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Charmed Slumber

In the midst of midnight twilight 
sleep meekly fades in the moonlight. 
Umber earth and men encumber, 
nature’s chatter, charmed in slumber.
Tranquil dreams of peace, no sorrow, 
thankful for light of tomorrow.
Epic heartbeats waves break away 
warm cinders soothe the moment stay.


 
Date: 11/7/2018

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Carolyn Devonshire Date: 11/17/2018 7:03:00 PM Congratulations on your win, Eve! Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 11/15/2018 8:04:00 PM So enchantingly soothing, Eve. A gem. Login to Reply

Janice Canerdy Date: 11/12/2018 11:45:00 PM Soothing, appealing--well-written, Eve! Janice Login to Reply

Janice Canerdy Date: 11/12/2018 11:45:00 PM Soothing, appealing--well-written, Eve! Janice Login to Reply

Vladislav Raven Date: 11/12/2018 4:07:00 PM Hi Eve, dropping by with my congratulations on the win with this wonderful piece. Have a wonderful Tuesday. Hugs....Mike. XX Login to Reply

Constance La France Date: 11/12/2018 4:07:00 PM Eve, very nice, I like your poem a lot, best of luck in the contest ~ Login to Reply

Ravi Sathasivam Date: 11/12/2018 12:38:00 AM Excellent and beautifully penned. All the best for contest. Login to Reply

Gershon Wolf Date: 11/11/2018 7:35:00 PM Just gorgeous in its rhythmic charm and surreal feel, Eve. Congrats on a wonderful win in the contest. Best wishes, Gershon Login to Reply

Line Gauthier Date: 11/11/2018 7:15:00 PM Congrats on your top win, Eve. Well done. Login to Reply

Michelle Faulkner Date: 11/10/2018 4:37:00 PM Love this charming lullaby, good luck in the contest! Login to Reply

Arthur Vaso Date: 11/10/2018 12:02:00 AM Very soothing poem Eve! Login to Reply

Judy Ball Date: 11/9/2018 5:26:00 PM Makes me think of waking in y nice warm bed and not having to get up until I'm ready. Nice job. God Bless, JB Login to Reply

Laura Leiser Date: 11/9/2018 3:36:00 PM Your poem creates such a calming effect and is lovely, Eve! Good luck in the contest! :) Login to Reply

Jack Horne Date: 11/9/2018 2:38:00 PM oh, really love this Login to Reply

Joanna Daniel Date: 11/9/2018 8:24:00 AM This is a lovely little poem, Eve:) Login to Reply

Vladislav Raven Date: 11/9/2018 8:20:00 AM Hi Eve, this is such a romantic little gem you have written, in the solitude of night, "Charmed Slumber." Your gentle words lead the reader through a most excellent write. Wishing you all the best in the contest Eve. Have a wonderful Friday. Hugs....Mike. XX Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 11/9/2018 5:03:00 AM Your poem has a surreal, romantic quality to it, Eve. You had me thinking of "Midsummer Night's Dream." I haven't looked at the contest rules, but this is quite a lovely entry. Wishing you success! Hugs, Carolyn Login to Reply

Mark Elam Date: 11/8/2018 4:09:00 PM A soft beautiful flow. Thanks. Login to Reply

Chris Green Date: 11/8/2018 1:14:00 PM Really nice Eve. Your poem has a comforting soft feel to it. Best of luck in the contest Login to Reply

Constance La France Date: 11/8/2018 6:47:00 AM Eve, such a tranquil poem, lovely and best of luck in the contest ~ Login to Reply

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 11/8/2018 3:03:00 AM - A beautiful writing, Eve :) - Good luck in the contest - Best wishes for a lovely day :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply

Tom Cunningham Date: 11/8/2018 1:47:00 AM You wrote this well Eve, not easy given you can only use eight per line.It's like a double hakiu. Good luck. Tom. Login to Reply