Faye Gibson Poet Etheree

Dance Partners

Trees
look down,
breath catching,
at reflections
mirrored in mountain
river's deep, quiet pools;
those shy wallflower maidens
leaved in sizzle tinted dance gowns
blush scarlet beneath the sun's bold gaze,
accept his hand, swirling to a wind waltz.

Copyright, September 20,2015
Faye Lanham Gibson

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Skat A October 2, 2015 at 10:19 PM Faye, congratulations on your awesome Etheree win. <3 SKAT

Sandra Haight October 1, 2015 at 10:40 PM Beautiful imagery in your Etheree, Faye. Congratulations on your podium win! Hugs, Sandra

James Inman October 1, 2015 at 11:54 AM Lovely, Faye

Dan Cwiak October 1, 2015 at 10:23 AM Beautiful symbolism within your words. Kudos on your win!

Connie Marcum Wong October 1, 2015 at 5:35 AM Outstanding imagery in this beautiful etheree Faye. I love it. I have to fave it too. Congratulations on a top win my friend! 7

Dr. Upma A. Sharma October 1, 2015 at 3:26 AM Wonderful poem Faye n so is the win! Big congrats!

Andrea Dietrich October 1, 2015 at 1:48 AM this was such beautiful personification!! Wow, the part about the breath catching as they see their reflections. GREAT thinking!! Congrats on your super win in my contest!

Laura Leiser September 21, 2015 at 4:40 PM Beautiful, creative imagery for fall, Faye! love it and a 7 :)

Constance La France September 21, 2015 at 12:17 PM Faye, oh so lovely . Beautifully penned 7 and thanks for visiting my poem, under green leaves dripping. . .

Connie Marcum Wong September 21, 2015 at 12:45 AM This is so beautiful Faye. I always pictures the leaves dancing to Autumn's melody. Good luck in the contest. I loved it! 7

Eileen Manassian September 20, 2015 at 9:51 PM :) Beautiful, Faye. I loved the part about sizzle tinted dance gowns...How creative. The wind being the sun's hand....Wow. You really wrote a beauty here. Hugs