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Deprived

Sunrise off in the distance stretched to the limits of apprehension and then deprived of the dreams of yesterday's highs dropped in the ache of the touch, is that enough to hide under blankets of regret, chilled to the bone as the hen heats her home and rooster's nary roam aimless eyes filter pages harboring lonely cries and I'm wondering why, stuck here staring at the sky Deprived I hide in the recesses of my mind Sleepless wonders as time seems to rewind

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 3/13/2017 11:59:00 AM
You seem to be on such a blue note lately, hope that's not a condition of the condition you're in, still so very well done...
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Date: 3/13/2017 7:08:00 AM
Heart-wrenching and sad time...Yesterday Hopes, today's loss, but am thinking, tomorrow's Happiness...I do believe there lies beauty there...Am touched Timothu.
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Date: 3/13/2017 4:40:00 AM
Hello Tim. Only the free verse format could pull this off and aid you to express your thoughts because they just flow. Your title is so fitting to your theme. Your words are powerful and expressive and truly show pain loss and more. Anyone who lives life under darkened clouds for any reason understands you every word and reflection and yes the meaning and essence of deprived. Marvelous throughout.
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Date: 3/13/2017 3:23:00 AM
i like it when you go deep, tim... a beauty this one..huggs
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Date: 3/13/2017 3:01:00 AM
I get it, Tim, all of it.... But for now just this: sleep well my dear friend.
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Date: 3/12/2017 9:58:00 PM
So lovely and sad. It's an awful feeling "staring at the sky", you penned the emotions beautifully Tim. blessings, lynn
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Date: 3/12/2017 8:24:00 PM
Always remember things could be worse, you could be me! But I really get this poem, well done!
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Date: 3/12/2017 7:26:00 PM
I have the opposite problem, I sleep too much. Great poem, Tim.
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Date: 3/12/2017 5:54:00 PM
Sad and beautifully written, Tim. Well done :)
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Date: 3/12/2017 5:13:00 PM
Very good Tim
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