Dear Heart Premiere Contest Winner

My Dear Heart,

I owe you the gift of love and gratitude 
for each beat you take to keep me alive,
and for all the times you've been hurt
by bad decisions I made that wounded you.
You always heal, but I know you feel
the distress that sometimes left deep scars.

You bear the brunt of my unbridled emotions,
and yet your devotion to me is unswerving.
We have a mutual admiration society of two,
and so often it's been just me and you.
One heart, one mind, we share a soul.

The one time when you lost all control,
I could not deter you from what you sought.
Oh, dear heart, I dare not blame you
for needing to be loved. Desire is a banquet
that you served me to feast on for a while.
And for that time, I smiled as never before,
but beguile was an act of hardship and sorrow
that I swore we'd not go through again.

What disdain we felt, and in prayer I knelt
that suffering would end and mend our grieving.
Only by believing in you did I make it through
the grief and disdain, the vulnerability and pain.

I owe you my life, and on it I earnestly pledge
never to cause you harm that I can prevent.
No walking through life on the edge of a knife,
no stress will I place beyond what you can bear.
I promise you this.   I solemnly swear.

With cherished love and devotion...


January 29, 2023
Dear Heart Contest
Sponsor: Mystic Rose Rose

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023



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Date: 2/9/2023 12:34:00 AM
Just great and superb fantastic loving poem shared; great to read; congrats for being selected the poem as POD
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Date: 2/9/2023 1:14:00 AM
Thanks very much, Mahtab.
Date: 2/8/2023 9:03:00 AM
Oh my, "No walking through life on the edge of a knife", a wish for all in the journey of love. Congratulation on both awards. Best - Ken
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Lin Lane
Date: 2/8/2023 4:40:00 PM
Thank you very much, Ken.
Date: 2/2/2023 9:32:00 AM
Lin, may I offer my congratulations to you for your first place win and your POTD recognition! This poem is a beautiful recognition of a loving relationship and a commitment to that relationship with in a tender pledge. Just lovely. Blessings to you.
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Lin Lane
Date: 2/2/2023 11:18:00 AM
Thank you, Sam. You honor me with your recognition and gracious remarks.
Date: 2/1/2023 3:00:00 PM
I’ve read this as a pledge to your actual heart and as a pledge to a loved one, it reads tremendously well whichever you intended (my feeling is that’s it’s to your actual heart). An absolutely wonderful write, Lin and a most worthy POTD. Terry
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Lin Lane
Date: 2/1/2023 3:13:00 PM
Hi Terry. Your take on my intention to appeal to my heart is 100% accurate. Thanks for you great remarks.
Date: 2/1/2023 7:57:00 AM
" No walking through life on the edge of a knife, no stress will I place beyond what you can bear." What a strong and beautiful resolution ! Your intimate and deep devotion to your dear heart has really touched me! Beautifully penned. Congratulations, dear Lin on your double honor of trophy win and POTD
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Lin Lane
Date: 2/1/2023 3:11:00 PM
Thank you for your fine comments, Valsa. They’re appreciated.
Date: 1/31/2023 8:53:00 PM
Big congratulations Lin. Sorry I missed this one. Thanks for sharing...
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Lin Lane
Date: 2/1/2023 4:24:00 AM
Thank you, Michael.
Date: 1/31/2023 12:39:00 PM
Congrats on POTD with this wonderful write Lin
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Lin Lane
Date: 1/31/2023 4:30:00 PM
Thanks so much.
Date: 1/31/2023 10:42:00 AM
Very heartfelt, Lin. BOL in the contest and congrats on POTD.
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Lin Lane
Date: 1/31/2023 4:26:00 PM
Thank you.
Date: 1/31/2023 9:24:00 AM
A society of two. What a wonderful phrase. You deserve that POTD.
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Lin Lane
Date: 1/31/2023 4:26:00 PM
Thanks
Date: 1/31/2023 8:25:00 AM
Congratulations on your poem of the day, Lin.
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Lin Lane
Date: 1/31/2023 8:33:00 AM
Thank you so very much, Fin.
Date: 1/31/2023 8:18:00 AM
'No walking through life on the edge of a knife' -- such a memorable line, one of several in this fine write. Congrats on POTD, Lin!
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Lin Lane
Date: 1/31/2023 8:32:00 AM
Thanks for the detail on what you especially liked, Gershon.
Date: 1/31/2023 8:07:00 AM
A wonderful “Dear Heart” poem Lin. Congratulations on receiving the honour of poem of the day… Belle
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Lin Lane
Date: 1/31/2023 8:31:00 AM
Thank you very kindly, Belle.
Date: 1/31/2023 6:57:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. A lovely write. Have a blessed day writing away.
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Lin Lane
Date: 1/31/2023 7:34:00 AM
Thank you very much, Paula.
Date: 1/31/2023 6:40:00 AM
Beautiful, raw and poignant. Words from the heart . Big congratulations on POTD Lin ! Susan :)
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Lin Lane
Date: 1/31/2023 7:34:00 AM
I'm grateful to you for such thoughtful sentiments, Susan. Thanks.
Date: 1/31/2023 6:32:00 AM
Beautifully written Lin. Congratulations on the honor of your POTD! :)
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Lin Lane
Date: 1/31/2023 7:34:00 AM
Thanks so much, Linda.
Date: 1/31/2023 5:59:00 AM
Absolutely stunning! Wow what a work of art !! Congratulations on your top honor today my friend, well done!!!
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Lin Lane
Date: 1/31/2023 7:33:00 AM
Hi Mark. I'm so happy to see you and thanks for your congratulations!
Date: 1/31/2023 5:52:00 AM
Beautiful poem. Congratulations on POTD.
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Lin Lane
Date: 1/31/2023 7:33:00 AM
Thank you very much.
Date: 1/31/2023 5:44:00 AM
- Awesome p.o.t.d. Lin ... congratulations :) - hugs
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Lin Lane
Date: 1/31/2023 7:30:00 AM
Thanks a lot, Anne-Lise.
Date: 1/31/2023 5:43:00 AM
Lin, your poem is beautiful and a FAV for me, and congratulations on receiving the POEM OF THE DAY honor, blessings ~Constance
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Lin Lane
Date: 1/31/2023 7:29:00 AM
Thank you for your gracious comments, Constance.
Date: 1/31/2023 4:06:00 AM
Absolutely beautiful, Lin. Congratulations on POTD!
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Date: 1/31/2023 7:29:00 AM
Thanks very much, Charlie.
Date: 1/31/2023 3:46:00 AM
Lin, this is so deeply heartfelt and beautiful, it reaches the soul! Congratulations on your POTD honors xxoo
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Lin Lane
Date: 1/31/2023 7:29:00 AM
What lovely remarks. Thanks, Mike.
Date: 1/31/2023 3:36:00 AM
Lin, beautifully penned, congratulations on POTD!
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Lin Lane
Date: 1/31/2023 7:28:00 AM
Thanks so much, Tania.
Date: 1/31/2023 3:16:00 AM
Awesome Lin... Congratulations... Into my Favs... Hugs... ~ Ani
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Lin Lane
Date: 1/31/2023 7:28:00 AM
Thanks on both counts, Ani.
Date: 1/31/2023 3:16:00 AM
Sometimes we’re heartless to our own hearts, but I think you’ve made up now with this touching write, congratulations on a wonderful be kind to yourself POTD, cheers David
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Lin Lane
Date: 1/31/2023 7:27:00 AM
Though it usually wants to get its way, we must occasionally give in to keep it pulsing. Thank you for your many comments, David.
Date: 1/31/2023 2:20:00 AM
Wonderful writing - Congratulations on the top win. God bless you always, Love, Gina
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Lin Lane
Date: 1/31/2023 7:26:00 AM
Thanks a lot for your congratulations, Gina.
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