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Come, Come Sweet Seasons

 
I want this cold Winter to be over- longing to hear all the little birds sing; just love beautiful Spring with skies azure, I wish to be in forests green ambling; and dipping my toes in a stream babbling, and picking the wild flowers unfolding. Over the meadows wild the north winds fly- making all the small white daisies tremble, Summer is knocking- Spring I say goodbye; I do enjoy hot steamy days blissful, and bright red roses hanging so graceful; and butterflies in my garden jungle. All the trees lay down their emerald gowns- there is a great whirling of gold and red, all the Fall leaves are now crinkled browns; migrating birds fly high with their wings spread, and rain is falling on my garden dead; and Winter is coming soon- that I dread. How pretty the first filigree snowflakes, soon, I will be making Christmas fruitcakes! ______________________ January 20, 2018 Poetry/Sonnet/Come, Come Sweet Seasons Copyright Protected, ID 18-9850-01-01 All Rights Reserved. Written Under Pseudonym. Written for the contest, Urban Sonnet sponsor, Laura Loo Second Place
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Scars Avatar
February 21, 2018 at 9:38 AM
great imagery sweet lady, beautifully expressed as always! thank you and congrats :)-luloo
Smith Avatar
February 20, 2018 at 11:27 AM
Something beautiful in all the seasons, congratulations BW...
Gauthier Avatar
February 20, 2018 at 9:35 AM
Awesome imagery. Congrats on your well deserved win, BW.
Swartz Avatar
January 21, 2018 at 8:26 AM
This is a beautiful write. You put emotion into every word and that makes me think of the imagery deeper.
La France Avatar
January 25, 2018 at 11:43 AM
James, thank you. I like to think it is beautiful and emotional and readers will love it !
Pandit Avatar
January 21, 2018 at 7:38 AM
I enjoyed reading this beautiful poem..full of imagery and longing..well written..best for a win.
La France Avatar
January 25, 2018 at 11:45 AM
Vijay, thank you. Yes, I was and am full of longing for the winter season to end in Canada, yet at the same time each season has its beauty and its flaws and in truth I love each one.
Michael Avatar
January 21, 2018 at 5:06 AM
Lovely imagery, BW...Soon your wish of Spring will come true...All the best
La France Avatar
January 25, 2018 at 11:47 AM
Arturo, thank you. The Canadian winter is getting me down, we are half way through it so there is hope on the way, although sometimes winter can be quite beautiful.
Wanter Avatar
January 20, 2018 at 5:54 PM
Me, too!!!
La France Avatar
January 25, 2018 at 11:48 AM
Sunlite, lol, not just us, many !
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