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I want this cold Winter to be over- longing to hear all the little birds sing; just love beautiful Spring with skies azure, I wish to be in forests green ambling; and dipping my toes in a stream babbling, and picking the wild flowers unfolding. Over the meadows wild the north winds fly- making all the small white daisies tremble, Summer is knocking- Spring I say goodbye; I do enjoy hot steamy days blissful, and bright red roses hanging so graceful; and butterflies in my garden jungle. All the trees lay down their emerald gowns- there is a great whirling of gold and red, all the Fall leaves are now crinkled browns; migrating birds fly high with their wings spread, and rain is falling on my garden dead; and Winter is coming soon- that I dread. How pretty the first filigree snowflakes, soon, I will be making Christmas fruitcakes! ______________________ January 20, 2018 Poetry/Sonnet/Come, Come Sweet Seasons Copyright Protected, ID 18-9850-01-01 All Rights Reserved. Written Under Pseudonym. Written for the contest, Urban Sonnet sponsor, Laura Loo Second Place

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Date: 2/21/2018 9:38:00 AM
great imagery sweet lady, beautifully expressed as always! thank you and congrats :)-luloo
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Date: 2/20/2018 11:27:00 AM
Something beautiful in all the seasons, congratulations BW...
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Date: 2/20/2018 9:35:00 AM
Awesome imagery. Congrats on your well deserved win, BW.
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Date: 1/21/2018 8:26:00 AM
This is a beautiful write. You put emotion into every word and that makes me think of the imagery deeper.
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Date: 1/25/2018 11:43:00 AM
James, thank you. I like to think it is beautiful and emotional and readers will love it !
Date: 1/21/2018 7:38:00 AM
I enjoyed reading this beautiful poem..full of imagery and longing..well written..best for a win.
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Date: 1/25/2018 11:45:00 AM
Vijay, thank you. Yes, I was and am full of longing for the winter season to end in Canada, yet at the same time each season has its beauty and its flaws and in truth I love each one.
Date: 1/21/2018 5:06:00 AM
Lovely imagery, BW...Soon your wish of Spring will come true...All the best
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Date: 1/25/2018 11:47:00 AM
Arturo, thank you. The Canadian winter is getting me down, we are half way through it so there is hope on the way, although sometimes winter can be quite beautiful.
Date: 1/20/2018 5:54:00 PM
Me, too!!!
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Date: 1/25/2018 11:48:00 AM
Sunlite, lol, not just us, many !

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