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Daffodil - Hexsonneta Contest

A daffodil I see yellow beautiful head showing in barren bed This typifies to me Spring blooms makes me happy Winter worries I shred Soon the bees will be here Pollen coating their hair Flower to flower share Many flowers I fear Would die unless bees near Working yet unaware. A daffodil to me Means winter woes set free

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 9/21/2015 2:14:00 AM
Wonderful write Seren n yet another superb win! Big congrats!
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Date: 9/19/2015 7:34:00 PM
Congratulations, Seren...I love daffodils, so happy in the spring.
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Date: 9/19/2015 4:59:00 PM
Seren, you only got marked down for meter. But the imagery is a real delight in this one. Sweet message of spring. Congrats for your win.
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Date: 9/19/2015 4:24:00 PM
Seren, :-) Congratulations on your wonderful win! *SKAT*
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Date: 9/19/2015 11:28:00 AM
Dropping back with my congrats Seren:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 8/18/2015 11:35:00 AM
We are just in the process of ordering bulbs for next year - your poem is delightful Seren - good luck:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 8/18/2015 4:26:00 AM
Having a roof garden with many flowers I enjoy the visit of bees. I loved your poem dear Seren it is so peaceful and inspiring!
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Date: 8/18/2015 2:30:00 AM
Lovely, Seren. This is a hard form. I'm considering giving it a go. You've done a lovely job with this theme...Love the ending two lines. :)
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