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Dear Heron, I Promise

HERON SONNET Betty spoke of god’s face seen through puddles A mirror on the way from bad to good In puddles of my overgrown troubles There is little ebb and flow, air and food Yet each morning and evening without fail Fishing for frogs or what few fish proceed To urge their seed, Great, grey Heron, female Greets me quietly now that we both re-seed In this habitat, watery bowel … womb We find sunrise beside this dying pool God in a stand of agave in bloom Hope in this adult education school This promise: So long hearts beat and blood flows Heron and I will sing of tomorrows

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Date: 5/9/2017 6:06:00 AM
Good Morning Anil. This is an entry to read slowly to capture the worth and essence. Allow me to say your ending couplet sums everything up entirely not that the above words did not. May we all sing tomorrow. May God as well. This is beautiful in every way in its entirety. Have a wonderful morning and day.
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Date: 5/8/2017 10:44:00 AM
dhanyabadh bhaijee. Mujeh Bahuth khush athe jub aap mere Shayari parthe tha (Been to India once only in 2003; tutal-pootal Hindi aathe he! lol) shalom, shanthi Om!
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Date: 5/8/2017 10:36:00 AM
great sonnet Anil, lots of hope here.
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Date: 5/8/2017 9:53:00 AM
A delightful, thought- provoking Sonnet my friend, Ani Deo!
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