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Clouds

When days were young, my love and I would search the clouds for faces. On pillowed grass, we two would lie. The clouds today may hold traces of a love that was paused in time, then vanished to unknown places. Forgotten now, like poet's rhyme, I search for faces in the clouds a friend, a child--how clouds can mime! Among the blue, are foamy crowds-- faces of those I used to know. But that one face is not allowed. Aimless, perhaps, but we below see clouds forming a quaint tableau. March 3, 2023 for "Each Passing Cloud" contest by JCB Brul First Place

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Date: 3/26/2023 8:49:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved first place win, dear Ann !
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Date: 3/19/2023 8:05:00 PM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this, delightful and delighting from the start till the end. God bless you.
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Ann Peck
Date: 3/20/2023 9:05:00 AM
Thank you so much, Beata!
Date: 3/18/2023 7:50:00 PM
Great imagery and feel in your verse; enjoyed reading. Congratulations on your win in JCB Brul's contest.
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Ann Peck
Date: 3/20/2023 9:06:00 AM
Thanks so much, Eve!
Date: 3/18/2023 1:24:00 PM
Congrats! We resonate on faces, mine are from fauna, still counts:)
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Ann Peck
Date: 3/20/2023 9:08:00 AM
Absolutely! I love fauna, too! Thanks, Margarita! :)
Date: 3/18/2023 9:24:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. Your "Clouds" write tells a wonderful story. Have a blessed day/weekend.........................
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Ann Peck
Date: 3/18/2023 12:53:00 PM
Thank you, dear Paula, for your kind comments! :)
Date: 3/18/2023 8:57:00 AM
Congratulations Ann on your winning write:)
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Ann Peck
Date: 3/18/2023 12:51:00 PM
Dear Daniel, Thanks so much for your congrats!
Date: 3/8/2023 7:44:00 PM
The 'tableau' by the clouds is delightful to watch . This is a lovely entry for the contest. Ann, wish you best of luck.
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Ann Peck
Date: 3/13/2023 9:52:00 AM
Thanks so much for commenting, dear Valsa.
Date: 3/5/2023 3:16:00 PM
This is such a graceful terza rima, the memories we can find when we seek the clouds, this is so inspiring~
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Ann Peck
Date: 3/6/2023 8:37:00 AM
Your comments are so lovely, Michelle. I love the way terza rima flows.
Date: 3/4/2023 8:15:00 PM
Loved (and still love) to do this. My sister thought I was crazy. (Still does...). Thanks for the memories, Ann. :) gw
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Ann Peck
Date: 3/5/2023 11:03:00 AM
You're so funny, Gershon! I love to search the clouds, too. Thanks for commenting.:)
Date: 3/4/2023 1:56:00 AM
Loved your poem, Ann. When we were young we too tried to compare clouds with faces.
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Ann Peck
Date: 3/4/2023 9:43:00 AM
I still do :) Thanks, Victor!

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