Premiere Contest WinnerDear Heart

My Dear Heart,

I owe you the gift of love and gratitude 
for each beat you take to keep me alive,
and for all the times you've been hurt
by bad decisions I made that wounded you.
You always heal, but I know you feel
the distress that sometimes left deep scars.

You bear the brunt of my unbridled emotions,
and yet your devotion to me is unswerving.
We have a mutual admiration society of two,
and so often it's been just me and you.
One heart, one mind, we share a soul.

The one time when you lost all control,
I could not deter you from what you sought.
Oh, dear heart, I dare not blame you
for needing to be loved. Desire is a banquet
that you served me to feast on for a while.
And for that time, I smiled as never before,
but beguile was an act of hardship and sorrow
that I swore we'd not go through again.

What disdain we felt, and in prayer I knelt
that suffering would end and mend our grieving.
Only by believing in you did I make it through
the grief and disdain, the vulnerability and pain.

I owe you my life, and on it I earnestly pledge
never to cause you harm that I can prevent.
No walking through life on the edge of a knife,
no stress will I place beyond what you can bear.
I promise you this.   I solemnly swear.

With cherished love and devotion...


January 29, 2023
Dear Heart Contest
Sponsor: Mystic Rose Rose
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Bangalee Avatar
February 9, 2023 at 12:34 AM
Just great and superb fantastic loving poem shared; great to read; congrats for being selected the poem as POD
Lane Avatar
February 9, 2023 at 1:14 AM
Thanks very much, Mahtab.
Rone Avatar
February 8, 2023 at 9:03 AM
Oh my, "No walking through life on the edge of a knife", a wish for all in the journey of love. Congratulation on both awards. Best - Ken
Lane Avatar
February 8, 2023 at 4:40 PM
Thank you very much, Ken.
Kauffman Avatar
February 2, 2023 at 9:32 AM
Lin, may I offer my congratulations to you for your first place win and your POTD recognition! This poem is a beautiful recognition of a loving relationship and a commitment to that relationship with in a tender pledge. Just lovely. Blessings to you.
Lane Avatar
February 2, 2023 at 11:18 AM
Thank you, Sam. You honor me with your recognition and gracious remarks.
Flood Avatar
February 1, 2023 at 3:00 PM
I’ve read this as a pledge to your actual heart and as a pledge to a loved one, it reads tremendously well whichever you intended (my feeling is that’s it’s to your actual heart). An absolutely wonderful write, Lin and a most worthy POTD. Terry
Lane Avatar
February 1, 2023 at 3:13 PM
Hi Terry. Your take on my intention to appeal to my heart is 100% accurate. Thanks for you great remarks.
George Avatar
February 1, 2023 at 7:57 AM
" No walking through life on the edge of a knife, no stress will I place beyond what you can bear." What a strong and beautiful resolution ! Your intimate and deep devotion to your dear heart has really touched me! Beautifully penned. Congratulations, dear Lin on your double honor of trophy win and POTD
Lane Avatar
February 1, 2023 at 3:11 PM
Thank you for your fine comments, Valsa. They’re appreciated.
Tor Avatar
January 31, 2023 at 8:53 PM
Big congratulations Lin. Sorry I missed this one. Thanks for sharing...
Lane Avatar
February 1, 2023 at 4:24 AM
Thank you, Michael.
Anaya Avatar
January 31, 2023 at 12:57 PM
A devotion to each other endless in time, through thick and through thin, your promise Lin is soulful and selfless. Your love shines here. Congratulations on your POTD! :)~Anaya
Lane Avatar
January 31, 2023 at 4:30 PM
Thanks so much, Anaya.
May Avatar
January 31, 2023 at 12:39 PM
Congrats on POTD with this wonderful write Lin
Lane Avatar
January 31, 2023 at 4:30 PM
Thanks so much.
Parker Avatar
January 31, 2023 at 11:21 AM
The heart wants what it wants. Control you may, be only so far. Lovely poem, Lin. ~;o]
Lane Avatar
January 31, 2023 at 4:28 PM
Thank you.
Baker Avatar
January 31, 2023 at 11:01 AM
Congratulations on your POTD, Lin! Great entry for the contest. Looking back on loving and being loved can give us great insights. You've shared yours well through your poetry my friend, Bill Enjoy another special day!
Lane Avatar
January 31, 2023 at 4:28 PM
Thank you.
Slaughter Avatar
January 31, 2023 at 10:42 AM
Very heartfelt, Lin. BOL in the contest and congrats on POTD.
Lane Avatar
January 31, 2023 at 4:26 PM
Thank you.
Buhagiar Avatar
January 31, 2023 at 9:24 AM
A society of two. What a wonderful phrase. You deserve that POTD.
Lane Avatar
January 31, 2023 at 4:26 PM
Thanks
Chuuk Avatar
January 31, 2023 at 8:25 AM
Congratulations on your poem of the day, Lin.
Lane Avatar
January 31, 2023 at 8:33 AM
Thank you so very much, Fin.
Wolf Avatar
January 31, 2023 at 8:18 AM
'No walking through life on the edge of a knife' -- such a memorable line, one of several in this fine write. Congrats on POTD, Lin!
Lane Avatar
January 31, 2023 at 8:32 AM
Thanks for the detail on what you especially liked, Gershon.
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January 31, 2023 at 8:07 AM
A wonderful “Dear Heart” poem Lin. Congratulations on receiving the honour of poem of the day… Belle
Lane Avatar
January 31, 2023 at 8:31 AM
Thank you very kindly, Belle.
Goldsmith Avatar
January 31, 2023 at 6:57 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. A lovely write. Have a blessed day writing away.
Lane Avatar
January 31, 2023 at 7:34 AM
Thank you very much, Paula.
Lawrence Avatar
January 31, 2023 at 6:40 AM
Beautiful, raw and poignant. Words from the heart . Big congratulations on POTD Lin ! Susan :)
Lane Avatar
January 31, 2023 at 7:34 AM
I'm grateful to you for such thoughtful sentiments, Susan. Thanks.
Fowler Avatar
January 31, 2023 at 6:32 AM
Beautifully written Lin. Congratulations on the honor of your POTD! :)
Lane Avatar
January 31, 2023 at 7:34 AM
Thanks so much, Linda.
Koplin Avatar
January 31, 2023 at 5:59 AM
Absolutely stunning! Wow what a work of art !! Congratulations on your top honor today my friend, well done!!!
Lane Avatar
January 31, 2023 at 7:33 AM
Hi Mark. I'm so happy to see you and thanks for your congratulations!
Elless Avatar
January 31, 2023 at 5:52 AM
Beautiful poem. Congratulations on POTD.
Lane Avatar
January 31, 2023 at 7:33 AM
Thank you very much.
Andresen Avatar
January 31, 2023 at 5:44 AM
- Awesome p.o.t.d. Lin ... congratulations :) - hugs
Lane Avatar
January 31, 2023 at 7:30 AM
Thanks a lot, Anne-Lise.
La France Avatar
January 31, 2023 at 5:43 AM
Lin, your poem is beautiful and a FAV for me, and congratulations on receiving the POEM OF THE DAY honor, blessings ~Constance
Lane Avatar
January 31, 2023 at 7:29 AM
Thank you for your gracious comments, Constance.
Messina Avatar
January 31, 2023 at 4:06 AM
Absolutely beautiful, Lin. Congratulations on POTD!
Lane Avatar
January 31, 2023 at 7:29 AM
Thanks very much, Charlie.
Gentile Avatar
January 31, 2023 at 3:46 AM
Lin, this is so deeply heartfelt and beautiful, it reaches the soul! Congratulations on your POTD honors xxoo
Lane Avatar
January 31, 2023 at 7:29 AM
What lovely remarks. Thanks, Mike.
Kitchin Avatar
January 31, 2023 at 3:36 AM
Lin, beautifully penned, congratulations on POTD!
Lane Avatar
January 31, 2023 at 7:28 AM
Thanks so much, Tania.
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