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Charmed Slumber

In the midst of midnight twilight sleep meekly fades in the moonlight. Umber earth and men encumber, nature’s chatter, charmed in slumber. Tranquil dreams of peace, no sorrow, thankful for light of tomorrow. Epic heartbeats waves break away warm cinders soothe the moment stay. Date: 11/7/2018

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Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 11/17/2018 7:03:00 PM

Congratulations on your win, Eve!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/15/2018 8:04:00 PM

So enchantingly soothing, Eve. A gem.

Janice Canerdy

Date: 11/12/2018 11:45:00 PM

Soothing, appealing--well-written, Eve! Janice

Janice Canerdy

Date: 11/12/2018 11:45:00 PM

Soothing, appealing--well-written, Eve! Janice

Vladislav Raven

Date: 11/12/2018 4:07:00 PM

Hi Eve, dropping by with my congratulations on the win with this wonderful piece. Have a wonderful Tuesday. Hugs....Mike. XX

Constance La France

Date: 11/12/2018 4:07:00 PM

Eve, very nice, I like your poem a lot, best of luck in the contest ~

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 11/12/2018 12:38:00 AM

Excellent and beautifully penned. All the best for contest.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 11/11/2018 7:35:00 PM

Just gorgeous in its rhythmic charm and surreal feel, Eve. Congrats on a wonderful win in the contest. Best wishes, Gershon

Line Gauthier

Date: 11/11/2018 7:15:00 PM

Congrats on your top win, Eve. Well done.

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 11/10/2018 4:37:00 PM

Love this charming lullaby, good luck in the contest!

Arthur Vaso

Date: 11/10/2018 12:02:00 AM

Very soothing poem Eve!

Judy Ball

Date: 11/9/2018 5:26:00 PM

Makes me think of waking in y nice warm bed and not having to get up until I'm ready. Nice job. God Bless, JB

Laura Leiser

Date: 11/9/2018 3:36:00 PM

Your poem creates such a calming effect and is lovely, Eve! Good luck in the contest! :)

Jack Horne

Date: 11/9/2018 2:38:00 PM

oh, really love this

Joanna Daniel

Date: 11/9/2018 8:24:00 AM

This is a lovely little poem, Eve:)

Vladislav Raven

Date: 11/9/2018 8:20:00 AM

Hi Eve, this is such a romantic little gem you have written, in the solitude of night, "Charmed Slumber." Your gentle words lead the reader through a most excellent write. Wishing you all the best in the contest Eve. Have a wonderful Friday. Hugs....Mike. XX

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 11/9/2018 5:03:00 AM

Your poem has a surreal, romantic quality to it, Eve. You had me thinking of "Midsummer Night's Dream." I haven't looked at the contest rules, but this is quite a lovely entry. Wishing you success! Hugs, Carolyn