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An ode to a barkeep being told again how to mix her boss' drink.

The most overlooked Detail By men Is women's attention To detail.

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Darren White

Date: 4/21/2017 6:41:00 AM

This made me giggle :)

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 4/23/2017 7:43:00 AM

I love giggles!

Mike Hauser

Date: 4/17/2017 4:25:00 PM

Hahaha!

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 4/23/2017 7:43:00 AM

Ilene Bauer

Date: 4/8/2017 5:50:00 PM

ha! brilliant!

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 4/8/2017 8:39:00 PM

*giggle* if you could have seen her eyes roll, you would have written a poem too! ;) xomo!

Emile Pinet

Date: 4/8/2017 2:03:00 PM

An interesting prospective on how sometimes life can be so non-responsive to our needs. Well done. Emile. #7

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 4/8/2017 8:41:00 PM

Thank you Emile :) a wonderful day to you! mo

Lisa Ricci

Date: 4/8/2017 1:09:00 PM

Hello Maureen. Good Afternoon. This entry was the smile and chuckle for the day. I see reality within your words. Well done and stated. Thanks for the smile.

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 4/8/2017 8:41:00 PM

My absolute pleasure! Thank you Lisa :) xomo