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Dandelions For Mommy

Most think of this as a weed and don’t consider it a flower, But I watched my young son gather dandelions for an hour. “They are so pretty and yellow, I am picking them just for her. Mommy will love them so because they’re her favorite color.” He squats and he picks each one near the bottom of the stem, Then stares and examines it; they each look different to him. He sniffs in wonderment, carrying each gift over to hand to me, And adds it to the pile of glory he will present to his Mommy. The dandelions are everywhere, scattered throughout the park; He could continue to pick each one until the skies all grow dark. Most people would say the grounds were terribly cared for, But to my son, a more fantastic garden he’d never seen before. The time came for us to go, though he didn’t want to stop; We gathered up his beautiful flowers, over twenty in the lot. So happy and yet so sad he walked up to his Mommy proud and brave, And laid down his gift of love; his bouquet upon her grave.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 6/2/2011 5:39:00 AM
Congrats on your well deserved win in Poet Destroyer's contest Joe. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/2/2011 12:37:00 AM
grats on your awesome contest entry Luv*Skat
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Date: 6/1/2011 5:38:00 PM
Joe!~ CONGRATULATIONS!! with your poem in my old entry contest:-) Thank you very much for supporting my awesome contest. I had so much fun reading each and every entry. I'm glad you where among all my chosen winners. Keep posting your good poems,..p.d.
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Date: 6/1/2011 2:09:00 PM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of p.d., Joe
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Date: 6/1/2011 1:24:00 PM
congrats Joe on another great win in PD's old poem contest..with another great entry luv..enjoy.
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Date: 6/1/2011 1:22:00 PM
Very touching - it should have scored better in this contest. Mike
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Date: 3/26/2011 10:16:00 PM
I think this is the most touching one I've seen yet among those that made it thru round one of those finals. WAy to go with your two, joe.
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Date: 3/9/2011 11:18:00 AM
Congratulations on your two poems making it through round one of PoetrySoup's contest. The best to you in the finals Joe. Love Carol
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Date: 3/7/2011 3:38:00 PM
Congrad's on getting your verses through round 1 of the sites International Contest! Light & Love
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Date: 3/7/2011 12:30:00 PM
Many congrats on your two first round successes Joe - rgds Janette
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Date: 3/6/2011 6:14:00 PM
Congrats Joe on your first round success in the Poetry Soup contest luv..
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Date: 2/18/2011 12:58:00 PM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Joe. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/17/2011 9:00:00 AM
Touching, Joe. A sad picture made beautiful. Congrats on the selection. Love, Dave
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Date: 2/13/2011 8:48:00 PM
Congrats Joe on another featured poem this week on the Soup.. wonderful piece to share with us all my friend with luv..
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Date: 7/3/2010 12:41:00 AM
Wonderful , JOe, COngrats!
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Date: 7/2/2010 10:47:00 PM
Congratulations Joe, on your success in RP's contest. Agape, Moses
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Date: 7/2/2010 1:17:00 PM
Joe, the colour of the Dandelions is one of the lovliest goldy yellows in nature. I don't see them as weeds, as weeds are an insult to their beauty. Many congratulations on your win in Constance's fine contest >> James
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Date: 7/2/2010 10:21:00 AM
Congratulations Joe on your poem being in the spotlight in A Rambling Poet's contest "The Flower". Love, Carol
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Date: 7/1/2010 8:51:00 PM
wow , deep heart felt ~you have moved the crowd to emotion,splendid!!~ congrats to you ~Rick
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Date: 7/1/2010 8:38:00 PM
I told you it was a winner! I loved this one the first time I read it but I loved it even more this time! Congrat's on your win!~Tirzah~
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Date: 7/1/2010 8:19:00 PM
Oh the last line shocked me. I can see that darling boy with his armload of beautiful flowers. Lovely poem, Joe .Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 7/1/2010 7:09:00 PM
Congrats Joe on your HM in the Flower contest with this wonderful write capturing a special honor for u.. enjoy my friend.. and sending greetings to u from the "Sweetheart" with luv from Hawaii.. on the Garden Isle .. amongst gorgeous orchids tonight.. luv..
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Date: 7/1/2010 7:07:00 PM
Tell me it isnt true..please. what a gorgeous poem....Congrats. Bg
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Date: 6/28/2010 10:13:00 PM
oh too sad...your gonna make me cry!
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Date: 6/26/2010 10:28:00 AM
Joe, I was enjoying reading about this outing so much until I got to the last line, which brought me chills. Constance will love the sentiment in this one. Excellent work -- and that twist at the end really threw me. Mr. Hitchcock has some competition! Love, Carolyn
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