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Dancing With a Shadow

How pale the celestial stars are tonight Moonlight doesn't glow a shade of gold Without his hand to hold nothing is right Dancing with a shadow offers no romance for when I turn around, he's taken flight May 16, 2023 Bite Size Contest No 64 Sponsored by Line Gauthier

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Date: 5/30/2023 1:25:00 PM
Lin, so beautiful, I love your poem, well done !
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Lin Lane
Date: 5/30/2023 1:49:00 PM
Constance, I’m always grateful for your sincere reviews. Thank you.
Date: 5/20/2023 3:52:00 PM
Sad but true my dear poet. Have a great weekend! Bill
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Lin Lane
Date: 5/21/2023 3:02:00 AM
Thank you for reading and leaving your kind thoughts, Bill.
Date: 5/17/2023 7:18:00 AM
beautiful in its sadness my friend. hugs Jan xx
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Lin Lane
Date: 5/21/2023 3:02:00 AM
Thanks so much, Jan.
Date: 5/16/2023 3:34:00 PM
Turns beautifully on a sad note Lin, leaving a sense of absence. Excellent
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Lin Lane
Date: 5/16/2023 8:06:00 PM
Thanks ever so much for your thoughts, Paul.

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