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Count To Ten

a sestina To every zephyr comes a bold quest and every squall can whisper regret. Those who will take the deeper breath are those who gain a discerning spirit. The eye of a storm loves the calm while the vortex lives for the clash. When two people sense a coming clash because they’re on a divergent quest. One may keep peace, remaining calm while the other shows no regret for baring an ornery spirit - hell-bent, ranting with “baited” breath. The pacifist, holding his breath, prefers to downscale any clash disowning the negative spirit. The personality of quest depends on one’s view of regret. Cold is how the gutsy perceive calm. Some get uptight when life is too calm; conflict leaves another gasping for breath. Satisfaction versus regret - can both be balanced without clash? Is there a more productive quest for passive and proactive spirits? With open mind, the hostile spirit can work at finding a sense of calm. When threatened with a thorny request, count to ten and take a deep breath. At the invitation to clash, do not attend; send your regrets. If you are one who shrinks from regret confronting an in-your-face spirit, do not forgo the challenging clash. Count to ten; dismantle your normal calm and debate ‘til you’re out-of-breath. Learn the thrill of making the conquest. Sometimes in regret, I answer with calm, then try a raw spirit with weighted breath. Peace reigns both in clash and a quieter quest. June 7, 2014 contest: What brings you peace hostess: Chantelle Cooke

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Date: 5/23/2021 1:25:00 PM
Well written, Reason! Congrats on your 1st place win in Chantelle's contest! Blessings, Kim M
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Date: 5/23/2021 8:47:00 PM
thank you, Kim. There's a place for the variety of people that God has placed on this earth for just such a time as this. Written in appreciation of many spirits.
Date: 6/28/2014 9:24:00 AM
Very interesting write with perfect sestina, Reason. congrats on the win
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Date: 5/23/2021 8:44:00 PM
thanks,Dr. Ram, I welcome your comment, haven't done many sestinas, they are a challenge.
Date: 6/28/2014 12:37:00 AM
You managed to keep your poem going forward despite the mandated repetition. Great job. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 6/27/2014 9:10:00 AM
congrats Reason .......Seren
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Date: 6/27/2014 7:53:00 PM
thanks, Seren, enjoyed the contest.
Date: 6/27/2014 8:41:00 AM
Congratulations, Reason, on nice win in this difficult challenge. Mohan
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Date: 5/23/2021 8:45:00 PM
I appreciate your comment, Mohan.
Date: 6/9/2014 8:56:00 AM
I'm not familiar with the form, but I appreciate the intricacy of this piece.
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Date: 6/10/2014 10:53:00 PM
thank you, Richard. It's not a form I am comfortable with as yet...I am too used to rhyme.
Date: 6/8/2014 4:59:00 AM
A perfect sestina, good luck in the contest, Reason
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Date: 6/27/2014 7:52:00 PM
Thank you, Dr. Ram. I welcome the placement of 4th in the contest. I have written maybe a couple of other sestinas.

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