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Chocolate Bliss Cake

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The beauty of Haiku lies in its ability to capture fleeting moments, emotions, and sensations in just a few short lines. With my chocolate Haiku, I hope to express the sensory experience and emotional connection chocolate brings to my life and, perhaps, yours. So, the next time you find yourself savoring a piece of chocolate, take a moment to reflect on its rich flavors and the emotions it stirs within you. Maybe, you'll be inspired to pen your own Haiku, capturing the essence of this delectable treat in just three lines. After all, Haiku is a celebration of life's simple pleasures, and what better way to celebrate than through the divine world of chocolate. mug clasped in my hands chocolate warmth caresses winter's chill departs nighttime reverie cocoa rivers flow freely savoring sweet dreams

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Paige Hind

Date: 12/27/2023 6:15:00 PM

I love chocalate, too! MMMM...I can taste the cocoa.

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 12/28/2023 4:41:00 AM

I can too. :-) smiles, Sara

Bill Baker

Date: 12/26/2023 6:45:00 PM

A very sweet Haibun by a very sweet poet. Thank for the chocolate dreams tonight my love. Hugs, Bill

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 12/27/2023 4:44:00 PM

awww, thank you. Let's go on a chocolate date soon, maybe to Dairy Queen, hugs, me

Jay Narain

Date: 12/26/2023 10:53:00 AM

I like chocolate in drinks, candy bars and in any form. Nicely penned.

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 12/26/2023 5:07:00 PM

ah, good for you. I love anything chocolate, except chocolate covered crickets...I have to draw the line somewhere, right? smiles...have a great evening, Sara

Silent One

Date: 12/26/2023 10:38:00 AM

That looks so yummy.. Love it!

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 12/26/2023 5:07:00 PM

thank you, Silent One!

Judy Ball

Date: 12/26/2023 2:59:00 AM

Oh Nice One Sara. Great job here. God Bless and Merry Christmas and a much blessed New Year, JB

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 12/26/2023 3:52:00 AM

thank you, Judy, for your visit and blessings. Wishing you a splendid New Year as well, Sara

Hiya Sharma

Date: 12/26/2023 2:25:00 AM

Those haiku poems are absolutely rich delights of chocolate-heaven!! What a magical haibun dear Sara, this instantly made me crave for chocolates.. mmm.. chocolate lava, truffle, velvet cake.. woww..You really own the throne for writing best haibuns and haiku poems, always enchanting my heart with their vivid imageries and gorgeous wordplay! "chocolate warmth caresses", "nighttime reverie cocoa rivers flow freely" How beautiful! Merry Christmas, I hope you had a lovely time! :) sending light

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 12/26/2023 3:54:00 AM

thank you, 'sweet' Hiya, for your delightful and supportive comments. I'm grateful for you and your words, always. Hope you have a wonderful day and joyous new year ahead, hugs Sara

Ink Empress

Date: 12/25/2023 10:14:00 PM

Absolutely stunning haibun this is and as a chocolate lover i love this! For me you are one of them that writes haibuns and haiku do well and leaves me in awe mesmerized by what you describe. Queen you definitely are. And i love the way you’ve written “ nighttime reverie” and also “ cocoa rivers flow freely” ah! How beautiful and the picture goes so well. Now i need some chocolate cake, hope christmas went well sweet sara, sending you light always. Pleasure always reading your work.

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 12/26/2023 3:59:00 AM

thank you, dear Ink, for your kind comments...I'm grateful you enjoy my Haibun/Haiku combos. I'll happily wear the crown :-) I hope you got your chocolate fix last night. I drank too much from the cocoa river yesterday, but had a delightful holiday...hope you did as well. Happy New Year, hugs, Sara

Valsa George

Date: 12/25/2023 7:57:00 PM

This is so beautiful dear Sara. Needless to say that I love your haibuns with beautiful haikus. On this Christmas day, this is indeed a chocolate delight. Truly I savor its delectable taste and a cocoa river is flowing through my mouth!

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 12/26/2023 3:57:00 AM

I appreciate your visit, Valsa, and for your 'chocolatey' comments. I'm grateful you enjoy my Haibuns/Haikus. I drank too much from the cocoa river yesterday :-) Smiles & Happy New Year, hugs, Sara

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 12/26/2023 3:57:00 AM

I appreciate your visit, Valsa, and for your 'chocolatey' comments. I'm grateful you enjoy my Haibuns/Haikus. I drank too much from the cocoa river yesterday :-) Smiles & Happy New Year, hugs, Sara

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 12/26/2023 3:57:00 AM

I appreciate your visit, Valsa, and for your 'chocolatey' comments. I'm grateful you enjoy my Haibuns/Haikus. I drank too much from the cocoa river yesterday :-) Smiles & Happy New Year, hugs, Sara

Gershon Wolf

Date: 12/25/2023 6:08:00 PM

Oh for those cocoa rivers. (Love that expression). Merry Xmas.

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 12/26/2023 3:57:00 AM

I think I drank too much from the 'cocoa rivers' yesterday...seems as if chocolate was everywhere :-) Hope you had a splendid holiday, Sara

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 12/26/2023 3:55:00 AM

I think I drank too much from the 'cocoa rivers' yesterday...seems as if chocolate was everywhere :-) Hope you had a splendid holiday, Sara

Abdullah Alhemaidy

Date: 12/25/2023 6:04:00 PM

Sweet Haibun like chocolate, I love simple pleasures. Have a great day ~AA

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 12/26/2023 3:54:00 AM

thank you, me too! Wishing you a fabulous week, Sara