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____________________ _______________ ___________ ______ __ barren rock cliffs edge skyward to an ocean of endless blue gazing across the calm lake my heart engulfed with possibilities anew colors of brass trumpets and almond drops adorn a scape of lavish green where yellow purity is born within a single moment my spirit cry rejoice cleansed in Gods grace I am once again reborn __ A John Freeman Contest

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Date: 4/27/2011 4:37:00 PM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
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Date: 4/27/2011 9:49:00 AM
Congratulations on the fourth place win in the contest, Rick
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Date: 4/27/2011 9:04:00 AM
Excellent write on this theme.loved the idea of being cleansed and reborn. Many Congrats on your win Rick.best wishes, gautami
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Date: 4/27/2011 8:29:00 AM
Great to see your success in the top ten with this great poem Rick." Possibilities anew! Congratulations on your special entry's grace. Agape, Moses
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Date: 4/26/2011 8:43:00 PM
I really like the last line Rick. cgh
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Date: 4/26/2011 6:33:00 PM
Nice writing here! Congrad's on your win! Light & Love
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Date: 4/26/2011 3:55:00 PM
It is understand to be "consumed" by the beauty of this site, Rick, and to feel a renewed sense of hope. Congratulations on your success in John's contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 4/26/2011 12:30:00 PM
Congratulations ^Rick on your win in the John Moses Freeman's contest "Rubaiyat". Love, Carol
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Date: 4/26/2011 12:25:00 PM
Congrats Rick on your amazing win in John's contest with this perfect poem my friend using the new form so well.. u are on a role so cool luv.. enjoy another top ten victory with luv..
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Date: 4/26/2011 12:07:00 PM
Many congratulations on your fourth place win Rick (((( applause )))) well done.....:) smiles
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Date: 4/26/2011 11:10:00 AM
Congratulations on 4th place win with this beauty. I enjoyed reading this wonderful write. Caryl
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Date: 4/26/2011 11:07:00 AM
Beautiful, Rick, . Many congrats on your SUPER WIN, Lainie
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Date: 4/15/2011 1:17:00 PM
Good write for the contest Rich! [Dear Rich I loved all the messages you left on The Passing on of Little Bee which no one seems to be commenting on THANKS!] SOUP MAIL Light & Love
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Date: 4/14/2011 3:18:00 PM
Very vivid and creative description of the photograph, Rick. The colors of brass trumpets would make my spirits rejoice as well. Excellent entry for John's contest. Wishing you success! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 4/14/2011 11:23:00 AM
i find such solace and warmth in this garceful piece, rick! "lavish green green and yellow purity" phrase satnds out! awesome.. winning's best to you! :) huggs, nette
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