Confessional- Quatern

Raw conscience brought me to my knees,
no strength left to defy my shame.
Soul manacled, bereft of keys,
pure guilt by any other name.

To gain my life bought by his loss
raw conscience brought me to my knees.
I face torn sinews on the cross
for by this death mankind he frees.

Hands clasped, head bowed I make my pleas
recounting sins like tables times,
raw conscience brought me to my knees
to man and Lord confess my crimes.

Now cleansed, hands, eyes and soul I lift.
Though this penance is by decree
and liberty the promised gift-
raw conscience brought me to my knees.

For 'Show me Quatern poetry' , sponsored by Andrea Deitrich
27th January 2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016


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Date: 2/7/2016 11:51:00 AM
Viv, always a delight to hear from you
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Date: 2/7/2016 6:13:00 AM
Congratulations on a fine Quatrain, Viv. A clean conscience is so valuable.
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Date: 2/7/2016 11:34:00 AM
Thanks Lin, an interesting but tricky form to canoodle with x
Date: 2/7/2016 5:27:00 AM
A beautiful Quatern, Viv. Many congrats on your win. Elaine
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Date: 2/7/2016 11:33:00 AM
Thanks very much Elaine, appreciate your visit. Viv x
Date: 2/7/2016 4:18:00 AM
VIV, Congrats in Andrea's contest. LINDA
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Date: 2/7/2016 11:32:00 AM
Thanks, Linda, Viv x
Date: 2/6/2016 6:42:00 PM
Viv I had this lower at first and then I reread it and decided the theme was so profound, it deserved at least a fourth place. GREAT topic and well executed. Congrats for the win.
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Date: 2/7/2016 12:56:00 AM
Thanks, Andrea appreciate your judgement in what is to me, a tricky form. Viv x
Date: 2/6/2016 6:31:00 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Viv:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 2/7/2016 12:58:00 AM
Thanks Jan, or 'go raibh maith agat' as they say in Dublin. Actually, I much prefer 'diddly doy doy doy'. Viv x
Date: 2/2/2016 7:31:00 PM
It's good to confess what is inside if it be something you need to forgive yourself for. I should probably partake, but I must prefer holding it all in. Life forces us to make so many interesting choices.
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Date: 2/2/2016 10:39:00 PM
Indded, Duke, but my legs aren't stong enough to carry the baggage :) Thanks for dropping by. Regards, Viv
Date: 2/1/2016 9:11:00 AM
Wonderful spiritual write...
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Date: 2/1/2016 11:31:00 PM
Thanks, Probir, I appreciate your comments and your visit. Regards, Viv
Date: 2/1/2016 7:14:00 AM
Excellent spiritual poem. Superb ending , a pleasure to read such a gem crafted by you my friend. A7
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Date: 2/1/2016 7:55:00 AM
Thanks Robert, hope you're well. Regards, Viv
Date: 1/27/2016 6:48:00 PM
G'day Viv ... great poem Viv to free your soul. Tell me though, do the words 'not you again' sound familiar to you - Lindsay
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Date: 1/27/2016 10:54:00 PM
It's always nice to get over influenza then suddenly go down with a bout of Australasia, Lindsay, appreciate your visits. I haven't had much time souping lately, lots going on, so I'm playing catch up. Regards, Viv
Date: 1/27/2016 2:00:00 PM
lovely spiritual write Mr Viv - its quite a challenging form - good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx7
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Date: 1/27/2016 11:11:00 PM
Yes, Jan, one of those styles that had me scribbling on bits of paper all over the house and through mealtimes to cobble it together. Thanks for the 7, Viv x
Date: 1/27/2016 6:53:00 AM
Lovely poem,Viv.
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Date: 1/27/2016 7:56:00 AM
Thanks, Daniel, an unfamiliar form for me, I sort of have to write it starting at the end, then jumping to the front, then linking it up in the middle. Lot's of scrap paper in the bin :) Regards, Viv
Date: 1/27/2016 6:10:00 AM
Powerful poem, Viv! PS. Did you mean "brought"? Hope it's alright here...Kim :-)
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Date: 1/27/2016 6:18:00 AM
Well spotted, Kim, you are a gem. Remind me never to compose verse whilst there is a three year old cat trying to knock my coffe over. Viv x
Date: 1/27/2016 4:33:00 AM
- The heart, the will and the conscience - A difficult balance - A great poem, Viv - Good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/27/2016 4:35:00 AM
Takk, Anne Lise. When I go to confession I have to take a packed lunch and a flask with me :) x
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