Clouds

When days were young, my love and I
would search the clouds for faces.
On pillowed grass, we two would lie.

The clouds today may hold traces
of a love that was paused in time,
then vanished to unknown places.

Forgotten now, like poet's rhyme,
I search for faces in the clouds
a friend, a child--how clouds can mime!

Among the blue, are foamy crowds--
faces of those I used to know.
But that one face is not allowed.

Aimless, perhaps, but we below
see clouds forming a quaint tableau.

March 3, 2023
for "Each Passing Cloud" contest
by JCB Brul
First Place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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George Avatar
March 26, 2023 at 8:49 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved first place win, dear Ann !
Agustin Avatar
March 19, 2023 at 8:05 PM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this, delightful and delighting from the start till the end. God bless you.
Peck Avatar
March 20, 2023 at 9:05 AM
Thank you so much, Beata!
Roper Avatar
March 18, 2023 at 7:50 PM
Great imagery and feel in your verse; enjoyed reading. Congratulations on your win in JCB Brul's contest.
Peck Avatar
March 20, 2023 at 9:06 AM
Thanks so much, Eve!
Lillico  Avatar
March 18, 2023 at 1:24 PM
Congrats! We resonate on faces, mine are from fauna, still counts:)
Peck Avatar
March 20, 2023 at 9:08 AM
Absolutely! I love fauna, too! Thanks, Margarita! :)
Goldsmith Avatar
March 18, 2023 at 9:24 AM
Congratulations on your win. Your "Clouds" write tells a wonderful story. Have a blessed day/weekend.........................
Peck Avatar
March 18, 2023 at 12:53 PM
Thank you, dear Paula, for your kind comments! :)
Turner Avatar
March 18, 2023 at 8:57 AM
Congratulations Ann on your winning write:)
Peck Avatar
March 18, 2023 at 12:51 PM
Dear Daniel, Thanks so much for your congrats!
George Avatar
March 8, 2023 at 7:44 PM
The 'tableau' by the clouds is delightful to watch . This is a lovely entry for the contest. Ann, wish you best of luck.
Peck Avatar
March 13, 2023 at 9:52 AM
Thanks so much for commenting, dear Valsa.
Faulkner Avatar
March 5, 2023 at 3:16 PM
This is such a graceful terza rima, the memories we can find when we seek the clouds, this is so inspiring~
Peck Avatar
March 6, 2023 at 8:37 AM
Your comments are so lovely, Michelle. I love the way terza rima flows.
Wolf Avatar
March 4, 2023 at 8:15 PM
Loved (and still love) to do this. My sister thought I was crazy. (Still does...). Thanks for the memories, Ann. :) gw
Peck Avatar
March 5, 2023 at 11:03 AM
You're so funny, Gershon! I love to search the clouds, too. Thanks for commenting.:)
Buhagiar Avatar
March 4, 2023 at 1:56 AM
Loved your poem, Ann. When we were young we too tried to compare clouds with faces.
Peck Avatar
March 4, 2023 at 9:43 AM
I still do :) Thanks, Victor!
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