On'! Great lead up to the final line.
Wolf Avatar
June 14, 2023 at 6:17 PM
Thanks for the appreciation on this one, David!
Rodrigues Avatar
June 14, 2023 at 1:58 PM
The pen is mighty in the diminished body…
Wolf Avatar
June 14, 2023 at 6:12 PM
Instead of crescendere, it's descendere... 1st floor. Doors Closing. Going Down...
Anaya Avatar
June 14, 2023 at 10:39 AM
There's Zinc, it works with the immune system [strength] -better yet keep on writing it! This is fabulous and best for the win, GW. wow
Wolf Avatar
June 14, 2023 at 6:09 PM
Gee, thanks! Very encouraging comment --- appreciated. :) gw
Fowler Avatar
June 14, 2023 at 6:48 AM
Teehee gw. I guessed you were a lover, not a fighter. :) laf
Wolf Avatar
June 14, 2023 at 6:06 PM
Who, me? A lover? Teehee, gw
Daniel Avatar
June 14, 2023 at 12:33 AM
Great writing, Gershon:)
Wolf Avatar
June 14, 2023 at 6:00 PM
Thanks for the nice comment, Joanna. Hope you are well. Light and Joy, Gershon
Hawkins Avatar
June 13, 2023 at 7:41 PM
Why should you fight it Or swipe it with a sword? Gershon you know already The pen is mightier than the sword!
Wolf Avatar
June 13, 2023 at 8:00 PM
Heh - heh. Great reminder, Shirley. Peace, Gershon
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