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Posted - 10th October 2023

A fictional write

Nothing eases the unending sorrow Of lost love that brought joy to each morrow Wish there was something that could ease the pain Of longing to be together again. Whatever happened to romance we knew The love once cherished by both me and you On carpets of roses we both did lay Once upon many a whimsical day. Blissful were the days and tender the nights As we soared splendiferous giddy heights Held safe in your loving arms the hours flew Why oh why sweetheart did you say we’re through. You'd write poetry for my eyes only Ecstatic as a lark, I'd surely be Now you are gone, disappeared without trace In midst of silence my lonesome heart aches. I have adored you from when we started How I wish that we had never parted Mister magnifico you were to me My romeo, my buzzing honeybee. We won't be singing love songs anymore I’m heartbroken and will wait evermore To dance in your arms o’er rainbows again Should we reunite in heaven’s domain. Just for you whom I’m delirious for The key to my heart’s at destiny’s door.

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 10/19/2023 3:49:00 AM

On carpets of roses we both did lay… Mister magnifico you were to me My romeo, my buzzing honeybee…Congratulations on POTD!

Deb M

Date: 10/16/2023 4:05:00 AM

Congratulations Belle on a well deserved POTD!! A beautiful, sad heart grabbing poem….Debx

Alexis Y.

Date: 10/15/2023 12:59:00 PM

WoW! Belle, This is moving and touching. Congratulations on a well-deserved poem of the day:-) Alexis

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 10/14/2023 11:43:00 PM

Thank you PoetrySoup team, I am truly honoured and pleased to have had this poem awarded poem of the day… Belle

Mahtab Bangalee

Date: 10/14/2023 11:19:00 PM

Just for you whom I’m delirious for The key to my heart’s at destiny’s door.// wow just great writing and great reading ; superb poem penned; congrats for selecting the poem as POD

Silent One

Date: 10/14/2023 5:44:00 AM

I agree with your words, there is no sorrownlike this...Congratulations on POTD

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 10/14/2023 5:11:00 PM

Thank you very much Silent One… Belle

Joanna Daniel

Date: 10/14/2023 4:35:00 AM

This is so touching, Belle, belated congratulations on POTD:)

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 10/14/2023 5:10:00 PM

Thank you Joanna-:) Belle

Jan Allison

Date: 10/14/2023 2:05:00 AM

I know your poem is fictional for you Belle but sadly it is one many can relate to, belated congrats on POTD. soup mail:-) hugs Jan xx

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 10/14/2023 5:09:00 PM

Thank you Jan… Hugs, Belle xx

Constance La France

Date: 10/12/2023 10:41:00 PM

Belle, a beautiful poem and congratulation on receiving the POEM OF THE DAY honor.

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 10/13/2023 2:41:00 PM

Thank you Constance, I’m overwhelmed by the responses I’ve received and of course delighted to have had the honour of poem of the day… Belle

Maria Williams

Date: 10/12/2023 7:45:00 PM

A beautiful poem of love and loss Belle. Congratulations on POTD. Hugs

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 10/13/2023 2:38:00 PM

Thank you very much Maria, very grateful I am. Hugs, Belle

Brandy Nicole

Date: 10/12/2023 7:04:00 PM

This is beautiful, tender, and emotional, all at the same time. I can feel the longing within, a heart aching for the love it once knew. Your thoughts caress softly around me. Congratulations Belle, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. Hugs, Brandy

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 10/13/2023 2:37:00 PM

Thank you so much Brandy, those kind, generous words on this poem are truly appreciated. Hugs, Belle

Barbara Barry-Nishanian

Date: 10/12/2023 6:57:00 PM

Congrats, well deserved POTD. Belle, nice to meet you, will visit your site.

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 10/13/2023 2:35:00 PM

Thank you Barbara, nice to meet you too, will visit your site also… Belle

The Situation

Date: 10/12/2023 5:56:00 PM

Congrads on POTD. This is a sad piece that so many find themselves in.

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 10/13/2023 2:32:00 PM

Thank you and bless you The Situation… Belle

Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 10/12/2023 5:48:00 PM

Congratulations, Dear Belle, on this emotional, sad but stunning expression of lost love! My heart aches to imagine what some souls go through, and how they long to be with their sweethearts again - "To dance in your arms o’er rainbows again Should we reunite in heaven’s domain." Hugs, Dear Poet.

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 10/13/2023 2:31:00 PM

Thank you Malabika, I’m truly grateful for your kind review on this poem. Hugs in return, Belle

Sam Kauffman

Date: 10/12/2023 4:06:00 PM

Written from a plaintive, aching, heart, Belle, that finds itself alone with only dashed hopes for the future as comfort. Congratulations on your POTD! Blessings of comfort!

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 10/13/2023 2:27:00 PM

Thank you Sam, although the poem is fictional I wrote it from seeing how heartbreaking it is when love parts for whatever reason. Blessing to you in return… Belle

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 10/12/2023 4:05:00 PM

Hello Belle, this poem is beautifully done. Congratulations on your POTD. Enjoy your evening. /Darlene/

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/15/2023 11:45:00 AM

Hello Belle, your welcome my friend. Hugs. /Darlene\

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 10/13/2023 2:02:00 PM

Thank you and bless you Darlene, I appreciate your comments very much… Belle

Shirley Hawkins

Date: 10/12/2023 2:18:00 PM

WOW! Congratulations on your POTD win, Belle. I thought it was true. From the title to the end, it was captivating. I hope you have a lovely day with your husband. Take care, Shirley

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 10/13/2023 2:01:00 PM

Thank you Shirley, yes the poem is completely fictional. I’m so pleased you enjoyed reading this end of love story/poem… Blessings, Belle

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 10/12/2023 1:10:00 PM

Congratulations on your POTD win. A lovely write/story/ending. Have a very blessed day with your win...................

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 10/13/2023 1:57:00 PM

Thank you very much Paula, I’m so pleased you enjoyed the read, I’ve enjoyed the day and feel truly blessed… Belle

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 10/12/2023 1:03:00 PM

Belle my dear friend, what a magnificent poem, a love story which brings tears to the sentimental and emotional, intense romance at its best. Congratulations my friend on the honor bestowed upon you which is so truly deserved. HUGS AND BLESSINGS, Jennifer.

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 10/13/2023 1:54:00 PM

Thank you Jennifer, blessings and hugs to you too in return. I’m so pleased you liked this fictional love story poem, congratulations for poem of the day gratefully received. Belle

I Am Anaya

Date: 10/12/2023 10:32:00 AM

Destiny has a way of taking a lovers whimsical day away "Mister magnifico you were to me. My romeo, my buzzing honeybee" you are so sweet. Congratulations on your POTD Belle!! Delighted to see this love story today, enjoy your day. :D

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 10/13/2023 2:57:00 AM

Thank you so much Anaya, I truly appreciate your comments on this poem, I’ve had a lovely day… Belle

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 10/12/2023 7:11:00 AM

Sweet, romantic write Belle. Just lovely and a well-deserved POTD. Congratulations! :)

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 10/13/2023 2:55:00 AM

Thank you Linda, it’s an honour and I’m pleased as punch… Belle

Tom Woody

Date: 10/12/2023 6:24:00 AM

Nice to see this made potd Belle

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 10/13/2023 2:54:00 AM

Thank you so much Tom, I’m delighted for sure… Belle

Vijay Pandit

Date: 10/12/2023 6:02:00 AM

BIG congrats on POTD, Belle. Fiction it may be--it still speaks to hearts. Enjoy your special day today.

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 10/13/2023 2:52:00 AM

Thank you Vijay, definitely fiction, poetic license for sure. I’ve enjoyed the day immensely… Belle

Sotto Poet

Date: 10/12/2023 5:59:00 AM

Back with hearty congratulations on POTD, and also sorry for the misunderstanding happy that Alen is beside you.

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 10/13/2023 2:43:00 AM

Thank you Sotto, I can understand why you thought what you did, the poem came from knowing other couples sad circumstances…. Belle

Arastu Goyal

Date: 10/12/2023 4:29:00 AM

Enjoyed this rhyme! Found it a bit sad but enjoyed it. Congrats on POTD :-)

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 10/13/2023 2:31:00 AM

So pleased you enjoyed the read Arastu, thank you very much indeed for the congratulations. Belle