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I saw her sitting placidly on a wide stone Sucking sweet strawberries. She picked a fruit Pinching the leaves and sucked on the fruit. She was completely oblivious of me Despite that I was one of her regular buyers. A slight warm breeze flowed from a near by field. Rows and rows of plants with pods of broad beans Hanging from the stems, Young tender beans so sweet in flavour. I love the taste of unleavened bread, Saturated with strong olive oil, tomato paste, Capers and sliced olives and beans. A glass of beer would compliment all. The young woman now looked at me. I asked to buy some beans. We did not haggle. But I had to pick the pods myself! On my return I saw she still sucked strawberries. She stood up to receive the money. I stood still watching the red wet mouth. Impulsively I kissed her. She did not resist. She smiled and handed me a small container Full of lovely red strawberries. She smiled and sweetly said: Compliments of a kiss.

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Date: 2/15/2022 1:18:00 PM
Aw, very sweet moment, i'll bet those strawberries ended up being shared. Enjoyed.
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Date: 2/11/2022 12:03:00 PM
Your love stories my friend are full of exciting romance and passion, which you create with such intense imagination - a great write. Hugs blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 2/9/2022 11:48:00 PM
A lovely story you have written with amazing description and enchanting imagery, Victor:) excellent:)
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Date: 2/9/2022 2:53:00 PM
That’s so lovely Victor, there’s nothing so nice on the lips as a strawberry kiss. (sorry I haven’t been on site much, it’s been a most distressing time with Alan being so very ill, we’re still in dire straits)… Belle
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Date: 2/9/2022 4:47:00 AM
Strawberry enchantment....Delice
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Date: 2/8/2022 7:22:00 PM
So cute and sweet and full of imagery!
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Date: 2/8/2022 1:57:00 PM
Aw, though this pen left me a bit hungry, it was sweet.
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Date: 2/8/2022 8:14:00 AM
See, I never buy beans from pretty roadside vendors...I knew I was doing something wrong! Thank you Victor. Love it! Well done, Victor -- excellent writing! Joe.
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Date: 2/8/2022 6:50:00 AM
Victor Victor Victor - Beautiful and romantic too. Truly. I loved how you ended the entry with your title for that is an excellent poetic touch. Once again we are in the scene looking on with your vivid and clear words. This is poetry... Have a blessed day now and always. Remain safe and yes love and blessings always. (smile)
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Date: 2/7/2022 9:30:00 PM
Awe, so romantic.. Great verse, Victor. Blessings my friend and hope you have gotten well.
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Date: 2/7/2022 4:54:00 PM
(Smiles) … Ah! The wonders of fairyland!
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Date: 2/7/2022 3:23:00 PM
Victor, you are such a romantic. I Loved the story and last line "Compliments of a Kiss." Blessings ~ Debra
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Date: 2/7/2022 11:33:00 AM
Your marvelous imagery lends beauty to this sensuous romantic encounter, Victor. Love that last line. :)
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Date: 2/7/2022 6:10:00 AM
Victor, I truly loved the delectable enticement as it was so subtle and delicious. You have a flair for writing incredible romantic poems. I will remember this poem for its beauty and brilliance, as well as your fantastic narration ability.
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Date: 2/7/2022 5:05:00 AM
You write memorable poems Victor. Much enjoyed the sweet tease so tender and delightful. I remember this poem for its beauty and your gifted story telling skills.
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Date: 2/7/2022 4:24:00 AM
The deal is really good especially for you.... You got both the pleasure of kissing on her ruby red lips and having a handful of strawberries..... ! Enjoyed...
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Date: 2/7/2022 1:15:00 AM
Bet that made the strawberries taste even sweeter Victor. Tom
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