Count To Ten

a sestina

To every zephyr comes a bold quest
and every squall can whisper regret.
Those who will take the deeper breath
are those who gain a discerning spirit. 
The eye of a storm loves the calm
while the vortex lives for the clash.

When two people sense a coming clash
because they’re on a divergent quest.
One may keep peace, remaining calm
while the other shows no regret
for baring an ornery spirit -
hell-bent, ranting with “baited” breath.

The pacifist, holding his breath,
prefers to downscale any clash
disowning the negative spirit.
The personality of quest
depends on one’s view of regret.
Cold is how the gutsy perceive calm.

Some get uptight when life is too calm;
conflict leaves another gasping for breath.
Satisfaction versus regret -
can both be balanced without clash?
Is there a more productive quest 
for passive and proactive spirits?

With open mind, the hostile spirit
can work at finding a sense of calm.
When threatened with a thorny request,
count to ten and take a deep breath.
At the invitation to clash,
do not attend; send your regrets.

If you are one who shrinks from regret
confronting an in-your-face spirit,
do not forgo the challenging clash.
Count to ten; dismantle your normal calm
and debate ‘til you’re out-of-breath.
Learn the thrill of making the conquest. 


Sometimes in regret, I answer with calm,
then try a raw spirit with weighted breath.
Peace reigns both in clash and a quieter quest. 

June 7, 2014

contest:  What brings you peace
hostess:  Chantelle Cooke
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Merryman Avatar
May 23, 2021 at 1:25 PM
Well written, Reason! Congrats on your 1st place win in Chantelle's contest! Blessings, Kim M
Poteet Avatar
May 23, 2021 at 8:47 PM
thank you, Kim. There's a place for the variety of people that God has placed on this earth for just such a time as this. Written in appreciation of many spirits.
Mehta Avatar
June 28, 2014 at 9:24 AM
Very interesting write with perfect sestina, Reason. congrats on the win
Poteet Avatar
May 23, 2021 at 8:44 PM
thanks,Dr. Ram, I welcome your comment, haven't done many sestinas, they are a challenge.
Johnson Avatar
June 28, 2014 at 12:37 AM
You managed to keep your poem going forward despite the mandated repetition. Great job. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
Roberts Avatar
June 27, 2014 at 9:10 AM
congrats Reason .......Seren
Poteet Avatar
June 27, 2014 at 7:53 PM
thanks, Seren, enjoyed the contest.
Chutani Avatar
June 27, 2014 at 8:41 AM
Congratulations, Reason, on nice win in this difficult challenge. Mohan
Poteet Avatar
May 23, 2021 at 8:45 PM
I appreciate your comment, Mohan.
Lamoureux Avatar
June 9, 2014 at 8:56 AM
I'm not familiar with the form, but I appreciate the intricacy of this piece.
Poteet Avatar
June 10, 2014 at 10:53 PM
thank you, Richard. It's not a form I am comfortable with as yet...I am too used to rhyme.
Mehta Avatar
June 8, 2014 at 4:59 AM
A perfect sestina, good luck in the contest, Reason
Poteet Avatar
June 27, 2014 at 7:52 PM
Thank you, Dr. Ram. I welcome the placement of 4th in the contest. I have written maybe a couple of other sestinas.
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