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Within my heart and soul, time stored a vision of me clutching a fragrant white rose; it had a sweet scent with delicate undertones of wine, berry, plum, and cloves. Its aroma, juxtaposed with the odor of death, imprinted that alabaster rose upon my mind. And I can still recall the sensual feel of its velvet petals softly brushing my cheek, evoking memories of Mom that bring both a smile to my heart and tears to my eyes. I had squeezed its thorns so hard, that a trickle of scarlet drops silently ran unnoticed down my trembling hand; dripping off of my crimson fingertips. And I placed that bleeding rose on a mound of earth, focusing on its beauty; as I said goodbye to an Angel, the woman who bore me, my Mom.

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Date: 3/17/2021 4:04:00 PM
Wow Emile, what a powerful and poignant impression this outstanding poem made on me my friend! Congratulations on your very deserving First Placement! Happy St. Patrick's Day my friend. Blessings xxoo
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Date: 3/18/2021 8:52:00 AM
Thanks Connie, I too felt its impact when I wrote it my friend, Emile.
Date: 3/15/2021 8:56:00 AM
Emile, this is such a touching poem, full of love and appreciation. Congrats.
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Date: 3/15/2021 9:13:00 AM
Thanks Marilene, I appreciate your comments and support my friend, Emile.
Date: 3/15/2021 8:45:00 AM
Emile, congratulations on your win in my Imagism Challenge on the theme of a flower or flowers, I am in awe of the beauty of your poem, so emotional and beautifully penned, and the image chosen is wonderful too, well done _Constance
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Date: 3/15/2021 9:13:00 AM
Thanks so much Constance, I appreciate your comments and the placement my friend, Emile.
Date: 3/15/2021 2:39:00 AM
- A beautiful poem and memories about a mother :) - Congratulations on your win, Emile :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/15/2021 9:12:00 AM
Thanks Anne-Lise, I appreciate your comments and support my friend, Emile.
Date: 3/14/2021 9:52:00 PM
Such a beautiful verse a great tribute to your mom, Emile, congratulations on your 1st place win. Hugs Eve
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Date: 3/15/2021 9:11:00 AM
Thanks Eve, I appreciate your comments and support my friend, Emile.
Date: 3/14/2021 2:00:00 PM
what a beautiful tribute Emile, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 3/15/2021 9:11:00 AM
Thanks Jan, I appreciate your comments and support my friend, Emile.
Date: 3/14/2021 12:35:00 PM
Lovely poem and memorial work. a great write. God bless you with love, Gina
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Date: 3/14/2021 1:45:00 PM
Thanks Regina, I appreciate your comments and support my friend, Emile.
Date: 3/13/2021 10:38:00 AM
Well, after reading your incredible tribute to your mom and how you framed it with the exquisite rose, I think I should withdraw my paltry effort! Such fine work, Emile.
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Date: 3/13/2021 4:07:00 PM
Thanks L. but your words are just that, your words, and they deserve to be heard my friend, Emile.

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