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Cloud Watching

Cloud Watching Grass tickling your neck white pillows across the sky Your own gallery

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Gail Debole

Date: 11/3/2012 1:38:00 PM

Very nice...congrats on your featured poem!

Sandra Adams

Date: 10/30/2012 7:22:00 PM

i love seeing things in the clouds...good one...congrats on being featured!

Daver Austin

Date: 10/30/2012 12:31:00 PM

A beautifully laid out laying out. Congrats on the selection. daver

Vassilis Comporozos

Date: 10/30/2012 2:20:00 AM

Wow!! Waht else to say, Check my haikus, please, if you can. Can I post it on my blog fryktorein.blogspot.gr?

Robin L. Gass

Date: 11/25/2008 7:35:00 PM

What a beautiful picture. The snow is falling outside but now I have a summer day. Thank you. Best wishes, Robin

Vince Suzadail Jr.

Date: 11/19/2008 2:16:00 PM

Took me back to my teen years and lying on our baseball field, sometimes in he sun, watching clouds, and sometimes at night, stargazing. Vince

Daver Austin

Date: 11/11/2008 1:57:00 PM

Super, Barb! Love, daver

Michael Degenhardt

Date: 11/11/2008 8:06:00 AM

The form is perfect as is the imagery and recollection of youth you've created. I recall many days lying on my back watching the clouds. Very well written. Michael

Jim Wilson

Date: 11/10/2008 3:32:00 PM

Very enjoyable, Barbara. You've captured an experience that is nearly universal. (P.S. Thanks for all the kind comments you have made on my poems.)

Lisa Cooper

Date: 11/10/2008 8:29:00 AM

great haiku, great imagery, reminds me of lazy summer afternoons as a kid

Sean Kelly

Date: 11/10/2008 8:08:00 AM

Great haiku , in perfect visual form , Barbara ...

Carrie Richards

Date: 11/9/2008 7:07:00 PM

Beautiful image...beneath the cloudy sky...looking at the pictures that clouds will make! Lovely haiku! :) Carrie

Michael Torres

Date: 11/9/2008 5:04:00 PM

Barbara this is wonderful. I love this. this is so clever. My father loves to paint so I can really relate to this. Exceptional creativity. Please comment on my poems would love your poetic insight. God bless you Michael Torres

Date: 11/9/2008 4:45:00 PM

Love the serene scene you paint here. I really like the last line--which is a nice perseption of cloud watching. Enjoyed this one. Thank you for sharing it and for your kind words regarding my poem. Karen

Michael Jordan

Date: 11/9/2008 4:27:00 PM

You have described a very peaceful scene in a very beautiful way - Fantastic haiku Barbara, God Bless