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Artists, Painters, Writers, and Poets - Red Dead Redemption 2 Wiki

Poets, writers, artists, and photographers share a similar challenge; we all constantly must deal with getting the perfect exposure---that balance of light and darkness that creates harmony and clarity in our presentation. Ambiguity is brought into focus, transformed into understanding, or even internalized by correctly contrasting the dark and light colors or sides of our presentation. When thinking about the necessity of dualities in a poem, a story, a painting, or a photograph; I can’t help but think of the necessity of loneliness to fully feel love, the feelings of rejection and defeat needed to properly appreciate success, or the presence of clearly stated detail to bring focus, purpose, and clarity to our work. I ask myself and you: what good is it to write a poem, an article, paint a picture, or take a photograph, if all we do is create a piece of work that is filled with ambiguity, vagueness, and illegitimacy? Instead, we must hone our skills, persevere, and create that which --- when observed or read by our audience---- is focused, clear, and an authentic revelation of our thoughts, feelings, and awareness of our subject. Let’s make sure our audiences are neither blinded by the light nor left in the darkness; but instead, allow them to experience a sense of true communication.

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Date: 1/2/2024 7:44:00 AM
You've made me stop and think Bill. Who we write a poem for and why we write a poem, I'm guessing, tends to determine our approach. In the main, we write for ourselves and / or other poets here at PS. I like Andrew Motion's take on things (He was UK Poet Laureate 1999 - 2009).."Too often the laureate is subtly, or not so subtly, encouraged to write poems that go into a subject through the front door. But sometimes it is better to go round the back, or through a window or down the chimney..." Cheers - Gary
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Date: 1/2/2024 11:39:00 AM
I agree with the quote, Gary. Sometimes the less obvious way is the more enjoyable way to convey our poetic voices. Happy New Year, my friend! Cheers! Bill
Date: 1/1/2024 11:56:00 AM
Well said, Bill. I try to pen poems that convey messages, be it humor, or a cause, or a heartfelt Christian poem. Your writing covers so much. Thanks for writing this prose. Happy New Year!
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Date: 1/1/2024 5:18:00 PM
I love your poetry, Regina. Write On! my friend. Happy New Year! Your poet friend in Texas, Bill
Date: 1/1/2024 7:15:00 AM
I like this. Myself I endeavour to write poetry that is appreciated by people who are not inclined to read poetry. There is an art to be able to convey feelings an paint images on peoples minds. You have mastered that art. Blessings Rick.
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Date: 1/1/2024 5:20:00 PM
Thank you for your kind words of encouragement, Rick. I'm still learning, but my hearts the same. Happy New Year! Your poet friend in Texas, Bill
Date: 12/30/2023 9:35:00 PM
Then again, clarity is in short supply today... As well, modern art rejects clarity altogether... ~ Swimming upstream
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Date: 1/1/2024 12:10:00 AM
Good point, gw. Something to think about, my friend. Happy New Year! Bill
Date: 12/29/2023 10:36:00 AM
I agree, they should be carried along. However it should not restrict how the poet or artist want to interpret their work because to them it's more than an image or a piece. And sometimes they hide behind those unclear words so they don't seem vulnerable. I also think the ambiguity helps the audience to look deeply and find the creator's link or meaning in the piece, it provokes thoughts and help readers not be basic.
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Date: 1/1/2024 7:16:00 AM
Well said.
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Date: 12/29/2023 3:55:00 PM
Thank you for you thoughtful and enhancing comments, Tonye. Your points are well taken, and I agree with all you've said here. I like to write poetry that allows those seeking more to discover layers in the poem, deeper or hidden truths. Smiles and Blessings Bill
Date: 12/29/2023 6:38:00 AM
I find this tale to be quite intriguing, and I concur that effective communication is a critical component of talent. I like your suggestion that if artists believe they are prepared for more mature work, they should produce works that reflect that. Happy New Year 2024
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Date: 12/29/2023 4:15:00 PM
Thank you for the uplifting comment, my dear friend. I appreciate your support and look forward to a great 2024 for both of us! Smiles ~ Blessings Bill
Date: 12/28/2023 9:38:00 PM
I thoroughly agree with the need for clarity if one wants readers to actually comprehend and appreciate the intent and content of a poem and your write eloquently expresses towards that end as well as the acknowledgement of the art of writing,. abstract poems is not my cup of tea when it comes to writing. yet i can still admire abstract muse which seems open to interpretation in all ambiguity. Kudos. ..>>>>>>>>>>><<<<<<<<<<<^^^^^^^^~~~~~~~ plz also read and comment my newest poem too
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Date: 12/29/2023 4:17:00 PM
Thank you for the thoughtful comment, S. Zaynab, I appreciate you input on my poetry. I'm heading over to your page now, my friend. Bill
Date: 12/28/2023 1:22:00 AM
True well said, but some just express in the form of art and otherwise like abstract form of art, in poetry too metaphors may seem ambiguous but my idea of being ambiguous is because i dont sometimes want readers who may not know metaphors to comprehend what im saying because i feel too exposed .. so i rather hide and leave it upto interpretation. However you have a point some tend to overdo it and leave readers dumbfound, in situations where you write for contests or for readers, i think we
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Date: 12/28/2023 3:46:00 PM
Thank you for sharing your thoughts with me, Ink. Thats all I'm doing when I write this type of articles. I'm changing all the time; I hope it helps people stop and think about what they're writing. Obviously, you do, my dear friend. Sara and I are doing fine, just a couple of Dr. appointment this week, so not as active as usual. Thanks for the Light. It's always welcome here at Baker's cave. Sara and I want to wish you a wonderful 2024. You are a valued friend of ours and we love your poetic voice. Bill & Sara Baker
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Date: 12/28/2023 1:23:00 AM
Should learn to be more concise otherwise whats the point? I love reading work on soup. And your write here is so insightful, love it dear bill. Hope all is well for you and sara. Sending you light always
Date: 12/27/2023 11:33:00 PM
Sage admonition, Texas Bill. I think being authentic as a poet begets pieces that can be inspirational, supportive, informational, romantic, political, spiritual, and filled with wit and wisdom. Otherwise...what's the point? :o)
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Date: 12/28/2023 3:40:00 PM
I like the way you think, Arlo. Write On! Bill
Date: 12/27/2023 5:50:00 PM
Right on! Loved reading your thoughts...
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Date: 12/28/2023 3:39:00 PM
Thanks for the visit and comment, Paige. Have a pleasant weekend, my friend. Bill
Date: 12/27/2023 12:45:00 AM
"sure our audiences are neither blinded by the light nor left in the darkness; but instead, allow them to experience a sense of true communication" - A very powerful writing.
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Date: 12/27/2023 5:05:00 PM
Thanks, Christuraj. I hope all is weel with you and your family, my friend. Have a great 2024! Bill
Date: 12/26/2023 5:00:00 PM
I like your message of quality with effort in this story, Bill. If artists think they're fit for adult work, then create like one!
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Date: 12/26/2023 5:23:00 PM
I agree with that thought on artist, David. :-) Thanks for the visit and comment, my friend. Have a great week! Bill
Date: 12/26/2023 3:03:00 PM
This is an eye-opening prose and I would agree that communication is an important part of talent. Understanding is the key. Hugs for this one.
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Date: 12/26/2023 4:39:00 PM
Thanks for the comments and the hug, Hilda. Big hugs for you, my friend. Bill
Date: 12/26/2023 10:03:00 AM
That is the power of words it is the best form of communication, but this can be effected by so many different things... Great thoughts and many will agree with you...
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Date: 12/26/2023 5:21:00 PM
Thank you, my dear friend. Bill
Date: 12/25/2023 10:08:00 PM
Thanks for the beautiful thoughts you've shared my dear poet friend, Bill. I like and strongly agree with all of what you've expressed here. Thanks a lot. Merry Christmas to you my dear poet friend. Wishing you and your family/loved ones all the BEST that the season has to offer. This occasion and this coming year, may you all be gifted with countless blessings! Hugs
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Date: 12/26/2023 5:38:00 PM
Thank you, my sweet friend. Cop cum Mach (spelling is probably wrong). Merry Christmas and Happy New Year, Len! Smile and blessings to my poet friend in Thailand. Bill & Sara Baker
Date: 12/25/2023 8:01:00 PM
the necessity of dualities in a poem, a story, a painting, or a photograph and the final paragraph. Good pondering!
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Date: 12/25/2023 8:47:00 PM
Thanks for the comments, Kim. I was hoping people would think about this, not necessarily agree with everything I said. Thanks for pondering my friend. Bill

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