Doggies in Line

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Written - 29th April 2024

Picture Prompt Poetry Contest - Sponsored by: Margarita Lillico

Line up for the lav-a-tree doggies, please The grass is smelling alike mouldy cheese Pass the word around That what you have found Is a more refined way to do one's pees.

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Robert Gorelick

Date: 5/3/2024 10:18:00 AM

When Andy-Gumps are in short supply, what can you do? A witty contribution, Beryl. bol and carry on, Robert

I Am Anaya

Date: 5/2/2024 6:57:00 PM

How funny is the lav-a-tree, what a hoot! Beryl. Your limericks are gold, gl ~Anaya p.s. Hope you're enjoying the Doggy Book!

Randy Freie

Date: 5/2/2024 5:57:00 PM

Hi Beryl, I just love limericks and this one is really funny. Plus that picture is worth a thousand words. Doggies doing their duty. I appreciate your comments on my poem Starlight Starbright. A Jaguar sounds grrreat!

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 5/2/2024 6:10:00 PM

Hi Randy, I love limericks too, and really enjoy replying to Lims such as yours, they ignite the muse. Keep wising upon a star, one day you may find a Jaguar in the back yard… Beryl

Robert Schatz

Date: 5/1/2024 10:29:00 PM

Love it! Great to see another one of your limericks. Gave me a laugh. Thank you!

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 5/2/2024 1:41:00 PM

Thanks so much Robert, pleased you got a laugh from the read…Beryl

Sam Kauffman

Date: 4/30/2024 11:56:00 AM

Just fun, Beryl! So creative! I needed a good laugh this morning! Guess your "doggies" are lining up to give and receive their "pee mail!! Blessings!

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 4/30/2024 4:32:00 PM

Sam, I’m so pleased the read gave you laugh this morning, yes the doggies are lined up and wagging their tails in excrement, sorry in excitement. Blessings in return Beryl.