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Deep, Still Darkness

Wrap me in your starry darkness. Let me forget the pain. The moon? Please be my encompassing, flannel blanket. Only the sound of my cat’s breath, I now hear.. Immerse me in her rhythmic, purring serenity. Like God, she is always here to listen. Sometimes, I feel in no man’s land. Friends disappear with excuses aplenty. How does that make me feel? Like a car, trying to accelerate on empty! Radiant sky, dappled with a River of stars. Shine on your daughter, enraptured. Listening to your twinkling from afar. 2/2/2023

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Bill Baker

Date: 2/7/2023 3:58:00 PM

Lovely comforting images to go with the frankness of reality. We all ride on the rollercoaster of emotions at times during our lives. Peace be with you dear poet. Bill

Panagiota Romios
Date: 2/8/2023 1:23:00 PM

It’s funny, friend Bill, I forget most of my writes. Who would’ve. Most of my early ones were longer. I will leave that to the younger folks)); Found some very cool forms… PS PRayers to you and your Sara.))) My cousin fell in the grocery store amd fractured her pelvis….no more dancing like Elvis. Oangie xo

John Lawless

Date: 2/2/2023 11:07:00 AM

Beautifully done...moments to reflect on

Panagiota Romios
Date: 2/2/2023 12:57:00 PM

Greetings and salutations, John. I was up most last night.now having hallucinations…in English~ poetic-burnout! I value your opinion on any work I do. You are highly respected here. Merci! Panagiota xxoo

Stephan McBride

Date: 2/2/2023 7:39:00 AM

This is beautiful, so elegant and gracefully put together, love it

Panagiota Romios
Date: 2/2/2023 12:44:00 PM

Good afternoon., Stephan. Nice to see you again todaty, I bow, like a graceful ballerina, to your oh, so stunning comments, I really hope to write better No, not for popularity’s sake … Never! But to create beauty. We are all equal here, in my eyes, not rock stars~ the last thing I desire are groupies following me..Support from people of your character is far better. Merci! Panagioita xxoo

Joe Dimino

Date: 2/2/2023 6:00:00 AM

"Only the sound of my cat’s breath, I now hear.. Immerse me in her rhythmic, purring serenity." Great imagery! For sure, a volume of love in an unwavering purr.

Panagiota Romios
Date: 2/2/2023 6:15:00 AM

How sweet of you can relate to this! Indeeed, much love in this will agree on the imageryll}}! Panagiota xxoo Thabks you,