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edited to rhyme

Dear Valentine, sweet Valentine, Affectionate are you - alluring and abiding Oh, love of mine, you bring me both peacefulness and mirth, enchanting me with your adoring eyes wherever we are! Take me in your arm, and we go gliding into our own paradise, riding on a star! Never do I want to come back down to earth! 2023 for Brian Strand's 'YOUR PICK' Poetry Contest

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Date: 1/21/2023 9:35:00 AM
Hello Andrea. Yes, always is it time for valentine's day or tell our valentine what they mean to us. This is lovely, no beautiful. I especially like riding on a star. Thank you for sharing your talent and wonderful acrostic format to which you truly made flow. May this day find you well. May all know of love.
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Date: 1/20/2023 7:32:00 PM
This is so very sweet and dreamy ! Simple and alluring. Congratulations Andrea on your win.
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Date: 1/19/2023 10:13:00 AM
You gave me more than roses, you gave me poetry of love. You stood out from the rest, guess you must be the best. Thank you, from my heart :)
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Date: 1/17/2023 8:52:00 AM
Very romantic, exciting and I adore the galactic influence. 'never do I want to come back to Earth' - dreamy! love and hugs, Jennifer.
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Date: 1/17/2023 5:33:00 AM
Such an enchanting valentine verse Andrea, hugs
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Date: 1/17/2023 3:43:00 AM
Very sweet, Andrea:)
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Date: 1/17/2023 2:17:00 AM
That can easily be printed on a card for Valentine's Day. Great write. Hugs.
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Date: 1/16/2023 11:43:00 AM
Now that's a valentine worth soaring with. Well said!
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