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Come Quickly Home

My darling, please come quickly home to me. I feel such longing when you are away. I miss how you embrace me tenderly. How sweet your kisses and the things you say! I’ve gone outside to see the moon’s first light, recalling our first kiss beneath its glow and how you gazed into my eyes that night. First star I see – my dear, I think you know the wish I’m making. Ease my worrying. Return the call I just made you, my dear, and tell me homeward that you’re hurrying, for I can barely wait to have you here. Once home, you can go back in the slow lane with lights down low, soft music and champagne! Written March 31, 2023

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Date: 4/3/2023 2:57:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. What a wonderful write/story/ending. Enjoy your win/day with blessings................
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Date: 4/3/2023 8:53:00 AM
So very tender and loving, Andrea. Many Congratulations to you!
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Date: 4/3/2023 3:25:00 AM
Andrea,excellent writing and thank you for sharing your poem with us in my Writing Challenge, congratulations!
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Date: 4/2/2023 8:47:00 PM
Waiting eager for the quick return of your beloved ! Beautifully romantic. Congratulations Andrea on your first place win.
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Date: 4/2/2023 4:09:00 PM
Sweet sentiments Andrea. Congratulations on your win! :)
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Date: 4/2/2023 2:43:00 PM
Beautiful, Andrea. Congrats on First place. God bless you always, Love, Gina
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Date: 4/2/2023 6:06:00 AM
Wonderful wishing, Andrea! p.s: soupmail:)
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Date: 4/1/2023 6:43:00 PM
Beautifully romantic, comforting. Love does not always have to be fireworks -- candles, a glass of wine, and the secure feeling of togetherness, just being held and gently rocked goes a long way. Blessings.
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Date: 4/1/2023 4:08:00 PM
such a delightful limn....and on all my favorite subjects, longing, love, devotion....it just does not get any better
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Date: 4/1/2023 1:38:00 PM
Well rendered, Andrea. My kind of slow lane:)
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Date: 4/1/2023 11:46:00 AM
WoW! Andrea, What a lovely and touching entry for the contest theme. Best wishes in the contest. Have a great day and weekend:-) Alexis
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