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Love's a serenade that never grows old, a melodic harmony of the soul.
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Darling
Every time Daisy’s darling came along Her heart took leap and began beating strong One day he stopped to wish her fine morning That was the day Daisy felt love dawning From then she’d wish him a fabulous day And soon the two couldn't tear themselves away. *+* Daisy awoke joyfully bright today With hope in her heart for Valentine's Day She’d found love and before day came to close She prayed her darling would send her a rose The hours passed by and her heart took a dive Sadly for Daisy no rose had arrived. Then on dot of seven o'clock that night A chauffeur driven car came into sight The car was laden with roses galore Her darling proposed right there at the door Daisy said "yes" without hesitation Then was driven to a grand location. It was the most bizarre night of her life Daisy was to become her darling's wife They wined and dined at the edge of the sea Then Daisy danced with her husband to be To a violinist's sweet serenade This Valentine's Day pure magic was made. *+*+* Poem for Valentine’s Day - 2023 Writing Challenge - D Words - Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Constance La France Theme number 6 - Darling

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Date: 2/21/2023 2:00:00 PM
Belle, beautiful poem and congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge - D Forms, well done, I like the image and the quote also, blessings, Constance
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 2/21/2023 4:16:00 PM
Thank you so much Constance, I’m delighted with the win and enjoyed reading the wonderful poems entered into your contest. Blessings, Belle
Date: 2/12/2023 7:58:00 PM
A very emotive poem. While waiting in expectation for the gift of a single rose, Daisy gets a great load of Roses. Also her love and dreams dramatically getting fruitioned on Valentine's day. Congratulations on your first place win, Belle !
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 2/21/2023 4:13:00 PM
Thank you very much Valsa, I can imagine that many wait in anticipation of receiving a rose, that’s how it goes…. Belle
Date: 2/11/2023 4:34:00 PM
Back with congratulations on taking first place; this is a really well-written piece that demonstrates both skills and knowledge...dear friend.
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 2/11/2023 4:39:00 PM
Thank you my dear friend, I appreciate those words. Belle
Date: 2/11/2023 1:52:00 PM
Congratulations on this winning work. Way to go. Sara
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 2/11/2023 4:37:00 PM
Many thanks Sara, most kind… Belle
Date: 2/11/2023 11:33:00 AM
A great magical lovely night Bell. Congratulations on your win! :)
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 2/11/2023 4:36:00 PM
Thank you very much Linda, most grateful… Belle :)
Date: 2/11/2023 10:20:00 AM
Oh, Belle--so sweet and lovely! I also love your beautiful quote! Congratulations on First!
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 2/11/2023 11:24:00 AM
So nice of you, thank you kindly Ann… Belle :D
Date: 2/11/2023 6:58:00 AM
- A really sweet and wonderful poem, Belle ... congratulations on your win in the contest :) - hugs
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 2/11/2023 9:23:00 AM
Thank you very much Anne-Lise, so kind of you. Hugs, Belle :D
Date: 2/10/2023 7:56:00 PM
"A chauffeur driven car came into sight The car was laden with roses galore" ... magical, I love it when that happens :D I love the D words you used...Daisy & Darling!
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 2/11/2023 2:18:00 AM
Thank you so much Anaya for your delightful response, truly appreciated… Belle :D
Date: 2/10/2023 5:57:00 PM
wow, you pulled out all the stopped for romance on this one, Belle. Way to go!
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 2/10/2023 6:06:00 PM
Thank you Andrea, much appreciated. Belle
Date: 2/9/2023 7:03:00 PM
A buoyant beautiful blossom of a Valentines Day poem, as delightful as a bouquet! BOL Belle
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 2/9/2023 7:30:00 PM
Ah, that’s so nice of you Robert, thank you… Belle
Date: 2/9/2023 8:19:00 AM
This is so sweet. I enjoyed it :)
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 2/9/2023 2:51:00 PM
Thank you very much Heidi… Belle :)
Date: 2/7/2023 8:04:00 AM
A beautiful and meaningful poem, Belle! Your great imagery shed more beauty on this poem. Good luck with the contest
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 2/7/2023 8:37:00 AM
Thanks a lot Sotto, your comments are truly appreciated… Belle
Date: 2/7/2023 6:31:00 AM
Oh, how delightful is this poem! Much enjoyed this story, Belle. Beautiful ending.
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 2/7/2023 8:35:00 AM
Thank you Vijay I’m pleased that you enjoyed the read… Belle
Date: 2/7/2023 2:39:00 AM
Belle, you wrote a great Valentine's poem. Such a sweet gift of roses. Best for a win.
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 2/7/2023 3:04:00 AM
Thank you Victor, blessings and hugs… Belle

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