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Trees look down, breath catching, at reflections mirrored in mountain river's deep, quiet pools; those shy wallflower maidens leaved in sizzle tinted dance gowns blush scarlet beneath the sun's bold gaze, accept his hand, swirling to a wind waltz. Copyright, September 20,2015 Faye Lanham Gibson

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Date: 10/2/2015 10:19:00 PM
Faye, congratulations on your awesome Etheree win. <3 SKAT
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Date: 10/1/2015 10:40:00 PM
Beautiful imagery in your Etheree, Faye. Congratulations on your podium win! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 10/1/2015 11:54:00 AM
Lovely, Faye
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Date: 10/1/2015 10:23:00 AM
Beautiful symbolism within your words. Kudos on your win!
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Date: 10/1/2015 5:35:00 AM
Outstanding imagery in this beautiful etheree Faye. I love it. I have to fave it too. Congratulations on a top win my friend! 7
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Date: 10/1/2015 3:26:00 AM
Wonderful poem Faye n so is the win! Big congrats!
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Date: 10/1/2015 1:48:00 AM
this was such beautiful personification!! Wow, the part about the breath catching as they see their reflections. GREAT thinking!! Congrats on your super win in my contest!
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Date: 9/21/2015 4:40:00 PM
Beautiful, creative imagery for fall, Faye! love it and a 7 :)
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Date: 9/21/2015 12:17:00 PM
Faye, oh so lovely . Beautifully penned 7 and thanks for visiting my poem, under green leaves dripping. . .
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Date: 9/21/2015 12:45:00 AM
This is so beautiful Faye. I always pictures the leaves dancing to Autumn's melody. Good luck in the contest. I loved it! 7
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Date: 9/20/2015 9:51:00 PM
:) Beautiful, Faye. I loved the part about sizzle tinted dance gowns...How creative. The wind being the sun's hand....Wow. You really wrote a beauty here. Hugs
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