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Confused Surreal 9-11

Confused Surreal 9-11 By Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen While waiting for my car repair, the TV was turned on. Then one by one before shocked eyes, twin towers had been hit. At first we thought it wasn't real when tower one was struck. Dismal chatter bursting, frightful, brought crazed surreal stares. Then one by one before shocked eyes, twin towers had been hit. Thick smoke emerged from windowpanes dead silence on each face. Dismal chatter bursting, frightful, brought crazed surreal stares. We called the workers from the shop and franticness took place. Thick smoke emerged from windowpanes dead silence on each face. While watching number one in smoke, we saw the plane hit two. We called the workers from the shop and franticness took place. Together, strangers in a room, united by worst fears. While watching number one in smoke, we saw the plane hit two. Trapped people started jumping out like mice between two poles. Together, strangers in a room, united by worst fears. And human after human jumped from windows to their doom- Trapped people started jumping out like mice between two poles. Frights like a horror movie airing on the morning news. And human after human jumped from windows to their doom- Reporters couldn't hold it in and quivers seized their voice. Frights like a horror movie airing on the morning news. News flashes disillusionments then changed from bad to worse. Reporters couldn't hold it in and quivers seized their voice. The pentagon was next in line. God! Clear it out in time? (continued) For Nathan Leccese's 9-11 Contest. Please read the continuation.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 4/2/2010 1:41:00 PM
LThis is a wonderful form to choose for this tragic tale. I will continue on next part
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Date: 4/2/2010 1:18:00 PM
Dane Ann, many congratulations on your win in Nathan's fine contest, based on the tragic events of 9-11,2001 >> James
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Date: 4/2/2010 12:41:00 PM
Congratulations, Dane Ann, on this amazing poem....a memory that none of us can forget. Well done! ~ Love, Carrie
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Date: 4/2/2010 11:43:00 AM
Congratulations on a Honorable Mention in my 9-11 contest! Nate
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Date: 9/12/2009 7:55:00 AM
Nicely done, I still have tears when I think about it. We were on vacation that week and we sat glued to the tv in shock.
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