Counting Ripples

Sadness weeps not for itself
rather from broken windows of a child
where each piece lay by the tracks of despair
where unshaven shadowed men slept in bushes...waiting
to board tomorrow in their continuous circle of failure 

it is the broken sidewalk
felt by little feet, through the holes of shoes
one step at a time
the water fountain of white's only
that dripped constantly with hate

the scorched eyes that pierced cotton armor
sewed by a Mother's hand
worn on the body of the bowed head of embarrassment
that walked by pointed fingers of laughter
never accepted, never welcomed

it is the tears that make night longer
the rush of blood following a wounded trail

it is the soldier that fought a hundred fights of respect
and the pounding fist breaking walls
the lonely cry of empty nights
on narrow bridges with a sad moon
counting ripples lapping stones
on the banks of tomorrow
wondering about fate...listening to crows
as they call out the name of darkness
wanting death to appear, without regret

to find a planted stone in an empty field
without footprints...where grass grew
to cover any reason that someone lived


2/12/18
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Kauffman Avatar
February 25, 2020 at 5:42 PM
Amazing, Frederic. So many fresh phrases woven into the darkness of your imagery and outstanding metaphors. Really touched me! Congratulations So glad you brought it out again!
Gentry Avatar
April 18, 2018 at 7:59 PM
Congratulations on your win with this powerful poem!
Barry-Nishanian Avatar
April 18, 2018 at 9:27 AM
"Tracks of despair...fountains that ..drip with hate" on and on".the last three lines...no wonder you deserve congrats.
Roper Avatar
April 17, 2018 at 6:24 PM
Congratulation on your win, Frederic, a wonderful write.. Hugs Eve
Gauthier Avatar
April 17, 2018 at 3:46 PM
Congratulations on your podium finish with this lovely poem, Frederic.
Hamilton Avatar
April 17, 2018 at 2:59 PM
What a wonderful poem Frederic, I felt and saw everything, amazing imagery, congrats on another win!
Ashley Avatar
February 27, 2018 at 8:22 PM
Such a deep poem full of meaning, emotion Frederic. With beautiful use of metaphor, each line is poetically poignant, but for me, the last three lines were especially heartfelt and sorrowful. Congratulations on your excellent win!
Haight Avatar
February 27, 2018 at 3:53 PM
Wonderful metaphors and emotion, Frederic. Congratulations on your fine placement on this short list of winners! Sandra
Wolf Avatar
February 27, 2018 at 11:55 AM
Powerful images a-plenty in this powerful write...I was hooked by lines 3 - 5: So reminiscent of the character of Jurgis in Upton Sinclair's polemic, "The Jungle."...Thank you, Frederic, for this wonderful read, a well-deserved winner. Best of everything, Gershon
Wolf Avatar
February 27, 2018 at 11:55 AM
Powerful images a-plenty in this powerful write...I was hooked by lines 3 - 5: So reminiscent of the character of Jurgis in Upton Sinclair's polemic, "The Jungle."...Thank you, Frederic, for this wonderful read, a well-deserved winner. Best of everything, Gershon
Lane Avatar
February 27, 2018 at 10:36 AM
Frederic, your metaphors are outstanding in this one. It's as impossible to count ripples lapping stones as it is to count a person's sorrows. Excellent write.
Sands Avatar
February 27, 2018 at 9:32 AM
Wow, Congratulations for your win with this powerful poem! :)
Gauthier Avatar
February 27, 2018 at 8:07 AM
What a wonderful poem. Congrats on your most deserving win, Frederic.
Scars Avatar
February 27, 2018 at 5:51 AM
words can't express how much this touched me. You truly are one of my favorite poets here Frederic. You are so deep and meaningful, full of metaphors and emotion. Everything I love to read! congrats and thank you :)-luloo
Richards Avatar
February 17, 2018 at 6:41 PM
Well now......wow..... I almost don't know what to say. This one has almost made me speechless, the poignancy of emotions that wells up from each line is palpable that one can feel the shame, cold, fear, loneliness, hopelessness and despair . One of the best I've read in a long time . Wow
Hamilton Avatar
April 17, 2018 at 3:00 PM
I agree Carrie wow!
Dietrich Avatar
February 14, 2018 at 11:36 PM
Oh my gosh, this is SO good, Frederick. Heart felt and reminding me of an old folk song from Russia "when will they ever learn. When will they ever learn?" I think it was called Where have all the flowers gone.
One Avatar
February 13, 2018 at 6:41 AM
Frederic this is a touching poem, really pulls at the heart strings..
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