Christmas Walk

He’ll take a walk on Christmas day
pass by the hill where children sleigh;
then pause to hear them laugh and cheer.
He can still hear them loud and clear;
though long since now, they passed away.

On frozen lake, an ice ballet,
a beau gives out a red bouquet.
To relive times when she was here;
he’ll take a walk

Fondly recalls, with mirth, when they
gave him the yellow snow sorbet;
the rascals did it year on year!
He wipes away a frozen tear;
to recollect, on Christmas day
he’ll take a walk.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Delaney Avatar
December 16, 2023 at 4:47 AM
Rondeau is the perfect form for these fond recollections, Terry: Another Christmas nearly here. I wish you well. SuZ
Miller Avatar
January 5, 2024 at 9:37 AM
Thank you SuZ and a Happy New Year to you.
La France Avatar
December 15, 2023 at 4:28 PM
Terry, beautiful memories that bring a tear, congratulations on your win in my Christmas contest, Constance
Miller Avatar
December 16, 2023 at 3:35 AM
Thank you Constance for your kind words
Volumes Avatar
December 11, 2023 at 1:37 AM
Oh Terry this made me all misty. Your words evoke such feeling, Christmas can be a wonderful day, but a lonely day for some. I truly love this. A fave . Thanks Terry.
Miller Avatar
December 13, 2023 at 7:29 AM
Thank you SV
Baker Avatar
December 10, 2023 at 9:17 AM
A dramatic and emotion filled poem, Terry. Isn't it intriguing how the tragedies in our lives can bless us through pleasant memories of those we've lost. I mindful things you chose to do on a Christmas day, my friend. A win-win in the end. Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year! A poet friend in Texas, Bill
Miller Avatar
December 13, 2023 at 7:29 AM
Thank you Bill have a great festive season yourself.
Goldsmith Avatar
December 9, 2023 at 9:18 AM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful "Christmas Walk" write. Have a wonderful day/weekend.................
Miller Avatar
December 13, 2023 at 7:30 AM
Thank you Paula. Have a great day yourself.
Kauffman Avatar
December 8, 2023 at 12:51 PM
So beautifully pensive, Terry. Tears mingled with happy memories. There is saying among skiers "don't eat the yellow snow!" I love the sense of mischief in this poem. There is a pensive sweetness in your words - longing mixed memory. Best wishes for a win! Blessings!
Miller Avatar
December 13, 2023 at 7:30 AM
Thank you Sam
Cunningham Avatar
December 4, 2023 at 8:59 PM
Quite an emotional time Terry, Christmas, You always look back at happier times when your loved ones were still alive. Tom
Miller Avatar
December 13, 2023 at 7:31 AM
Thank you Tom.
Rodrigues Avatar
December 4, 2023 at 12:32 PM
Wonderful memory! Yellow snow doesn’t sound pleasant…
Miller Avatar
December 13, 2023 at 7:31 AM
Thank you Kim, yes don't eat the yellow snow.
Slaughter Avatar
December 4, 2023 at 10:29 AM
What a lovely walk that will be, Terry. A most enjoyable read.
Miller Avatar
December 13, 2023 at 7:31 AM
Thank you Jim
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace