Dear Heron, I Promise

HERON SONNET

Betty spoke of god’s face seen through puddles
A mirror on the way from bad to good
In puddles of my overgrown troubles
There is little ebb and flow, air and food

Yet each morning and evening without fail
Fishing for frogs or what few fish proceed
To urge their seed, Great, grey Heron, female
Greets me quietly now that we both re-seed

In this habitat, watery bowel … womb
We find sunrise beside this dying pool
God in a stand of agave in bloom
Hope in this adult education school

This promise: So long hearts beat and blood flows
Heron and I will sing of tomorrows
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Ricci Avatar
May 9, 2017 at 6:06 AM
Good Morning Anil. This is an entry to read slowly to capture the worth and essence. Allow me to say your ending couplet sums everything up entirely not that the above words did not. May we all sing tomorrow. May God as well. This is beautiful in every way in its entirety. Have a wonderful morning and day.
Deo Avatar
May 8, 2017 at 10:44 AM
dhanyabadh bhaijee. Mujeh Bahuth khush athe jub aap mere Shayari parthe tha (Been to India once only in 2003; tutal-pootal Hindi aathe he! lol) shalom, shanthi Om!
Raha Avatar
May 8, 2017 at 10:36 AM
great sonnet Anil, lots of hope here.
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May 8, 2017 at 9:53 AM
A delightful, thought- provoking Sonnet my friend, Ani Deo!
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